Ishveer ff- Dil se Dil tak , part2 updated on page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey frnds
i m new here
my name is shreya
n wana write an ff on ishveer
jst saw movie dil se so got idea
the story n some scenes will be same from movie bt not the whole story

character sketch
ranveer waghela- son of a rich business man manish waghela,his family wants him to join his business bt he wants to become a journalist n so he become a crime reporter .though his family opposes it bt they love their only child so they finally agreed .he lives in mumbai bt recently he got transferred to jammu.


ishani-a mysterious girl her identity will b reveled later

sorry for mistakes
so this is the CS more characters will b added later
part1 will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Shreya...
Im zaira, nice to meet ...
The spoiler was nice, 😊 really exited to read more !!!
Update soon!! try to mix some hindi also, then i'll be more good !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks zaira
only one reply😭
bt ok no problem its jst a starting
so here is the

1st part-

as ranveer got transfered to J&k so the story starts from here-
ranveer came to shrinagar's railway station to go for samba district , rain starts heavily n there is a checking of police coz some days ago there occured a bom blast
police-stop the car we have to check the car if there is any weapons or bomb
taxi driver-nahi sab hamare gadi me aisa kuch nahi hai
Ranveer-yaha bomb aise hi milte hai
Taxi dr-nahi sab bomb to thoda aage milte hai chale kya?
Rv-nahi nahi aap bas muze jaldi station chodiye
police checked the car n ask them to leave

at railway station-
Rv-ye samba jane vali train kab aaegi?
station master-vo to chali gai ab agli kal subah hi aaegi
Rv with disappoint look sit on a bench there he saw a person is sitting on bench which is in corner n covered himself with a blanket n his face is not visible
Rv-bhaisab
bt no response
Rv-o chaha
again no reponse
Rv-uncle dada are kuch to bolo yar
again no response bt there is a slight movement
Rv-chalo jawab na sahi kam se kam ye to pata chal gaya ki aap jinda ho
he stand up n goes toward track
Rv-kya lagta hai koi train aaegi bhi ya nahi aur aaegi to jaegi ya nahi,kyuki aajkal itna corruption hai ki koi thik se kuch banata hi nahi kahi barish se agar ptri nikal gai ho to hum to gaye n laughs
tabhi jor ki hava aati hai n that persons blanket flew away n Rv saw that person n that person is not any man bt she is a girl
Rv was shocked n also memiorised with her beauty, he thought how can be so beautiful n also cute at the same time ,like she is not an girl she is an angel ,ha bilkul pari jaisi,he thought himself n goes towards that girl
Rv-I'm sorry maine aapko aadmi samz liya lekin aap to ladki hai aur vo bhi khoobsurat I mean I;m sorry
bt no response
Rv-mera nam raveer hai ranveer vaghela mai live india ka reporter hu n shows his icard.aapka naam mat batana ,aap jaha rahti hai vahi ka nam bata dena ya fir koi pet name ya apne kisi rishtedar ka hi dadi nani koi bhi chalega
again no response
Rv-kab se mai hi bol raha hu aap to kuch boliye kam se kam shut up hi bol dijiye,ya aapko kuch chahiye to muze bataiye mai kuch lake deta hu
Girl-1 cup chay(tea)
Rv-shukar hai aap kuch to boli aap yahi rukiye mai abhi leke aata hu,kahi jaiyega mat
n he goes for bringing tea

At tea stall
one man is sleeping peacefully n ranveer use jagata hai
Man-kya hai bhai sone do na
Rv-bas 2 cup chay bana dijiye
Man-abhi itni rat ko
Rv-bhaisab plz plz vaise bhi itni thand hai aur barish bhi plz
Man-thik hai ruko banata hu
Rv-ha jaldi
tabhi train ki aawaz sunai deti hai
Rv-samba jane vali train to kal subah aane vali thi na?
Man-ha vo koi aur hogi
Rv-kahi vo ladki usme hi na chali jaye
Rv took tea n leaves that place
n what he saw that girl is going by that same train,train starts moving
he shouted oye!!
that girl look at his direction n train chali gai
Rv-duniya ki ye sab se choti prem kahani hogi


