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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 7


As the song ended, Meethi exclaimed "Eureka!"

"Here your friend is in a problem and you are shouting eureka!" said Tara making a sad face.

"Someone seems caring about whom they met." said Meethi closing her laptop.

"Meethi... stop teasing me," said Tara sitting next to her.


"Drama queen bring a smile back on your face because we are going to meet him tonight. Now, get ready. Leave it, you are looking good."

Before Tara could react and say anything, Meethi dragged her out of the house and started the car.



The radio was still on in the car.

He said, "After 15 minutes of heavy rain, the rain almost stopped. Ouch... my heart ached as it was now time for her to leave. She started leaving. I wanted to stop her but I couldn't. Next song to describe my condition."

~Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai

Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Sab se chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai

Pyaar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai

Itna pyaar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai~


"She went, so for today I am going. Signing off for today."

The song continued.

~Kyun ek pal ki bhi judaai sahi jaaye na

Kyun har subah tu meri sanson mein samaye na

Aaja na tu mere pass, dunga itna pyaar mein

Kitni raat guzaari hai, tere intezar mein~

In the car, Tara was resting her back on the seat and listening to the song, blushing slightly. What to say when she would meet him? How would she introduce herself to him? What justification would she give to him for not accepting the umbrella? And many other questions were there in her mind when the car stopped. She looked at Meethi and kissed her.


She got down from the car and ran into the studio. She was running. When she was entering the studio, she bumped into someone and was about to fall when the man with whom she collided held her in his arms and protected her from falling.


When she opened her eyes she couldn't believe her eyes. She was in arms of the same man whom she met today evening. She looked at him, he was the man who she had come to meet. Without thinking anymore, she just said, "Tara." He smiled and made her stand on her feet.

"You are RJ Neil?" she asked hesitatingly.


"Yes, but my loved ones call me by my real name Mrityunjay. As this name was a little long to be called on the radio, so I adopted Neil." He said looking directly into her eyes.


"You could have adopted MJ in place of Neil." She said looking straight into his smiling eyes.


"If I would have adopted that how could I have got the chance to progress our chat?" She blushed hearing his justification.

The radio was playing.

~Pyaar hua ikraar hua hai pyaar se phir kyun darta hai dil

Kehta hai dil rasta mushkil maloom nahi hai kaha manzil~

Listening to this song, they looked at each other and smiled. Meethi was watching all this from a distance.

"I wish I too meet someone this rain." And she winked.

----The End----

⭐️Editing Shaina⭐️

Thanks for reading

I hope U enjoyed this OS😊


Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Last update..!!! 😭

But WOW..!!! What an update !!! 😊
Finally Tara meet Neil...
OH!! He is Mrityunjay...πŸ˜›
I always like this song & now I also wish like Meethi 😳

This was an awesome OS πŸ‘
Loving each part of it 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update πŸ‘πŸΌ
So its last part but u written this suppebly.πŸ˜ƒ

Conversation start & progress ka naya tareeka πŸ˜†

Itna romantic couple ko dekh meethi ka yeh kahan banta hai.
Concept was good & written well .πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
Meethi came up with the fantastic idea of going to meet Neil tonight!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Aww Neil wanted to stop her but couldn't!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and perfect for them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara is now thinking ke woh kya kahegi aur kya karegi jab woh Neil se milegi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The trip and catch scene was so romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the way they met again!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Neil revealed his real name Mrityunjay and they are busy looking into each other's eyes!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

What a way to start and progress their conversation!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The song is very nice and apt for this situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Obviously Meethi would wish for someone for herself after seeing such a romantic couple!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was fantastic!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It was the perfect ending to this story, rather the perfect beginning of Mrityunjay and Tara's love story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It was awesome and a very cute and sweet story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb and perfect end of the OS... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Just loved the way they met again and Tara suggested his short name as MJ. 😳 😳 😳

I wish you ended up showing something more as you know our thirst never get over..


Do write more on MriAra..

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow last part is just fantastic.
basically I'm not sad as the story ends so romantically.
MriAra's trip & catch scene... hayee..kya likha hai...
so dreamy and lovely.
and the one dialogue which MJ said...sooo nice!!!!
Nice story...
I hope you will be back soon with another nice story of MriAra
pls likhna!!!! :)
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Khatam hogaya 😭 😭
Abhi to shuro howa tha
Chalo season 2 likh dalo
Ke dil abhi bhara nahin
πŸ˜ƒ

Wese bohot acha likha Archi
Plot was too good
Tara ka neil se milna aur tara kehna bohot bhagaya yaar
Full romantic aur thrilling tha
Thanks for entertaining us with your talent.
Please continue with more
Forum mein bahar ajati hai.
πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh.. It ends so fast... 😭
But the update is super awesome...
Tara and mj's trip and fall was fantastic...
The songs u chosen for the ffs.. Hayee Kya kahun mein... πŸ‘ 😳
Archu.. Pls do continue ur writing.. Bcoz our thirst for mriara ffs or anything they r a part never ends...
With lots of love for mriara...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Last update..!!! 😭

But WOW..!!! What an update !!! 😊
Finally Tara meet Neil...
OH!! He is Mrityunjay...πŸ˜›
I always like this song & now I also wish like Meethi 😳

This was an awesome OS πŸ‘
Loving each part of it 😊



Ji haan wo mil gaye πŸ˜ƒ

Yes Neil is MJ πŸ˜‰

Ye mera favorite song hai 😊

Thanks for loving it Dear πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Awesome update πŸ‘πŸΌ

So its last part but u written this suppebly.πŸ˜ƒ

Conversation start & progress ka naya tareeka πŸ˜†

Itna romantic couple ko dekh meethi ka yeh kahan banta hai.
Concept was good & written well .πŸ‘



Yes this is last part 😊

MJ hai kuch too naya banta hai πŸ˜‰

Meethi kya, koi bhi inhe dekh ye kahega πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks for loving it dear πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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