Originally posted by: twilightlover29
Firstie here Aditi
Hmm toh praja ne maangi duaRanima a ko bhi pata chal gaya about her nanhe se bacche ki mann ki baatLove how you are presenting the dual side if Ajab and the worries eating them bothLooking forward for more
Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja
When did you update ch-13?!😲😕Mujhe toh pata hi nahi chala!😛
Chalo koi nahi, i read it now!😃And i just love all the updates.❤️Great going dear!👏Do update soon.😉
Originally posted by: Natasha_1234
Wonderful update Rosh! ❤️
Loved it!
Whenever all these things are talked about like Ajabde's childish behaviors and cute scene of PrAja...I just remember my RoSal and want them back!!
This was awesome! Update soon
And do vote 😉
Originally posted by: aditi_angel
Garima Di ...its not my story...
Sorry rosh ...I didn't noticed your updated my stupidity ...
Well amazing update
Do update soon
Plzz , take part in role playing game we are in need of peoples...
hey guys. i am really sorry as i was not able to update for long. but now i will be updating the story regularly. i know all will be sad with ajabde's early exit which will be shown soon, so i decided to give this update. please read and review
here you go,
Chapter 15
Asphyxiation was sure in that room. No more could I that in that room hence I decided to go out for inhaling some fresh air. I jumped into my sweats and tang tops and grabbed a jacket and reached the garden with shoes so that I could exercise. After years I was doing some exercise. I garden was empty. I took the area beside the tea tower.
The grass wet with dew drops, the weather was so damn pleasant and the thing I was searching for was very clean. Just then cooked and served it was. I started with the exercise. First completed the Surya Namaskar- the only yoga I knew and then moved to my favorite running or correctly speaking jogging. It was my favorite exercise.
How good was it when I finished the jog and sat down on the grass just to turn around and see someone sipping tea in the tea tower. It was a familiar figure. I looked carefully and it was none other than him. Yes it was him. First face to see today, surely day would be good.
We had not finished the rituals ma informed when I reached the room and freshened up. I had no idea about the other rituals so wore a saari, pink in colour and cream borders and made a puff and reached down to see everyone waiting.
Ajabde beta I guess you forgot
Ma what did I forget
Bhago take Ajabde and get her ready for grah pravesh
And Phool you too go
Yes ma
Let's go Ajabde
We reached the room where both these two like professionals decked me up with all odds found in the room. I wore ma's grah pravesh lehenga, a red one with golden borders till the knee and then the golden jewels on red veil. The golden wire designed lehenga looked perfect. Both of them applied golden eye shadows and then red lipstick and filled my hand with a lot of bangles. My neck was decked up with a lot of jewellery but less in number than that in the wedding. They braided my hair and decorated it with gold plated hair decors. They added the mang tika and the nose ring. I was fed up with all these things.
I was thanking god when Maa came into the room to call me down. I went with Maa down stairs. After bidding farewell to the palace we had stayed Pratap ascended the horse and I took my place inside the palanquin. The four carriers lifted the palanquin and walked me behind Pratap's horse to the airport. It was a funny scene there but it was a ritual.
All were staring at us but we ignored. Pratap got down and came and picked me from the palanquin. He gave me his hand and I gave mine. We checked in and boarded the flight. I took the window seat and pratap took the seat beside me. It was a two seater, so only Pratap and me were sitting there.
I was sleepy because of the tiredness caused by the wedding and rituals all everything. My eyes closed and my head found place on his shoulders. He was busy reading, our favorite book- "The Fault In Our Stars". I slept and woke up to find him reading the book from the starting. When asked he replied that he was reading it the second time now.
I joined him and we both read the book together hand in hand. We laughed, cried and smiled with each other along the different instances while reading. Every part reminded one or the other thing from our life. The Amsterdam trip made us recall our first trip to Paris- the Lover's Land together after the wedding. Not only this, there were many such. We reached Delhi; we checked out and came out of the airport.
There was a horse, a palanquin and many cars for us to take home. Ma sa and other ladies went home before us by the car. I went and sat in the palanquin and Pratap took over the horse. We reached the house. Pratap came and helped me out of the palanquin. We together went to the door with my hands in his.
Ma sa took the aarti and applied some tilak.
Ajabde beta, push this lota with rice with right leg and enter the house after placing your leg in this plate.
Yes ma sa I will follow.
I did that and turned to ma sa
Now place your hands in this plate with this red liquid and make a mark on the wall there
Yes ma sa I will do as told.
I did that.
Now Ajabde you go to the Maan's room and Pratap you can stay with Shakti in his room for now. I will send everything to your rooms.
But ma sa, we have our room
Yes Ajabde beta but it is under cleaning and re arranging.
Ohk ma sa
We went to our allotted rooms. I changed from heavy cloths to light saari and jewellery which included a chain with a locket and a pair of earings. I made my hairs into a braid and went down.
Ajabde come I will tell you about the next ritual
Yes ma sa tell me I want to know
So the next ritual is Bride's cooking test.
Ohk ma sa when is this??