so hws the part
plz plz cmnt
sorry for typing mistakes
sorry for short part

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum 😊

Nice start πŸ˜‰ Plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok So this is a scene from the movie dil se...Shahrukh Khan at railway station with Manisha Koirala covered in blanket...Try something original please :) no offence
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...yaaari just loved it...
Didn't saw the movie dil se ...buf I stilll liking it alot... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ
Plzzz do continue!! Loved the the u wrote...looking forward for more!!!
RV seems so cute n bak bak krne wala...awww sho cute, plz update sooon 😳 πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks zaira. sria2015, Mm123456 for ur cmnts
n sria2015 ya its scene from that movie as i already told in intro that some scenes will b from movie n not the whole story n u n MM123456 plz aapka nam batana so i can call u by name
again thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyatode1

thanks zaira. sria2015, Mm123456 for ur cmnts

n sria2015 ya its scene from that movie as i already told in intro that some scenes will b from movie n not the whole story n u n MM123456 plz aapka nam batana so i can call u by name
again thanks😊



My friends call me MM , so please call me MM 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part2
finally Rv reached samba,there he went to hotel n checked in
in room-
Rv apne ghar call karta hai,his mom picked up
Rv-ma
Amba-ranveer tu pahoch gaya ?kaisa hai?khana khaya ya nahi?
Rv-ma ma ruko muze bolne to do,parul hai kya?use bolo laptop start kare mai video call karta hu
Amba-ha ruk
she called parul n told her as Rv said (parul Rv's cousin sister her mom n dad died in accident when she was 10 so amba n manish adopted her n they treated her like their own child n Rv n parul fight so much like sis n bro bt also love each other so much)
Rv-are parul kitna time laga diya tune
Pa-ab kar liya na bolo
Rv-dekho ma mai itna dur baitha hu fir bhi ye kaise bat kar rahi hai
Am-kya tum dono bhi,accha vo sab chod bata khana khaya ya nahi?aur kab pahocha?
Rv-ma mai abhi pahocha hu socha pahle aapse bat kar lu,thode der bad khana kha lunga
Pa-bhai maine suna hai ki kashmir bahot sundar hai to aapke room ke bahar ka view dikhao na
Rv-are par ab to rat hai na kal subah dikha dunga
Pa-nahi muze abhi dekhna hai mausi ma aap bolo na
Rv-accha thik hai ruk
Rv take his laptop n goes toward his window
Rv-dekh
suddnelly he saw a girl covered himself with blanket,he leave laptop on bed n run outside
Pa-are bhai
Rv reached outside n goes near that girl n patted her shoulder
Gi-kya?
Rv-oh i'm sorry muze laga aap koi aur ho
Gi-to pahle confirm karna chahiye na
Rv-i'm sorry n he run away as quick as possible
Rv-oh god vo station vali ladki ke chakkar me mai ek din pakka pit jaunga
he comes in room
Am-beta kaha gaya tha?
Rv-kuch nahi ma vo aisa laga ki koi pehchan vala tha
Am-par tu to vaha abhi gaya hai na
Pa-koi ladki hogi
Rv-kya ladki,aisa kuch nahi hai,aur tu jyada soch mat
Am-beta tu abhi khana kha le hum bad me bat karte hai
Rv-ok bye
Am,Pa-bye
In morning-
Rv goes into his office
at reception-
a girl name meena is sitting there
Me-sir may i help u?
Rv-ha mai Rv hu aaj se hi join karna hai
Me-oh ha aapko mai hamesha tv pe dekhti hu,aap yaha wait kijiye mai nitin sir se puchti hu
Rv-ok
Me-sir ne kaha hai aap mil sakte ho
Rv-btw ye nitin sir bahot strict hai kya?
me-nahi sir to bahot acche hai
Rv-ok mai mil ke aata hu he gave her a rose from a boque

next part-nitin -Rv meeting , Rv will meet someone
so hws the part?
sorry for typing mistake n for short part
plz cmnt

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Posted: 9 years ago
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please update fastπŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

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