Superb story...excellent writing...grt u r converting it to ff...ie more to read. . 😊 Swayam has done something wrong...nd everybdy is hurt... Eagerly waiting for the nxt part... Thankyou for the pm...
firstly extremely well written update and yeah quite emotional too i wold say a tad too much but as you say it must be important...and a new twist with taani's engagement and all and everything on that same day...many things are still in suspense...a nice update though
regarding the note i would like to say ki jaisa bhi characterisation dena hai swayam ka let it be...wil read it...
ohh god irna emotional update rulayegi kya?? its looking like swayam is bad boy for sharon only its getting interesting wht happened? y this happened??
Superb update di... yup u were ryt dis update has clrd a bit confusion... Bt d suspense z still on.. Taarey r engaged.. Bt stil no 1 z happy bcz swayam has done sumthng wrng... Sharon z so much shatterd... nd as ur note said swayam z kind of a bad guy... It makes me more xctd to read dis ff.. Update asap Thnx fr pm
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