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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Starfish13

Omg I nearly cried and I hate crying that was awesome also as u know I'm a big ardi fan however in mahabarat on star plus I thought bheem stood up for draupadi more than arjun but I would love to see way more ardi moments

Well,I am crying while writing the updates. But can't help .It is a part of their life. I promise I will continue to give ArDi moments even in their forest life through flash backs.
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Posted: 8 years ago
nehi!!! mujhse bardasht nehi hogi!!! mere pyaare kiriti!! kyun!!
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Note: I would like to,tell my readers that as much as I try hard,I am unable to get the required energy to take my fingers towards typing process and the reason is my anger,frustration and depression towards the treacherous crime committed by the offenders of the purest, most pious and the most dignified lady Panchali,the love of my Parth . So I decide to do it as briefly as I can giving more importance to the aspect of devotion that both Parth and Panchali had for their Madhav and Govind. I firmly believe that Phalgun would definitely take resort to his soul mate !his Madhav in this most crucial hour of his life. He was helpless but not his Madhav,the supreme Being.So... ' I would stake my whole Kingdom along with its people, ". Arjun couldn't believe his ears. He knew his Eldest's obsession for the game. He also witnessed how manupilative. Sakuni and Duryothan are. They goaded him into losing every thing the most valuable treasury of Indraprasth that became the envy of Aryavarth. But the kingdom itself as a stake? How carefully they built that heaven on earth how generous Maya was when he constructed the beautiful Royal palaces,the gardens,the Mayasabha, everything for their sake ,no to repay his gratitude to him.And the conquests ,The Khandava Dahan the contributions towards sovereignty . The abode of his queen,his wives his children is at stake. Bheem opened his mouth to protest. But it is too late. The Dice coins spelt doom for them.Sakuni won their whole empire for Duryothan. Arjun desparately looked at his Eldest. ' please stop the game now. I can still get a home for us even if everything is lost. I have faith in my valour. Please stop it." The words did not come out. They stayed inside only as was his habit that was always criticised by Panchali and even Subhadra. What else is left now ? As he turned towards Bheem to make a gesture to move,he heard the most inhuman thing ever done in playing the Dice Game. Human staking? These people stooped to that extent to humiliate them? ' I stake Nakul on my part." Yudhishtir's voice was as clear as he always knew since his childhood. He looked at his dearest brother who enjoys life and loves to live life with vigour and energy. Within a moment Nakul became the slave of Duryodhan, followed by his most intelligent brother Sahadev. Now came his turn to face the ultimate . Kunti's words rang in his ears.' Come what may, don't disobey your Eldest." And the final moment arrived . His endearingly honest and mighty brother Bheemsen became the slave of Duryodhan,who is clapping and shouting. He saw the same expression in the eyes of Angaraj,his arch rival who is enjoying the proceedings. Arjun wondered how could they feel happy by attaining something not through valour but by deceit. To his disgust ,Sakuni made his Eldest lose himself as a stake. He looked at his Eldest who bent his head down and found moisture in his eyes. He knew his Eldest must have thought that he could win Hastinapur for her.Poor Eldest,he was wrong in understanding Panchali who never wished luxuries,power,or a crown of Empress. She is happy being herself loving her children,loving her home and loving her ...Arjun. Suddenly he heard Sakuni mentioning Panchali's name. He was stupified. He was dumbfounded. What is going to happen to his Krishnaa? How can his Eldest stake her like an object or a thing? Surely he will consult them before taking such drastic step. But no . Yudhishtir is describing her before the whole assembly.' The lotus eyed beauty,the one with curly hair...Arjun got tears in his eyes. Even Bheem was stupified. Nakul and Sahadev had sweat on their forehead . Sakuni is laughing loudly Duryothan is sarcastic.' Your queen became our slave. Let her come and clean the Sabha." He ordered. Vidur got angry and approached Dhritarashtr. 'Atleast stop now this horrible happenings. When Kansa brought doom to Vrishni clan. Krishna killed him and saved the clan. Send the son of Indra who is wise and capable to control Duryothan.He will do the needful. If Draupadi is brought here your whole clan and your sons will meet their downfall." But The revered Jyesht Pita ignored Kakasri's words. And to his horror Arjun saw his life support system dragged by hair by that Dussasan ,mercilessly. The curly hair that became the topic for his poetry is sweeping the floor.the elbows were ruptured,blood started at the corner of her lips and the lotus eyes locked his eyes in disbelief. He who always protected her from these vily people since their marriage is sitting helplessly waiting as if for a miracle to happen. He did not allow them to tease her in Indraprasth,in Hastinapur but why is he silent in the