MriAra: First Rain ||update PG 13 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

"I know you must be glued to your radio to know what happened next."

"So as I wanted to see her enjoying getting drenched, I was riding the bike slowly and my attention was on her. As it is said love is blind, so was I. I landed up with my bike in one of the pits on the road which was large enough to accommodate a bike at a time, and so some water entered the silencer of my bike and it stopped immediately. Thanks to the boys standing there who helped me get my bike out of the pit. I kicked to start it but as my bike's silencer was drunk, it was impossible for me to wake my drunken buddy. Next song for my drunken buddy"


~Sawan ka mahina pawan kare shor

Jiyara re jhume aise jaise ban ma nache more~


"He is so funny." said Tara, biting her nails.


Her mind was thinking about what Meethi said and was trying to make the link.


She was pretending to be normal but after hearing that the RJ's bike too stopped the way that man's had stopped, her mind was trying not to link these events but her mind was also not able to ignore what Meethi said and what circumstances were saying.


The song ended.


"Hey friends this is your RJ Neil saying what happened with him. As my bike stopped I parked it on the side of the road and started walking towards the nearest shade. When I was moving in, it started raining heavily. She was still standing there out in the rain. I didn't want to disturb her but when I saw her bag, I thought as this woman seems too immersed in enjoying, possibly she forgot to keep her bag away. So I dared to disturb her and said to protect her bag from the rain. As I said I dared, I really mean it. She was very angry at me for disturbing her sweet enjoyment. Little did she know that to me disturbing her was like disturbing my best moment. Her furious eyes said how angry she was at me. To protect myself from her anger, I smiled and moved under a shop's shade. To know more about what happened, catch me after this song."

~Ek ladki bheegi bhagi si

Soti rato mein jagi si

Mili ek ajnabi se

Koi aage naa piche

Tum hi kaho ye Koi baat hai~

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Editing ⭐️ Shaina⭐️
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Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Nice update...πŸ‘
Songs are suitable for the situation...😊
He was in dreamy world...
Eagerly waiting for next update...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Poor Neil ran his bike into a pit as he was watching her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

His drunken buddy the bike's silencer was hilarious!!!!🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

The song is very nice and suits the situation!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara is now linking RJ Neil's story and what happened to her on the road as both are sounding the same!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Neil was lost in his dream world but he still thought of saving her bag!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and just perfect for them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Waiting to know Tara's reaction!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘





Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Again superb update!!!!!πŸ‘
Drunken silencer was hullariousπŸ˜†

Good to know now Tara is thinking abt what happened & how

You know I was wondering how u forget abt "bheegi bhagi si song" but this time u usedπŸ‘πŸΌ


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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Im loving it archu!!! Just can't wait to know Tara's reaction!!
Edited by mastaTmohi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Wow...this update is so nice...
Tara is now confused...
The story of this Rj Neil and what happened to her on the road are sounding the same.
Now I want to know Tara's reaction.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Hey I am new to this Forum.

Loved ur story!!!!!

The whole sequence of Taara meeting Neil and now he is telling this story on Radio seems interesting...

Meethi is right and now Taara thinks too the same ki kahin ye vo to nahi...

Do update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sohag

Nice update...πŸ‘
Songs are suitable for the situation...😊
He was in dreamy world...
Eagerly waiting for next update...πŸ˜ƒ



Thanks dear 😳 πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

He was in dreamy world and our Tara is in trouble world πŸ˜†


updating😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Poor Neil ran his bike into a pit as he was watching her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
hehehe...pyar andha hota hai.πŸ˜‰

His drunken buddy the bike's silencer was hilarious!!!!🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣
hehehe...thanks πŸ˜† he is RJ what else we can expect from him πŸ˜‰

The song is very nice and suits the situation!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Thanks😳

Tara is now linking RJ Neil's story and what happened to her on the road as both are sounding the same!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
yes πŸ˜ƒ

Neil was lost in his dream world but he still thought of saving her bag!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, as Meethi said he is responsible person😊

The song is very nice and just perfect for them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Thanks 😳

Waiting to know Tara's reaction!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘







Thank U 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kumari27

Again superb update!!!!!πŸ‘

Drunken silencer was hullariousπŸ˜†

Good to know now Tara is thinking abt what happened & how

You know I was wondering how u forget abt "bheegi bhagi si song" but this time u usedπŸ‘πŸΌ




Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ

drunken silencer hehehe...he is RJ and that's the way they talk πŸ˜‰

Yes Tara is thinking πŸ˜ƒ

Glad to know remembered that songπŸ˜ƒ I was waiting for situation to be appropriate for that song 😊

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