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shreya tode

@shreyatode1

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey guys im shreya,recently joined forum

back with 2nd ff

all characters are same except ranveer's

he is not same as he is in show

story begins from hospital scene

after ishani leaved with shikar Rv remembered all the things that happen now all the words of ishani is repeating on his ears

Rv-aaj bhi tumhe thik se jhut bolna nahi aata ishani,tumhari aakhe sab kuch baya kar deti hai,tumne diamond contract ke time par bhi aisa hi kiya tha tab me tumhe pehchanane me dhokha kha gaya tha lekin is bar nahi,jarur koi to bat hai jo tum muzse chipa rahi ho n ye mai jan ke rahunga,bachpan se sirf ek hi ladki se pyar kiya hai ,tum jitna khud ko nahi janti utna mai janta hu tumhe,

sahe tum kuch bhi kaho mai sach janke rahunga

so this is the intro

part1 will update soon

Edited by shreyatode1 - 9 years ago

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princess369

@princess369

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Posted: 9 years ago

really nice start plzzz update sooon nd pm me .

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shreya tode

@shreyatode1

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

thank u Marooshmalik

hope u will like this part

part1-

after somedays Rv get discharged from hospital n he went home

he is behaving all normal like nothing happened n amba is really happy with this bt ritika is tensed ,she asked him about ishani bt he allways ignored that question n starts a new topic

Rv-in mind- mai abhi ritika ko kuch nahi bata sakta ek bar muze pata chal jaye ki sach kya hai phir me use bataunga

one morning-

Rv called shikar's house n servant picked up

Rv-shikar hai kya?

S-nahi sab to bahar gaye hai aap kaun?

Rv listened conversation of ishani n kanchan that ishani is going to buy a ganpati's idol

S-ji aap kaun bol rahe hai?

bt Rv hang up

Rv-ohh to meri biwi murti lene ja rahi hai n use company to deni padegi!😉😉😉

at godown ishani is searching the idol bt Rv is already present there

Rv is hiding behind a pillar so ishani can't see him bt he can

Rv-looking at ishani-hum bachpan me mota bauji ke sath yaha aaya karte the aur hamesha is bat pe ladte the ki kaunsi murti le ,mota bauji meri vali murti lete the aur tum gussa ho jaya karti thi ki vo muze tumse jyada pyar karte hai, a smile appeared on his face remembering their childhood memories

Rv is going towards ishani bt then shikhar comes there n he stop n hide again

Is-shikhar tum yaha?

Sh-ha krisha ne bataya ki tum yaha aai ho to maine socha sath ghar chalte hai

while Ishkar is busy in talking Rv went outside

he goes near shikhar's car and he got an idea

Rv-ritika ko hamesha aadat hai apni hair pins yaha vaha girani ki shayad car me giri ho ,he went towards his car n search for pin n luckily he got it

then he goes towards shikhar's car n puncture its tyre

Rv-sorry shikhar ye sab karna padta hai cause everything is fair in love!!!!!😃

while he is doing this one man saw him

Ma-ye aap kay kar rahe ho car puncture kyu kar rahe ho?

Rv-ye meri car hai aap jao yaha se

Ma-khud ki car koi puncture karta hai kya?

Rv-ha vo mai bore ho gaya hu apni car se

man left from there thinkinh him a mad man

and again he come inside

Rv-are shikhar tum yaha?

Sh-ha vo ghar me puja hai na to hum murti lene aaye the n tum?

Rv-ha vo ma ko ek murti chahiye thi to isiliye

they choose their respective idol n went outside

Rv went near his car n Ishkar towards them

Sh-oh no

Is-kya hua?

Sh-dekho na tyre puncture hai

then Rv comes there with his car

Rv-any problem?

Sh-ha vo car puncture hai

Rv- mai chod deta hu chalo

Is-koi jarurat nahi hum auto se chale jaenge

Sh-nahi ishani aaj puja hai n murti ko time pe ghar leke jana hoga ek kam karo tum Rv ke sath chali jao mai car thik karvake aata hu

Is-lekin shikhar ghar me pooja hai

Shiha isiliye to bol raha hu tum chali jao mai jaldi aata hu

Is-ok time pe aa jana

n she sits in Rv's car in back seat

n they drove away

In midway Rv stops the car

Is-kya hua?

Rv-pahle mai tumhara driver tha lekin ab nahi so samne aake baitho

Ishani unwantedly sits in front seat

he starts driving

Rv-vaise nai job kaisi chal rahi hai?

Is-what?

Rv-ha tum logo ke shadi me unka hath bata rahi ho na so new job hui na

Is-vo mere apne hai

Rv-wow new relations ha gud

Is-ye sab tumne kiya na?

Rv-kya?

Is-shikhar ki gadi tumne puncture ki na?

Rv-what?tum ek izzdaddar admi pe aisa galat ilzam kaise laga sakti ho mai kya tumhe puncture karne vala dikhta hu?aur mai ye sab kyu karunga?

