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Posted: 8 years ago
This was such a lovely,beautiful,amazing update!!!! i loved it so much 😳 ❤️
Arjuna carrying Draupadi in his arms and Draupadi being naughty with him,so romantic and cute...aww 😳 ❤️
Amazing 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahiima16

This was such a lovely,beautiful,amazing update!!!! i loved it so much 😳 ❤️
Arjuna carrying Draupadi in his arms and Draupadi being naughty with him,so romantic and cute...aww 😳 ❤️
Amazing 👏

Mahima,Thanq. Did you read ' The Swayamvar Presented by Vyas Who are in Who won? That I posted unable to bear with SPK? Read it once. I saw Captainspark come there yesterday and asking me to show my PHD certificate. She is accusing me since I am posting only on ARDI she doubts my credentials. Height of ArDI hatred I thought. I didn't feel like replying to her. On one side we the ARDI lovers and on another side those who hate them. She says I dont know anything about Arjun to write about him.You read this story so well. Did I leave any Arjun related thing? Ok. I thought. I need not prove myself before such ARDI haters. I thought. Just go through that once.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Mahima,Thanq. Did you read ' The Swayamvar Presented by Vyas Who are in Who won? That I posted unable to bear with SPK? Read it once. I saw Captainspark come there yesterday and asking me to show my PHD certificate. She is accusing me since I am posting only on ARDI she doubts my credentials. Height of ArDI hatred I thought. I didn't feel like replying to her. On one side we the ARDI lovers and on another side those who hate them. She says I dont know anything about Arjun to write about him.You read this story so well. Did I leave any Arjun related thing? Ok. I thought. I need not prove myself before such ARDI haters. I thought. Just go through that once.


Yes di i saw that comment 😆 and u don't need to prove anything to anyone.People who've read your story well can clearly tell that how much you like Arjuna and how much you know about him. And Liking ArDi,making posts about them or writing stories about them have nothing to do with your knowledge about Arjuna,it's your choice and you don't need to prove anything to people who can't respect the opinions of other people. And one more thing i'm unable to understand that how come writing posts on ArDi makes you shallow yes i know Arjuna as an individual achieved many things but if you choose to write about something other than his achievements,it makes you shallow? 😕 Weird! This is a direct attack to your opinion that's it. People are fed up of ArDi OS and admirers I guess 😳 You are right by not replying
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You are doing a great work and one more thing if today i've learned so many things about Arjuna it is only because of reading your posts so no need to prove your Knowledge about Arjuna to anyone 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Mahima,Thanq. Did you read ' The Swayamvar Presented by Vyas Who are in Who won? That I posted unable to bear with SPK? Read it once. I saw Captainspark come there yesterday and asking me to show my PHD certificate. She is accusing me since I am posting only on ARDI she doubts my credentials. Height of ArDI hatred I thought. I didn't feel like replying to her. On one side we the ARDI lovers and on another side those who hate them. She says I dont know anything about Arjun to write about him.You read this story so well. Did I leave any Arjun related thing? Ok. I thought. I need not prove myself before such ARDI haters. I thought. Just go through that once.

