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This stored based on geet original story... Am continuing this story after maan memory loss & he not except geet as his wife...


am already posted phase 1 of this story ...for reading phase 1 click here - link

Disclaimer :- this story & concept solely belong to me and my property if any one try to copy without telling me or try to take this & try to copy & paste it any where then I'll take legal action against him or her , pls don't copy this FF & it's concept 

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 Any scene or situation , moment of this ff is an imagination. If any match to any other thing that is merely a co-incidence. I haven't copied any scene I want to let u know beforehand. Still if anything match it will be only coincident.


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Kahani ab tak

 

Maaneet relation already facing many problems ...then sam comes back in his life... and he knows about sam disease, she never cheats him...she left maan for only him...

His heart & mind already trap in many situations...one side sam & other side geet... he don't getting what's a right...he not believing after going sam, he close the heart for forever, so, how geet come or make place in his heart... In this situation  he hurt geet many times , sometime he knows about this or some time not...

But in reality he never wants hurt geet, but, he also not want to give false hopes to her...

Another side, geet heart breaking each moment due to his ignorance, rudeness... but she always console own self... one day his heart recognize her... but after hearing maan words to sam or know about his first love, she break fully...now she want only his happiness...if his happiness with sam, so she ready to left...on his birthday she signed Divorce paper as his birthday gift & left khurana mension ...

 

Maan is so angry on geet due to her divorce decision... why she not shows her right on him... Why she not asks questioned to him...only Divorce paper has solution?

 

He know, he never fulfill husband duty, but he also never want geet go...his angered, his helplessness increased after knowing geet share this importance decision with adi & pinky...

 

In all of this, maan find about Vicky too, he doing work in some restaurant as manager... Vicky come back home on satyanarayan pooja, he shocked his bro Maan married with some geet but not sam...why this happen ...he want know...

 

On maan birthday, annie & arjun Rathore engagement happened...maan have no problem with this realtion...he is happy for Annie...

 

Vicky makes understand to maan, why geet left...if he not seen her with any other one, so how geet bear this...

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maan stop geet , but geet put one condition in front of him, she not enter in Khurana  mansion , she going to leave in outhouse  to till he accept her as wife from heart... days passing out happily...in this between storm enter again in maaneet life, her name is Naintara...

her evil plans succeed or not...

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kya fir se bikhr jaayenga maan geet ki rishta 

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  Index
First phase threads link



                    *******************
Second phase


part 11 on page 2

part 12 on page 3

part 13 on page 8 (blog)

part 13 on page 19 (if)

part 14 on page 30 

part 15 on page 45 (blog)

part 15 on page 59 (if)

part 16 on page 65

teaser on page 78

part 17 on page 82

part 18 on page 96

part 19 on page 103

part 20 on page 113 (Blog)


part 21 on page 121 (blog)

Full part 20 & 21 on page 131 (IF)

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 Hum aapke dil mein rhte hain

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plss give a long update nd no mu plsss
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Originally posted by: dreamy

plss give a long update nd no mu plsss


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Part 11

Tyaar rhiye geet

Ab hum aapna dusra card kholne jaa rhe hai

 

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Naintara hugged dev from back tightly...

I miss you so much dev

Kya aapne bhi hume utna miss kiya

Dev jerked her hand & pull her in front...

Dev : stop your drama

Get out from my room

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Tara : hum aapki patni hai dev

Dev : patni

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Really

Tum jaanti bhi ho

Patni hoti kya hai

Tara : please dev

Hum maante hai humne bhut galatiya ki hai

Aur un galatiyo ke liye humne maan veerji aur geet dono se maafi maang li hai

Dev : please stop your drama

Mein bhut dekh chukka hai ye sb tumhara

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Now please leave me alone

Tara : hum yhi rahenge

Dev : naintara

Don't test my patience

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Tara sees maan coming upward & thinks to start the next move...

Tara : devvv

Dev : don't raise your voice

Tara : hum sb jaante hai

Aapki rag - rag ko pechante hai

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Aap hume nikalke us Nandini ko apne bed tak laana chahte hai na

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Jo aapne phle geet ke sath kiya

Ab wo hi nandini ke sath krna chahte hai

Dev slapped her, she fall on ground...

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Maan step freeze hear this, and he thinking "dev ne kya kiya geet ke sath"

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Tara stand again & said hum aapke thappad se nhi drne wale dev

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Hum aapko nandini ke sath wo sb nhi krne denge

Dev : just shut up

Tara : kyun chup rhe hum

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Kya aap usse bhi geet ki tarah maa banana chahte hai

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Dev : bs

He again slapped her...

Ab tumne ek aur sbd kaha

Toh koi bhi court order mujhe tumhe ghar se bahar nikalne se rok nhi paayenga

Dev left ...

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Tara sees maan also left, she wipes the tears...

Do thappad jyada ho gye dev

Par koi baat nhi

Kuch paana hai

Toh thoda dard toh shehna honga na

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Waise maan veerji ki timing bilkul perfect thi

.

Teer nishane pe laga hai

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Maan standing in washroom in front of mirror, try to relax own mind, but naintara words not leaving him in peace..

Jo aapne phle geet ke sath kiya

Ab wo hi nandini ke sath krna chahte hai

.

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Kya aap usse bhi geet ki tarah maa banana chahte hai

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Maa

His voice coming only as whispers...

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Kya wo mera bacha nhi tha

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Dev aur geet

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Nooo

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No...

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He punched on mirror with the force, glass break down & his hand filled with blood...

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Nhi dev aur geet asa nhi kr sakte

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Jaroor naintara jhooth kh rhi hai.

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Maan ydi wo jhooth hota

Toh dev khehta na

Tum jhooth mt bolo

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But it's cant true too

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Geet kbhi asa nhi kr sakti

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She loves me

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Sam bhi toh tujhse pyaar hi krti thi na

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Sam ki majboori thi

Mera dil todna

.

Usne sch kaha na

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Ho sakta hai

Kuch aur ho

.

Maan wo baby dev ka tha

Tu smjh raha hai

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Mera khud ka bhai aur geet

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I want my answers

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Devvv

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Naintara (think) tara kuch soch

Ydi veerji ne  kissi aur se baat krli toh

.

Tujhe unhe rokna honga

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Maan veerji

Kya huya

Aap ase dev ko kyun bula rhe hai

Unse kuch galati ho gyi

Maan : naintara ye tum puch rhi ho

.

Dev

Naintara sees daadi coming here, before daadi come , naintara said : veerji dev outhouse gye hai

Geet se

Maan left without saying any word...

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Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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oh no naintara did a good job now maan is very confused really scared what will happen now nice part thnx 4 update