face of such wretched treatment meted out to her before his eyes. Draupadi took her eyes away from him as if abandoning him for a lifetime. Arjun heard her question asked in a firm and clear voice.' How can Eldest stake me after he lost himself?" Arjun wondered at her integrity and self belief. Why didn't he think in these lines before? How could Eldest have the right having lost himself?" Grandfather who is shedding tears replied. ' My child,Either Yudhishtir or your other husbands have to answer your question." Arjun firmly stated. ' He is our master before he lost himself. Now the learned people should decide whose master he is." Vikarna is furious.' How can Yudhishtir stake Draupadi who is a common wife for all the five? He is not her sole master.He can not do so." Arjun looked at Vikarn gratefully. The real point is brought out Atleast by this noble brother of his. How could Eldest stake her as if she is his property?" Karna scolded Vikarn.' Don't meddle in matters that are beyond your age. This Draupadi is a wh**e She has five husbands. Which chaste lady will have more than one husband? There is nothing wrong even if she is made naked in this assembly. " Arjun 's whole conscience became paralysed. His body started aching. He could'nt see his Krishnaa as tears blurred his vision. Karn stoops to this level? He knew he hates him but he would like to take revenge in such a way? " he vaguely heard Bheem roaring like a lion as Duryothan dared to show his thighs to Panchali to sit as Karna advised her to select another husband who can protect her well. ' I will crush your thighs and kill you and Arjun will kill this wretched Sutputra Karn." Bheem declared ferociously. Duryothan laughed loudly and ordered Dussasan to take away the robes of Draupadi and Pandavas. The five of them removed their upper garments and Dussasan approached Draupadi. Arjun closed his eyes.' When you become helpless I will save my Sakhi. She is my responsibility." It became crystal clear before his eyes why he won't be able to save his wife . Madhav,I am helpless to save the dignity of my life. Keep your promise. Save your Sakhi.Madhav. My valour is waste. My life itself is waste. If something happens you won't see your Sakhi and Parth alive.Dont delay. Come fast Madhav." Panchali had tears rolling down. Dussasan is pulling her Pallu with force and she won't be able to resist anymore. Her saviour her Bhagawan has to come and redeem her.Panchali closed her eyes and prayed.' Hey Krishna,Govinda,Vaasudeva,Narayana Hare,Pahimam,Rakshamam." .. Narayan ,Pundarikaksh,Jagannadh,Panchali's Govind and Parth's Madhav lifted his hand. Graced his Sakhi with unending lustrous long sary that covered her fully and made Dussasan tired of pulling the saree. The garment became a big hill,of sorts making the onlookers wonder and praise the devotional power and chastity of Draupadi. Arjun opened his eyes to see the grace and love of Madhav that made His Krishnaa stand tall while all the others looked like pitiful creatures who will be burnt by the power of a sati. He sighed with relief with tears in his eyes. ' Madhav, you kept your promise. You redeemed us. You stood by your Sakhi and proved your love for her. You gave me life." Arjun thanked his Madhav again and again. ' Trijaganmohana Neela Kanti Tanuvuddipimpa...The blue colour of his form is mesmerising the three worlds,the yellow garment is flying in the air, The beautiful curls falling on the face is making him look ravishing Such beautiful Lord who always comes to his Parth and grace him should bless us all and live in our hearts.
Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I don't know what to write. This story from the very beginning is so beautifully written and this last chapter is so emotional and powerful. Thanks for continuing this story with great dedication. Your story is such a pleasure to read. I don't comment often but I always liked your posts and this one brought tears to my eyes. Looking forward to seeing this move forward.
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Posted: 8 years ago
You have written it so well 👏 i was scared to read this part but you wrote it in a way that i was able to read it! Loved it! Plz continue soon I'm eagerly waiting to read the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
One word wow I could feel the pain and as someone said above I was dreading to read this update it brought tears to my eyes. Can't wait for your next update:) ardi for life
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Arjun heard Bheem become mad with anger and declare." I will kill Dussasan by piercing his chest.I will drink his blood." He saw his Krishnaa get shattered and sit on the floor with head in her knees. Gandhari and Kunti who went to Siva temple at the outskirts returned to face the most gruesome sight ,the pride of their clan is insulted ,harassed and could survive the horrific treatment only through her devotional power and self belief. Gandhari rushed to her and hugged her just in time before Panchali could pronounce the curse that will destroy the whole Kuru clan.' Don't curse the Kuruclan Panchali.They were already burnt by their misdeeds . Grace us Putri. "Kunti shivered with sorrow on seeing her daughter in law face the dreadful offence done by her own people. She looked at her Eldest who ruined himself and who ruined his