Now, before lunch
Yes ma sa I am ready
Ajabde you have to make a sweet dish is it fine
Yes perfect
One hour before lunch I took over the kitchen. I started making Suji Halwa. I successfully made it after many difficulties like getting confused with sugar and salt. It was the worst thing. The food was served and everyone praised it. Dhajiraj gave nek- it was planned trip ticket to my favorite place- Mauritius with Pratap. After taking blessing I took place in my room. Only for one or two days we stayed with everyone. After our trip to Mauritius we returned back to our home near Chakri and Bhago's place.
The trip was amazing. The second abroad trip with Pratap for the same purpose it was. The family sent us off from the airport and we boarded the flight to Mauritius. We were sitting beside each other. He became naughty during the journey. I wanted to see the latest releases and hear back to back but no he held my hand took my handset away from me and made me talk all the way long about our new life. It was such a boring plane trip. Only during eating it was fun.
Ajabde
Hmm
Food...
Yeah (almost shouting)
(Covered her mouth with his palm)
Ssh
Sorry
Let's have food.
Yeah
Ajabde, can I ask you something??
Yea sure
Can I call you Ajab and not Ajabde?
Oh yes
Thanx (he hugs her from the side)
Pratap everyone are staring at us
Ohh, I am sor..no wait let them after all you are my wife
Yeah but...
But nothing, it is the fact and what is wrong in hugging.
Nothing...
Then good, have food
You too
We reached Mauritius by evening and checked into the hotel for the night.
Ma'am, Sir today is Saturday and we have a Saturday gathering tonight in the pool area for the guests. Here is the invitation, please join us this evening.
Sure
Thanx ma'am
I almost shouted by at the right time Pratap held my hand and stopped me from shouting.
Pratap thanks for stopping me from shouting
Ajab...
Ohk ok I know you don't like me telling thanks to you
Thank God you know that
Pratap...
He took my hand in his and we walked to the room.
Shakti, Phool!!!
Where are they Ajab??
There (she points towards them)
Why are they here (frowning)
How do I know?
Shakti, you both here??
Yes bhabhisa for keeping an eye on you (in a teasing mood)
What??
Hahaha, I was joking bhabhisa
Thank God, then why are you here??
Bhabhisa, dhajiraj also gave us a surprise by handing this ticket over to us to come to Mauritius and enjoy with you since we have not gone anywhere other than Paris after our marriage
Right, then I think you have an invite to tonight's party??
Yes bhabhisa
Then let's get ready Phool
Yes bhabhisa
Pratap and Shakti can get ready in their room.
What?? (In unison)
Yes go now
Phool and I reached my room. We both chose our dress and quickly wore it.
I wore a pink ball gown with flowing bottom. There were no sleeves. The top part was stripped and back was threaded. The bottom was plain with just ups and downs. There was belt below the top which had a flower bow. The top had small flower designs. I wore light earrings and a pendent. Phool helped me with my hair. She made a Dutch bun and clipped in few flower pins. She completed it with the Tiara given by the hotel authorities for the party. Lastly she gave me light makeup with only eye liner, roach and lipstick.
She then got dressed up in blue ball gown with netted neck- back and front. The top had little working, very little. The bottom was pleated. The back was laced. The blue gown was perfect on her. I made a side fishtail braid for her and she wore a set- a diamond one gifted by Shakti. Last was the makeup same as mine, eye liner, roach and lip gloss. Only thing to be added was the tiara. That was added and we both jumped on to the some shoes and went down. I wore Ball flats and she too wore flats.
We reached the pool area to find that all the ladies are supposed to go the huge hall. We went there and found stylists waiting to give us masks and change our look. It was like we were to be going to a Ball in the Cinderella World. We were made to wear masks that suited our costume and were asked to find space to sit.
Precap- Disco Time
Thanx guys for sparing some time for this part. I just want to give more updates soon. Please read and review. The more the reviews the more will be the updates
Hey guys. I am extremely sorry for not updating this story for so long but I was sad with Ajabde's death. Without eating up your time I present you the 16th chapter. Please read and review.
Chapter 16
We did as instructed. For me it looked like it was some mystery going on. We started chatting.
Bhabhi we have come here but it doesn't seem like we are here with our husbands.
Yeah that's right Phool, see how the world has changed, it was a common phrase that ladies take a long time to dress but here it is completely different.
Yes bhabhi, we are ready here and are waiting and they are not to be seen anywhere around.
Correct Phool, absolutely correct.
A message arrived as soon as I finished my sentence. To see the message it was his. After almost like 2 hours a message from him. Phool had no such feelings like I had. She was busy blabbering the whole time. I wanted to move out but it would be awkward to do so. Phool will think something and all. So I opened the message box.
"Hey Ajab, I am bored with this stupid party arrangements and Shakti here had already finished eating me."
I replied back.
"Pratap same here with me, it's so uneasy here. Phool from then is blabbering something and the stylists here are busy with the preparations. It's extremely boring here. And yeah I want to meet you."
A message landed in the inbox in the next few seconds.
"Ajab make some reason and come by the pool and come alone. We meet there and decide what to do."