Is-taki mai tumhare sath aa saku

Rv-oh hello muze koi shauk nahi hai tumhare sath jane me

Is-to thik hai gadi roko mai auto se chali jati hu

Rv-rok deta lekin shikhar se promise kiya hai ki tumhe ghar drop karunga aur tumhe to pata hai ki mai apne promise kabhi nahi todta

ishani gave him an angry look😡😡😡

they reached shikar's house

ishani took te idol n went away

while she is going she saw someone beside her n its none other rhan Rv

Is-tum andar kyu aa rahe ho?

Rv-ye tumhara ghar nahi hai jo tum muzse aise puch rahi ho

Ishani is really annoyed with him🤢🤢🤢

Rv-bahar kitni doop hai aur mai bottle carry kkarna bhul gaya pyas lagi hai socha pani pi lu n he went inside

In mehra mansion-

all are busy with preparation both mehra n parekh family

Ishveer come inside

parekhs are shocked to see Rv

Ka-shikhar kaha hai?

Rv-vo aunty uski car kharab ho gai thi to usne kaha ki ishani ko drop kar du vo thode der me aa jaega

Ka-thik hai

Rv-aunty bahot pyas lagi hai thoda pani

Ka-ha ruko mai abhi bhijvati hu

she called servant for water

Rv-thik hai aunty ab me nikalta hu

Ka-are beta ruk jao na abhi pooja shuru hi hone vali hai

Ishani is about to say something

Rv-thik hai aap bol rahi ho to ruk jata hu

so end of the 1st part

hws it?

plz cmnt

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ShadikaIshVeer

@ShadikaIshVeer

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Really great start😊😊

Do plz pm me when you update the next chapter😉

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princess369

@princess369

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

really nice and thanx for pm nd update soon next part

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tellme

@tellme

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

amazing start👏👏👏

like your noughty ranveer😳

update soon plz

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NidsJ

@NidsJ

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow.. U r making a cute story.. 👏 👏
I was laughing throughout.. 😉
Cute cute ishveer.. Nice start.. 😛 😛

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Priyanka

@_priyaa_

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

hey..it's really nice.do continue..😃

Edited by _priyaa_ - 9 years ago

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shreya tode

@shreyatode1

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

thanks priyaa, NidsJ ,tnzila, Maroosh,MM

hope u will like the next part-

part2-

Pa-kanchanji pooja ka muhurat ho gaya hai hum shuru kare?

Ka-ha lekin mera beta nahi aaya abtak mai use call karti hu

kanchan called shikhar

Ka-beta kaha hai tu? pooja ka samay ho gaya hai

Sh-ma vo car thik kar raha hu abhi to time lagega aap pooja start kar do mai aa jaunga

Ka-thik hai hum start karte hai jaldi aa jana

pooja started-

they perform some rituals

Pa-ladki ka bhai kaha hai?

Ra-ji vo bahar gaya hai

Pa-lekin is rasam me bhai ka hona jaruri hai

Ka-to Rv-beta shikhar nahi aa paya to kya tum pooja me baithoge?

Rv-smiling😃😃😃-ji aunty

n Rv perform the rituals

finally pooja end

ishani is distributed prasad to everyone n come to Rv

Is-prasad

Rv-wow mere fav laddo

Is-vo prasad hai

Rv-nam me kya rakha hai

then shikhar come

Kri-kya bhai aap ab aa rahe ho ,hamesha late

Sh-are kya karu vo car kharab ho gai thi na,pooja khatam ho gai?

Ka-ha abhi khatam hui hai ,teri jarurat bhi padi lekin Rv ne sambhal liya

Shi-thanks Rv

Rv-thanks ki kya jarurat hai,krisha meri bhi to behen hai aur Rv ko rishte bahot acchese nibhane aate hai(looking at ishani)

Ba to kanchan-ji hum agar shadi ki date fix kar de to?

Ka-ha hame koi problem nahi hai

Kri-ok so aap log aaj decide kar le lekin hum announce kal karenge

Dev-kal kyu?

Kri-kyuki kal mom n dad ki anniversary hai

Shi-to phir tay raha kal party me hum date announce kar denge

Ra-Rv beta kal bhi aana hai tumhe pure family ke sath

Rv-yes sure

ishani is not that much pleased

after some time guest leaved only mehra's n Rv remained

Ra-ishani kal ki sari tayari tumhe hi karni hai

Is-ji uncle

Shi-ha aap log tension mat lijiye hum dono milkar kal sari preparations kar denge

Rv-dono nahi teeno

all are looking at him

Rv-tisra mai ,mai bhi help karunga na

Shi-lekin Rv tum?

Rv-shikhar yar tum mere dost ho n tumhe to dono ki tayari karni hai na ghar me shadi hai kitna kam hota hai

Is-tumharai koi jarurat nahi hai,i mean hum sab kar lenge aur vaise bhi tumhe bhi to apna office n ghar sambhalna hota hai

Rv-mera office mere bina bhi chalta hai n ghar pe baki log hai na

Is-phir bhi tum mat aao mai kar lungi

all are so confused that what is happening

Ishani noticed it

Is-tum kyu khamaka taklif le rahe ho maine kaha na mai kar lungi ,so decide ho gaya

Shi-ha Rv ishani thik kahe rahi hai

Rv-😭😭😭 thik hai,chalo phir me nikalta hu

Shi-ok kal time pe aa jana

Rv-ya bye

n he leaved

at Rv's home

Am-are ranveer tu ye murti ?