brothers. But above all he committed the most sinful act in the history of Kurus,staking his wife no the wife of his brothers also. King Nala in the past played the game of dice and lost his kingdom. But he never lost himself nor did he stake his life. Kunti could not look at Arjun whose hands got tied up by none other than his mother. Why did she share her Bahu with all the five? To see this day on which she was made to lose her freedom and get insulted by her husband's own brothers. And what did her first born do? She looked at Karna who she heard is the one that instigated Duryothan to disrobe Draupadi. She would certainly feel ashamed of being the mother of one who couldn't respect a woman,a mother and a wife. Gandhari approached Dhritrashtr and warned him.' Maharaj,you are physically handicapped. Now you became mentally handicapped. Do you know the repercussions of this unpardonable crime committed towards the honour of Kurus. Who do you think she is? She is Sakti that came to punish the evil on this earth. Redeem yourself by giving Pandavas their kingdom. Otherwise you will see before you the fire of Panchali's anger wipe off your Duryodhan along with the clan." At that moments the courtesans heard the cries of jackals and owls and the sacrificial fire that exist twenty four hours in the Worship place extinguished. The Brahmins raised their voices.' These are the indications for total destruction.The result of insulting a Pativrata and a great devotee.Certainly Kuruvamsh will meet with disasters." Arjun saw Gandhari help Panchali stand up and take her to Dhritarashtr who getting afraid by the bad omens granted her boons. Panchali said.' Prativindhya should not be called a servant's son. Let his father get back his freedom. Relieve the remaining four with their weapons. " She didn't ask the kingdom back. She knew with weapons in hand they can achieve whatever they lost.Dhritrashtr granted the kingdom of Pandavas back much to the dissatisfaction of Duryodhan. Arjun bent his face in shame. She won him back his freedom and kingdom also. But what did he do? He didn't even speak a word in her support when she stood on the threshold of losing her dignity. ...Arjun wore saffron robes for the second time after his pilgrimage.The Destiny laughed at them hinting that their trials did not end but actually commenced from then.Going against the protests of Kunti and Gandhari Yudhishtir accepted the invitation for the second dice game and lost again. This time they have to go for twelve years of exile and one year of incognito. Kunti wept uncontrollably seeing her sons and Bahu prepare to leave from Hastinapur itself. She hugged Sahadev and wailed.' Don't go Putr. You are my youngest. You be with me ,I can not live without you.Sahadev nodded his head with tears indicating he could not stay back. Panchali 's face wore a detached look as she handed over Pragati to her mother in law feeding her for the last time. She did not even have tears in her eyes.Kunti wept bitterly.' Your father and Madri passed away much before and are fortunate not to see this day in your lives. I am the most unfortunate on this earth. I have to live away from you in this old age. I would also accompany you to the forest. " but Vidur did not agree. ' Sisterin law it is not the age for you to face the troubles of forest life. You should be with your husband's younger brother. Permit me to serve you. " Arjun took Pragati in his arms and kissed her again and again. His little princess is unaware of the happenings in their lives. So she is giggling merrily in his hands. He can not see her grow up,he can not enjoy her tantrums ...Arjun gave her back wiping off his tears and turned his back to his mother to follow his Eldest.Kunti could not control herself. She ran to him and clasping him tight pleaded with him in broken voice,' Forgive me Phalgun"Arjun hugged her dearly and thought.' For what Mata? For sharing her against her will? If she was not shared she would have been safe like Subhadra,like Jalandhara,like Karenu,like Vijaya and finally like Devika."
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babloo_mka

I don't know what to write. This story from the very beginning is so beautifully written and this last chapter is so emotional and powerful. Thanks for continuing this story with great dedication. Your story is such a pleasure to read. I don't comment often but I always liked your posts and this one brought tears to my eyes. Looking forward to seeing this move forward.

Thanq for your encouraging words. It feels nice after writing the most difficult part of the Epic. Hope I would live up to the expectations further.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahiima16

You have written it so well 👏 i was scared to read this part but you wrote it in a way that i was able to read it! Loved it! Plz continue soon I'm eagerly waiting to read the next part.

I tried my best to make it simple and to the point. Thank you for appreciating the effort.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Starfish13

One word wow I could feel the pain and as someone said above I was dreading to read this update it brought tears to my eyes. Can't wait for your next update:) ardi for life

Like you are dreading to read,I am dreading to write. But finally I dared.It is too painful.
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