di i think we should talk abt these matters in PM. i won't be good for u. sumone may see and report and it won't at all be good.
@mahi, it's not the thread. don't vent ur ager in wrong place. otherwise we may have to get any DM note for such comments. there r stalkers all way round.
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Posted: 8 years ago
guys u both, edit ur comment, quite! We don't want second DT note here!!!
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Panchali enjoyed the cool water touch her feet and crossed the stream with Arjun holding her carefully. The Amavasya night is devoid of moon with only the stars shining in the sky. Panchali sat on a rock and relaxed with Arjun looking impatient as the brothers must have gone ahead by some yards. Let us go Krishnaa" he said stretching his hand to her. Why? They said they will stop as we spend the night there.Let us stay for a while Arjun." She said. Arjun approached her and tried to explain.' You know,it is not safe to be here. We don't have even the firesticks . Sahadev held them. Let us join them ." He made her get up and tried to take her on his shoulder but she refused and took steps hurriedly with a smirk on her face.Within a minute she let out a wail and sat down taking her foot by her hand. Arjun felt bad for her and lifted her,placed her on a rock and took her foot in his hand. There is a thorn that struck in her delicate foot that he carefully plucked it out. Panchali tried to take her foot away and Arjun did not let it happen.He washed her feet and wiped them clean. He then clasped her waist and looked deep into her eyes.' Don't be angry with me Krishnaa,We have to spend one year apart. You know how I have to spend this one year.With your face like this I cant move ahead." Panchali's heart melted. Still she did not say anything but she ran her hand through his hair.Arjun continued.' You know this place is dangerous. I know it before. The Tribals here are too cruel and surface suddenly. Previously I fought with them and defeated them.Now if they attack from anywhere I have to raise my Dhanush.Then Bhrata Bheem also will get involved. Within a short while Duryothan will come to know that we passed through this way." Panchali looked at him with wide eyes. If that happens they have to repeat Exile and...She shivered with fear. No she could not bear the torture again. The separation from her children Killed her zeal to live. She did not express it with the fear of demoralising the brothers.Arjun understood her thoughts. He took her face in his hands and kissed her passionately.' Krishnaa let me live through my period of curse with this lovely moment . I will cherish it and survive." Panchali hugged him and kissed him in return. ' yes Arjun,I also live through this moment. Please forgive my childishness." Arjun smiled and took her smile into his heart keeping it safe there. ...Two days after they came to the outskirts of Matsya Kingdom. They kept their Weapons on a Samitree and placed a dead body on that and tied it up. Arjun had moisture in his eyes. He never left his Gandiv after he got it from Fire God. Panchali observed him and said in a low voice.' You left me twelve years.Now you feel so much to leave your Gandiv,Not fair." Arjun understood she is trying to divert him from gloom.He closed his eyes and felt his Madhav before him with a smile.' Go ahead Parh,you will take back your Gandiv and achieve the greatest triumph at the end. Don't look sad." Arjun wiped his eyes and smiled at her...King Virat is looking at that peculiar man with surprise.He or She he could not decide.His manliness is covered by the way he dressed up.His dark complexion that has a natural shine is covered by the Kanchuk( blouse) and the long Saree he wore differently.His shoulders with bow marks were hidden under big Sankha valayas that were held there.The long curly hair was tied up in a bun .He is looking like The Sun God covered by mist.King Virat wondered.' Is it Vishnu in this odd attire? " The courtesans along with Kank(Dharma Raj) are watching him with curiosity.In the meanwhile The peculiar Man approached the King and said.' By my bad luck I got into this state.O king! Get me into your service. I am an expert with dance and music.My name is Brihannala." Virat was spellbound.He exclaimed.' I can't believe your words. If you agree I will present you my best Dhanush,Kavach and prosperity.Accept the honour." The man replied firmly.' I am enduring the result of my Karm. There is no other way I can escape from this state.Please grant me what I want.I can teach dance to those who are unaware of anything related to dance.I know all types of dance. I also know drama acting also.Let your daughter learn this art from me.Other than that I don't want anything." Virat's heart melted towards Brihannala.He immediately summoned Uttara. The princess came and folded her hands.The beautiful fifteen year old girl is directed by her father to worship her Guru Brihannala with all the formalities. Virat instructed his daughter with affection.' My dear daughter.Spare some time for dance and learn from your teacher. Honour him and look after his needs." Uttara did Pranam and lead Brihannala to Antahpur.The same day Queen Sudheshna happened to see a very beautiful woman walk before the royal palace . She peeped through the window wondering at the breathtakingly beautiful woman walk with dignity and style making the citizens wonder if she is a Devine maiden came to grace Virat kingdom.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice 😊 you described brihannala so well 😳
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Sudeshna called her maid and asked her to bring the beautiful lady to her presence. Within minutes she had before her the woman who made her forget to blink her eyes . The lady is perfect in every limb ,delicate ,regal and with stunning features. Her lotus eyes are naturally black even without Kajal. The light pink colour lips are like rose petals.The sharp cute nose is enhancing the beauty of her face. She wore a very simple saree and had a veil that hid her hair that is thick,lustrous,curly and Sudheshna never saw such great hair before. The hair was partly tied up in a bun but due to the length of the hair she left half of that hanging down reaching just above her hips.The dark complexion doubled her beauty and Sudheshna could not help but think.' Fair colour is outdated. The dark complexion only seems like ruling the roost. As Sudheshna could not come out of her trance Draupadi folded her hands and smiled at her. The pearl like teeth made her smile mesmarisingly winsome,Sudheshna touched her hands preventing her from folding her hands for a longer time.' Who are you ? I never saw you in our kingdom before?" Sudheshna's straight question got her an equally straight answer.' I am Malini. I belong to Sairandhri race. Due to some reason,I have to spend one year away from my husband. So I came to take shelter with you." Sudheshna did not believe her words.' You and Sairandhri? No it can't be true.You must be of Devine origin. Tell the truth." Draupadi smiled and said.' Previously I worked with Satyabhama and Draupadi.I know different hairstyles and make up methods. I can also weave flowers in different ways.I will never do lower services . I request you not to engage me in such work. " Still Sudheshna is halfhearted.' How could I have you in my Antahpur? Even my husband may lose control on seeing your beauty.You are can make women also spellbound with your looks. What to talk about men? I don't think it is advisable to keep you with me." Panchali's face became serious.' I have the protection of five Gandharvas who are my lords. If anyone deals with me in a bad way they will punish them with death. And I am a Pativrata who never give way to such thoughts about others. Now leave your doubts and engage me in your service." Sudheshna felt attracted towards that beautiful lady embellished with dignity and self respect. She at once accepted her and arranged the required facilities for Draupadi. After a while Uttara came to her mother with excitement and hugged her. ' mata I learnt the first lesson in dance. You know how good my teacher is? Tomorrow onwards I will spend more time in my NatyaSala with my teacher. " Sudheshna smiled at her childishness and introduced Sairandhri to her. Uttara is awestruck like her mother. As for Draupadi she instantly liked Uttara for her cuteness and energy. But she is miffed and thought.' Always blessed with the company of beautiful girls.Even destiny also brings him closer to them." The next day Arjun finished his dance class and gave a break to Uttara who is too happy to discuss her tastes and hobbies with him. Just then Arjun saw the familiar pair of tender feet stop behind the thick curtain. He sighed with relief. So she successfully entered inside the AntahpurArjun asked Uttara to go and relax for a short while as he will teach her difficult mudras . Uttara went off with her maids. Arjun walked towards the curtain and without moving it kept his hand on it feeling the touch of his Krishnaa.' How are you?" He asked in a broken voice. The result of his fishtargret victory is laughing at him in the form of making his wife a servant maid.Panchali understood his trauma.' Don't stress yourself. I will be fine. Take care of yourself." She said with concern. Arjun did not reply. Panchali taunted him.' Beautiful princess already impressed. What more should I see? " Arjun forgot his gloom and laughed.' My jealous wife remains the same.Wherever she is." Uttara rushed in and called. ' Brihannala,I am ready. Come fast."
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow di1!! I jus loved tht how described panchali!!!!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanq Mahima. Hope you enjoy the ARDI scenes in Virat Parv.
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