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Posted: 8 years ago
so happy diwali to all!!!🥳 @laxmi di, did u started writing on OS as per genre? waiting to know...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: naturelover33

Welcome back yukti!!!🤗

hey aanvi! 🤗 missed the enthusiastic you!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Happy Diwali Yukti. It is a pleasure always to have you here.I agree with you about the forthcoming events. I am scared to write the part. But then I would definitely write Arjun's trauma and why he couldn't act when his dearest wife is insulted and humiliated. I also believe that God throws us sufferings and happiness also in our share. Those who come out unscathed are the blessed people. I feel we should take inspiration from ArDi to face hurdles and come out as winners. In my story Panchali belongs to Arjun only as Kunti extended their period. It was not mentioned in the Epic to whom she belonged that year. But Vikarn certainly raised the point when he says' Yudhishtir did not have the right to stake her. She belongs to five of them." Point valid. But making her a stake without consulting the brothers makes me angry and dejected. ...Any way I am planning to show the undeterred love of ArDi towards each other even in such calamities. Finally I am too happy to have you here on Diwali. You may not believe it but I thought in the morning ' Yukti became that busy that she can not even peep here even for Diwali. Is she not interested to see the OS that she motivated and encouraged heartfully? But you came now,I am delighted. I will always wait for your feed back.

I have exams till the end of this month..so I hardly have time to use my phone or laptop. but whenever i can, i do drop by to read, like and comment. I can never lose interest where Arjun and Draupadi are concerned. I'll drop by here as often as i can.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wishing you all a very happy diwali! 🥳
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Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

hey aanvi! 🤗 missed the enthusiastic you!

thanks!!😆 so to see my, to say ours pagalpanti, visit and join this CC!!😆 Now it's ur choice whether to be a spectator, or to join this pagalkhana!!😆 cuz we're tired of Pms' scrap and replying of different threads!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow that was an amazing update I can't stop reading this
This is a job well done like seriously
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Starfish13

Wow that was an amazing update I can't stop reading this
This is a job well done like seriously

