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Posted: 6 years ago

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai

Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Sab se chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai

Pyaar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai

Itna pyaar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai~




Mohabat na howi nal ka pani ho gaya jo barsa dena or sawan ka muhabat say kiya lena dena.

mosam just garmi sardi bahar or khiza ka hota hai ye milny ka kon sa new mosam peda ho gaya. πŸ˜†

abhi ulty sedhy kaam chupchua k hi hon gaye sab k samany seeny say lagaya toh jooty bhi par sakty hain. πŸ˜‰

Pyaar hi esa kis kaam ka jis mein koi haad hi na ho. πŸ˜†

dikh raha hai k pheli baar dimagh kharab howa hai. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

"Tara, how do you know about his bike? You asked him?" asked Meethi teasing Tara.


"No, no, no, who cares what happened to him or to his bike! I heard him saying this to someone on the phone. Poor he! He was getting late for his office. I think he must have reached late for his work," said Tara, stretching her legs.


After a pause she said, "He was not that bad as he was ready to give his umbrella to me. But I refused because I didn't want any kind of help from him. Because I know how these boys are. First they help and then they ask for phone number and then they try to become your boyfriend and then..."


"Stop Tara," Meethi interrupted Tara. "You are taking his action in some other direction. He was just trying to help you as it was getting darker. Did he ask for your number?"


"He didn't ask, but if I would have accepted that umbrella then also how would I have returned him his umbrella without his phone number? Then to return him the umbrella I would have to talk to him and meet him again. And meeting him one time was enough for me," Tara tried to justify herself.

The radio:


~Sawan barse tarse dil kyun naa nikle ghar se dil


Barkha mein bhi dil pyaasa hai, yeh pyaar nahi toh kya hai~


"He was that bad looking?" Meethi again teased Tara.


"Who knows?" Tara replied carelessly.


"Come on Tara. A man was standing next to you and you say who knows?" Meethi was not in the mood to leave Tara so easily.


To stop Meethi from teasing and let her enjoy her show peacefully, she said, "He was tall, broad shouldered, long hair, in shorts, had a perfect body. He was wearing a white shirt. His helmet was of a sports bike and before you ask anything about his bike, I want to clarify that I didn't see it and now please stop talking about him."


Meethi was grinning seeing Tara talk about him. Meethi wanted to say something but seeing Tara watching her grinning, she stopped as Tara was very angry.

~Sawan barse tarse dil kyun naa nikle ghar se dil~

The song ended.


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Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️

Next update on page 7


Nice part. 😊
beautiful written. πŸ‘πŸ‘

good job editor Shaina ji.πŸ‘
Story kafi achi hai.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Part 3
Lovely update!!!πŸ˜› πŸ‘ ❀️
ye bike wala guy kahi tara ke favourite show ka rj to nahi !!!πŸ˜›

Tara ne kya described kiya hai uss guy ko woh bhi without any notice or any intrest!!!πŸ˜‰



Bina dekheaisa describe kiya, too dekhti tooo... πŸ˜‰

Thanks for loving and commenting πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

PART 4

Lovely update!!!πŸ˜› πŸ‘ ❀️
Thank you 😳

Lovely songs my favourite too!!!πŸ˜› πŸ‘ ❀️
Awesome! πŸ˜ƒ

RJ Neil had also met a girl today chalo ye to conferm ho gaya that the guy whom Tara had met today was Neil!!! πŸ˜›
Yup! πŸ˜ƒ

tara ne to notice hi nahi kiya uss guy ko as she said but Neil ne to bade achchhe se notice kiya tara ko!!! πŸ˜›
yes, kuch zaayad detail mein πŸ˜‰


I am glad you enjoyed reading it πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks for reading and commenting πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Part 5
Lovely & beautiful update!!!πŸ˜› πŸ‘ ❀️
Lovely songs!!!πŸ˜› πŸ‘ ❀️

ab tara kya karegi?


Thanks for reading and commenting πŸ˜ƒ

I am glad you loved the song πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Part 6
Awesome lovely & beautiful update!!!πŸ˜› πŸ‘ ❀️
Lovely songs!!!πŸ˜› πŸ‘ ❀️



I am glad you enjoyed reading πŸ˜ƒ

Thank you for commentπŸ˜ƒ

Yes, songs are lovely😊
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Last Part

Awesome lovely & beautiful update!!!πŸ˜› πŸ‘ ❀️

Lovely songs!!!πŸ˜› πŸ‘ ❀️

yaar khatm ho gaya aur pata bhi nahi chala you know what maine ek sath hi sare part padh dale & just loved them!!!

Thanks for this lovely & cute short story!!!πŸ˜› ❀️ πŸ˜›


Thanks for loving it soo muchπŸ€—

I agree songs are lovely😊

Yes, It was short and sweet


Thank you for reading and commenting❀️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ronshaan

Hii

Subject sounds nice..

will read n comment soon

thanks.


I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ronshaan

OK i read part one and it was good.

Why tara is angry... Let's seeπŸ˜‰


Thanks for reading!


I hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing itπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 5 years ago

Reply for part one:-

Very good start πŸ‘

I read it many times ago but couldn't comment so sorry for that.

Tara is irritated because of a stranger but she will be surprised to know who he is soon. πŸ˜‰

Meethi is really excited to know what happened with Tara. πŸ˜’

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