I read and replied carefully so that Phool does not see. She was not noticing what I was doing. She was just talking.
"Pratap I am ready and I will be there in 10 minutes. Be there and you too come alone."
I soon thought of something and started.
Phool, I think I forgot my side bag in the room, so I will go get it
Ohk bhabhi come soon
Yeah and you try talking to Shakti na
Will try bhabhi
I escaped from there and reached the Phool side. Pratap was waiting there in his formals- pants, white shirt, coat, red tie, formal watch and shoes. All were black and his hair was done neatly.
Ajab let's go.
Yeah but where
Hmm... I heard Mauritius has a wonderful Disco, so we can go there
Yes Disco, come on let's go
Yea
But...
But what?
My gown... (She frowned)
Oh then we go to the room and change and go to disco
Ohk come
We went to the room where he changed into three quarter pants and a tee. He wore informal shoes. He was ready. It was my turn. I jumped into read dress, a knee length, box fleeted one and big heart cut in the back. I opened up my hair and removed the makeup and only wore eye liner and gloss. Took a side bag, and wore pencil heels. We both escaped out of the hotel and went to the disco.
Disco was over crowded. As we reached, Pratap found his old companion. They conversed and sat for some drinks. I was alone standing.
Oh young lady, can I please have you for a step?
Hmm...
Please it's a request
Yeah
I stepped out of my place when the man fell down. Pratap had knocked him down. He was busy talking and he came and punched him. Yeah it was usual I mean how can I forget his this behaviour. Always, during college life when we were engaged he used to do this. Whenever we went to a disco and someone came to me with a request he used to do this. In this married life I was in a thought that he won't do that but I turned out to be wrong.
*FLASHBACK*
Miss Ajabde Panwar, can I have you hand please
Yeah sure
By the way I am Pratap Singh
Ohh, you are that great Basketballer from the College. It's a great thing to Dance with you
Thanks and with you too.
*FLASHBACK*
That was when I fell in love with him and he fell with me.
*FLASHBACK*
Amidst all these people of my college here I would like to tell something.
I was with my friends in the college Disco when he came again and took my hand without my permission and took me to the middle of the hall. He sat on his knees and took out a rose.
Miss Ajabde Panwar...
Yes (Narrowing her eyes and looks with a face full of questions)
I... lo..ove y..ou...
D...o yo..u?
Hmm... how dare you?
I am sorry, if I have offended you.
I love you Pratap
We both shared a hug then and there.
*FLASHBACK*
Another reason for him not allowing me to dance with any other guy in a disco is this. There is one more reason too.
*FLASHBACK*
Miss Ajabde Panwar
Yes Pratap Singh
I here in front of all declare that I will only marry Ajabde and this is confirmed.
Pratap...
Also we are marrying the next week
(In a low tone) can we, are you ready??
Yes
And all are invited
*FLASHBACK*
This is the last reason for his behaviour like this.
Miss Ajabde Panwar...
Hmm...wait a second... I am Mrs. Ajabde Pratap Singh now
Heh
Pratap, college days are gone, now we are couple and not college students
Yes
Mrs. Ajabde Pratap Singh, can I have you on the Disco floor??
Why not
And we danced all night to the best song ever
To the best song ever...
The song was playing and we were dancing. Everything going on there was like our college days when we were just in a relation and not married.
And we danced all night to the best song ever
To the best song ever...
The song suited the dance very well. After were had done dancing and were satisfied we reached the hotel in an open top car. It was so damn good. At almost 1 in the morning we were on an open top car sitting close to each other with hand around.
*FLASHBACK*
Pratap...
Hmm
Pratap I want to go on a night long drive
Heh
Yeah I want means I want
So what am I supposed to do??
I don't know but if you love me take me
Fine, get ready I will take you.
Yess
We went on a long drive on his bike. It was amazing. That night was the night to be remembered. It was really a dream come true for me to go on a long drive at 12 in the night on a bike and with him. Those days were like heaven.
*FLASHBACK*
Ajab...
Hmm Pratap
Hotel has come Ajabde
Ohh
We entered and two known face were standing with angry faces on the gates.
Where were you two??
Phool and Shakti you both
Dada bhai, bhabhi sa you both, where were you??
W..we...
We were in the disco
What??
Yea to enjoy
You did not take us??
We are sorry
Why did you not tell us dada bhai??
Bye... I am tired
Me too... bye
Thank god, we both went to the room and slept. For long we slept. It was almost 9 in the morning when Shakti knocked the door. That's when we woke up. Shakti informed that they are going for sight-seeing and left the place while we both had a shower and got ready.
I wore a simple floral dress and left my hair open with sun glasses. Took a hand bag and jumped on to flats. He wore shorts with tee. He wore informal shoes and sun glasses. The first destination was Mauritius Safari. Our love for wild was the reason to choose this place.
We hired a bike for the trip. In the morning hot sun he rode the bike and sat behind him. It was amazing but scary when a speed breaker came which caused me fall on him and my hands automatically encircled his waist. We reached the Safari area.
Precap- some fun
Thanx guys for sparing some time for this part. Please leave lots of love.
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