Thanq. It feels good if the stuff I write enthrals the readers.Do comment on the forth coming crucial updates.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Arjun took Vidur to Yudhishtir and elaborated the purpose of his visit. Vidur advised without hesitation.' Refuse the invitation. Nothing happens then. But if you come over there everything will be lost." Yudhishtir Is in dilemma. ' How could I refuse Jyesht Pitasri? He is a father figure to me. Also If we get invitation for war or dice game,we should not reject. That is the norm of Kshatriyas." Bheem exploded. ' When Kakasri himself is revealing their bad intention why should we accept their call ? Eldest,be sensible. Reject their invitation." Nakul supported Bheem.' Eldest we established the Empire of Dharma here with hard work and with Krishna's help. Let us not forego this due to that wicked Duryothan. " Arjun asked Vidur. ' What did grandfather say ? Did he try to stop Duryothan?" Vidur replied desparately.' He did. But Duryothan is adamant. He did not consider Your Grand Father's counciling." Sahadev remained silent through out. Kunti pleaded with Yudhishtir. ' Eldest. Think properly and take a decision.Think about our people,our family and our dependents." She had tears in her eyes. Draupadi who is trying to make Pragati sleep in her lap said. ' Atleast we should think of our children and their future. All this prosperity did not come into our lap all of a sudden. So much hard work went into the establishment of Indraprasth." Arjun suggested.' Since Madhav is busy with Salva war let us say we will honour their call once he becomes free. We never did anything without his council. Even to take a decision about Rajasuya,we called him here to guide us. So let us gain time till Madhav comes." Vidur applauded Arjun. ' That is perfect Arjun,I know you will find a way out." Kunti supported Arjun. ' Eldest,let Kanha come from Dwaraka. We won't decide anything without him." Panchali cast an appreciating look at Arjun. But Yufhishtir did not relent. ' How can I make Jyesht Pita wait like that? It is not proper. He may feel bad." Panchali got irritated and burst out. ' Fine. You all can go . But I will stay back at Indraprasth with my children. Anyway Dice game is for men. What will I do there ?" Yudhishtir is firm.' There will be a protocall for the Empress. Didn't Ganthari Mata and Bhanumati come .. here for Rajasuya? You should follow that norm." Panchali wished to tell him that Ganthari came all the way to IndraPrasth to see Arjun and Draupadi's children.But kept quiet thinking it is waste of effort to try and change his mind when he already took a decision. Yudhishtir declared.' I know Dice game is the worst vice. But I have to honour Jyesht Pita's word. Let us send our sons to Panchal with Priyamvada Masi. Let Devika,Karenu and Vijaya go to their parents. We will see what we have to face as per out fate." Every one was dumbfounded. Arjun remembered Krishna's words and Sahadev's prediction.No one can change that what is ordained in our fate. He thought desparately. Atleast Eldest should have allowed Panchali to go to Panchal. That would have been a great relief. Bheem Is miffed and irritated. Nakul threw his hands up in despair. Sahadev silently walked off. ...In the night Arjun faced the fire of his Fireborn with concern and helplessness. She reiterated the fact .' I always told you I don't want this crown,I don't want to be the Empress. Now see,how I was compelled to do what I hate the most. And you didn't say anything." She burst out and hid her face in her knees. Arjun took her into his arms and tried to pacify.' I know.I am your offender. I thought atleast we can wait till Madhav comes. No.that is not possible.You don't know how I hate myself when I see you like this. I broke the promise made at the time of marriage that I will look after you always and stand by you. I hate myself for that." Panchali looked into his eyes that are depicting his heartfelt sorrow for not being able to do anything. The architect of their fortune and prosperity could not do anything before his Eldest. But she knew his weakness since begining.What is new now? Panchali clasped his neck with her beautiful palms and assured him.' Let us face anything together. Don't blame yourself. I can't see you sad just like you can't see me in worry. Let us be together in happiness and sadness. " Arjun got tears in his eyes seeing her undeterred love. If only he becomes worthy of her love,then his life will be blessed. He hugged her closer and closer and closer.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg I nearly cried and I hate crying that was awesome also as u know I'm a big ardi fan however in mahabarat on star plus I thought bheem stood up for draupadi more than arjun but I would love to see way more ardi moments
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Posted: 8 years ago
It has been a difficult task to convince Kirti to go to Panchal. But eventually Arjun managed. He reminded him the scornful faces of Duryothan and his friends whom Kirti hated so much.' My son,you won't enjoy much in Hastinapur. You go to dhrisht Mama ,he will make you play games and your grandfather loves you so much. We will come and pick you up. Then we will return back to Indraprasth." Kirti agreed halfheartedly but hugged Panchali and insisted. ' Mata won't go there.She and Pragati should come with me." Draupadi looked at Arjun with tears. Arjun lifted Kirti and looking into his eyes,said in a soft voice.' Kirti,is Arjun's son. He will be brave and he will wait for Mata at Panchal. We will come in very short while." Kirti looked at his father and grasped the essence. Yes,he heard so many times from so many people that his father is great. Abhi always told him it is special to be Arjun's sons.Panchali kissed him and promised.' I love you more than Pragati. More than your Pitasri.You will listen to me no?," Kirti kissed her back and promised.' I will go to Panchal. But do come soon." The next day The Five sons were sent to Panchal under the escort of one of the chief commanders of Arjun. Priyamvada accompanied them while Malini made arrangements to follow Panchali.That day in Indraprasth Panchali did not eat lunch and refused to budge even if Kunti insisted. Bheem felt bad and expressed his anguish.' Why would Eldest not realise our feelings? Why should our sons leave their Kingdom and go to Panchal like refugees? I would like to break the head of that Duryothan and teach him a lesson.Arjun,I told you not to keep that fellow inside Indraprasth. Now see what happened." Kunti called her four sons to her chamber that evening.she is looking disturbed. 'My sons,come what may be united.Dont let your rivals win by losing your unity. Bheem be calm in the face of calamity. Phalgun,promise me you will take care of keeping unity among your brothers.Even at the cost of losing happiness you will obey your Eldest.Promise me." Arjun was bewildered.Will he be able to keep her word? Kunti took his hand. 'There is so much left to be done by you as per the prediction.I know you will restore the kingdom even if Eldest loses it.I feel relieved if you honour my word." Arjun nodded with a blank face.' Madhav,where are you? Drag me out of this confusion." He pleaded with his Madhav.Early next morning they started their journey along with Vidur. Kunti and Panchali occupied one chariot with Pragati. The journey was tedious and as expected,Panchali's period started as soon as they reached there. Gandhari is concerned and arranged a separate room for her away from the women's apartments.The wives of Kauravas and other relatives were spellbound on seeing her Devine beauty.Bhanumati looked after her needs and attended on her. Panchali gave Pragati to her mother in law after feeding her. She can't even meet Arjun as per the strict rules followed by Kuru women when they menstruated.She could not get sleep and stayed awake thinking of Kirti. Govind,why are you not here? Please save us from any kind of embarrassment . " As she continued her prayer,the Sun rose on the most dreadful day in the history of Panchali ,in the history of Arjun and in the history of mankind.
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