Rv-kuch nahi ma vo punit le raha tha to maine bhi le li

Am-thik hai chal iski stapna kar dete hai

at dinner-

Rv-kal shikhar ki mon n dad ki anniversary hai n krisha ki wedding date bhi announce karne vale hai,to kal jana hai

Am-koi jarurat nahi hai

Ri-ha ma sahi kahe rahi hai

Rv-ritika ye tum bol rahi ho ,shikhar tumhara hi to frnd hai

Ri-ha lekin vaha ishani

Rv-uski chinta mat karo mai hu na

Ri-lekin

Rv-lekin vekin kuch nahi hum ja rahe hai aur isse tumhe bhi thoda change mil jaega,ok so mera ho gaya gud night

n he leaved

both amba n ritika are tensed

😕😕😕

next day-

mehra mansion-

all are busy in preparations specially shikhar n ishani

then Rv comes there, n saw ishani n just keep looking at her

ishani saw him n noticed no one is around

Is-tumhe mana kiya tha na aane ko to kyu aaye ho?

Rv-tumse milne

Is-kya?

then one by one all come

Ka-Rv tum?

Rv-ha aunty actually aapki permission chahiye thi

Ka-kis liye?

Rv-darhasal kya hai na muze meri wife ke liye gift lena hai n aapko to pata hai ki ishani kitni expert hai gift choose karne me to kya mai use ek ghante ke liye le ja sakta hu

Ka-ha muze koi problem nahi hai

Is-mai nahi aa sakti muze bahot kam hai

Rv-shikhar hai na ,haina shikhar?

Shi-ha tum jao ishani vaise bhi ritika ko is halat me khush rakhna chahiye

Is-par..

Rv-chalo chalo jaldi late ho raha hai

n Ishveer leaved

while driving-

Rv-ab itna muh fulake kyu baithi ho?

Is-ye sab kya laga rakha hai tumne?

Rv-kya muze to bas gift lena hai

Is-kya lena hai ?

Rv-umm soch raha hu ki diamond ring lu,nahi necklace ,nahi ring,ek kem karta hu dono le leta hu

n they went in a jwellry shop

Rv-to shopkeeper-muze apni wife ke liye diamond ring n necklace cahiye

SK-ji abhi dikhata hu ,dekhiye,he took out some samples

Rv-so ishani lo decide karo

Ishani choose one beautiful ring n a neckset

Rv looking at it-what a choice yar isiliye mai tumhe yaha laya

Is-ab bate band karo aur chalo jaldi

Rv-ha ha chalte hai

Rv paid bill n ishani noticed that bill is of 35 lacs

both seated in car

Rv-oh shit

Is-kya hua?

Rv-mai apna phone andar hi bhl aaya

Is-to jake leke aao

Rv-plz tum le ke aao na,mai bahot thak gaya hua na plz😊😊😊

Is-thik hai ruko😕😕

she went n left her bag there

Rv then put both the gifts in her bag

ishani come n they drove away

Rv drop ishani to shikhar's house

Rv-chalo phir milte hai sham ko

Is-tum nahi aaye to bhi chalega

Rv-lekin muze to aana hai

Is-to aao give him a angry look n goes away😡😡😡

Rv-uff ye gussa!!!!😃😃😃

he drove his office

Ishani went in her room

Is-fresh ho jati hu phir baki ki preparations kar lungi

after sometime

Is-mere phone ki battery low thi charge kar deti hu

and she opned her bag n she is shocked to saw the gifts which Rv bought

Is-ye mere bag mai kaise aaya?kahi ranveer bhul to nahi gaya?ha lagata hai vo galti se mere pas chod gaya use call karti hu

ishani called ranveer

ranveer is siting in his cabin working on some files

he saw ishani calling😃😃😃

Rv-itni jaldi meri yad bhi aa gayi?itna miss kar rahi ho muze?

Is-just shut up,mai tumhe yad kyu karungi

Rv-to call kyu kiya?

Is-vo tumne jo gifts liye the vo galti se mere pass aa gaye hai

Rv-galti se nahi maine khud rakhe the bag me

Is-kya????? lekin tumne to kaha tha ki tum vo ritika ke liye

Rv-no tumne shayad suna nahi maine kaha ki mai apni wife ke liye le raha hu😉😉😉

so end of this part

hws it?

plz cmnt

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NidsJ

@NidsJ

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey shreya.. Nice one...
U kept ur story so lighthearted nd its fun to read this... 😛

Ur rv is too chipku.. Piche pada hai ishani ke.. 🤣 🤣

There's no rina dhona is this story n that's the best thing about it.. ⭐️ ⭐️
Keep writing... 😊 😊

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