Thefateful evening......arjun.Draupadi os - Page 83

Wow! This is one of the best scene between ArDi I've ever read! 👏 😳 it was beautiful ❤️ I loved it! 😃

uff di!! the description was like maar dala!!!but last...🤬

Originally posted by: Mahiima16

Wow! This is one of the best scene between ArDi I've ever read! 👏 😳 it was beautiful ❤️ I loved it! 😃

One of the last loving moments spent before they get effected by the filthiest incident ever happened in the life of a woman,a wife,a mother and a queen.

Bheem became a proud father of a son again. News reached from Kasi that Jalanthara delivered a boy and both mother and son are doing well. The next generation is prospering.thought Kunti. By god's grace her sons are flourishing and right now they are the most powerful in Aryavarth. But these days she is having an unknown fear haunting her day and night. Will Duryothan be at peace after seeing the glory of her sons? She could not forget his scornful face when he received the gifts and when Yudhishtir was declared the Emperor.Kanha,save my sons. She again and again pleaded with him...Arjun got the iMessage from Krishna. As expected the battle with Salva awaited them as soon as they reached Dwaraka. Krishna reminded Arjun his assurance and asked him to be alert and take care of Panchali...Again Arjun got absorbed in thoughts. What will happen to Krishnaa ? How could he become helpless in protecting her? Sahadev still is gloomy and disturbed. Arjun again tried his best to extract information. Sahadev said only one line.' Bhrata stars are not favourable.A great calamity may happen. But I can't specifically tell what it could be." That evening he took Pragati to roam in the garden. The little one enjoys evening shire. Arjun showed her beautiful flowers and singing birds. The sun Set is about to happen.the golden hue has spread with reddish Prakash .Arjun remembered the tune that was played on flute by his Madhav when they went to Yamuna. It was in Raag Kalyani. Krishna created a Devine melody that was too sweet and soothing. Parth,create a song in this tune it will be enchanting if you sing and I play the tune on flute. Madhav persuaded him. That time he spontaneously created lyrics and sang that . Madhav liked it immensely and praised him. Arjun started humming the song keeping Pragati on his lap. The Raag Kalyani cast its spell and Arjun forgot the surroundings. It being the Sampurna Raag, it gave him ample scope to make permutations and combinations with the seven letters of music Sa,Ri,Ga,Ma,Pa Da ,Ni. Panchali who came there in search of the father and daughter lost herself in the melody of his voice and the captivating song. The lyrics were so beautiful,she wondered if he is praising his dream woman in that song. ' o lotus eyed wonder,just cast your glance ,I will be elated. I That is the mukhda of that song.Panchali took Pragati from him and he stopped. But again continued with a charming smile. Stana vinihitamapi Haramudaram The Haar that dances on your breasts feels proud,It teases me do you have this good fortune? O lotus Eyed beauty,cast your glance at me I feel elated. The darkness pervaded around. Arjun smilingly took away the Haar hanging on her heart. Panchali pretended anger. Sphuradarunadhara Sudharasa Pana Chittam...I will be intoxicated if you allow me to drink the nectar that is there in your lips, O lotus Eyed beauty,cast your glance at me. Arjun pulled her nearer and touched her lips with his finger. Panchali bit her lower lip controlling herself otherwise she would submit herself to him not thinking of the place and time. Pragati giggled making them aware of her presence. Arjun stopped his song and hugged his wife and daughter,This song is dedicated to the most beautiful woman of Aryavarth,He whispered in his husky voice. Panchali smiled with delight. I am blessed to be in your poems,to be sung in your voice. Arjun ,love me as you only can. Posess me as your own.Your Krishnaa feels elated,if you just cast your glance even...The two loving hearts stayed close with their daughter witnessing their passion and obsession that made them forget everything...A message came to Yudhishtir that very shortly Vidur will be in Indraprasth for some special purpose. Sahadev's face lost its glow on hearing that. Nakul wondered. ' why is Kakasri Vidur coming so soon? Just now he had left after Rajasuya." Bhim said. ' Kakasri must have decided to leave that foolish Duryothan and settle here with us. Isn't it Eldest? " Arjun guessed something fishy. Why would he come all the way to Indraprasth? He would have sent a message if he wants to convey any thing. Kunti is worried. What do you think Phalgun? Will there be any conspiracy ? Eldest, What do you feel? She asked. Arjun said thoughtfully. ' I guess something unfavourable to us. Why should he come suddenly? " Yufhishtir declared. ' whatever it is we should obey his word."

it's too good di!! LOVED THESE LOVELY MOMENTS!!👍🏼

Panchali could not control her irritation. ' I would definitely sense something crooked planned against us . Otherwise why would Kakasri come all of a sudden? And why should we obey their word if we are not comfortable with it? Ridiculous." Bheem immediately supported her. ' Eldest ,Panchali is good at counciling and judging things. We should not discard her words." Yudhishtir's face turned grim . He said firmly .' Bheem, We became the Emperors of Aryavarth ,that does not mean we should forget our roots. We are indebted to Hastinapur. After father passed away they took us under their wings and protected us. Arjun controlled himself from retorting.Why should his Eldest deceive himself and deceive them also by ignoring the hostility with which they were treated in Hastinapur.As he came out of his thoughts a verbal dual is going on between Bheem and Yudhishtir. Arjun prevented Bheem from saying more. ' Let us first see what message we get from them. Then we can think over it. Kunti sighed in relief. Her Phalgun got the presence of mind. He would help Yudhishtir see reason while taking decision. But she is still afraid for Yudhishtir's obsession for his Elders. He may not listen even to Phalgun.Panchali took Pragati from Kunti and moved away. Her dissent and displeasure is quite visible in her expressions.Arjun understood her feelings. Surely she is reasonable in every word she spoke. But who will accept her advice? Eldest? Never. Arjun became busy making arrangements for Vidur's stay at Indraprasth. During dinner time he observed Panchali calm and withdrawn not her usual cheerful self at all. Bheem is trying hard to change her mood desparately. But his Fireborn is adamant. She definitely is not in a mood to entertain the wild ways of Duryothan. Arjun purposely stayed back till she finished her work and accompanied her to her chamber. He waited patiently till his children slept peacefully..Then he took Panchali's hand and said. Let us go.Panchali questioned with her eyes. Arjun assured her . We will return in a while. Any way they won't get up that soon. Malini will take care. " panchali followed him as she knew the unpredictable ways of her husband. Any way she also wants to relax as her mood was spoilt by the impending visit of Vidur. Arjun took her to the garden and lead her to his horse which is waiting there.Arjun,where are you taking me?let us sit here.We can't go far. Pragati will get up. ' No she won't.You only told me she will sleep three hours continuously at this time of night." Arjun did not wait for her approval.He got onto the horse and lifted her up,made her sit comfortably in the front. The horse galloped and took a shorter way unknown to Panchali and within fifteen minutes Panchali got wonderstruck on seeing the Yamuna waters shining in moonlight.' Arjun,Yamuna is that nearer to us? I never knew." Arjun laughed heartfully. Yamuna is where she is. Only thing is we should explore newer and shorter ways to reach." He helped her get down and carefully lead her to the shore.The river is shining lustrous with the splendour of moonlit night.The silence is soothing and Panchali felt so relaxed. Arjun took her to the raft stationed near the shore and before she could react lifted her and placed her in that.He took the Pole that is used to drive the boat and skilfully took the boat into the middle of the river. Panchali gazed into his charming face,curly hair falling on his eyes She instantly kept it back and murmured. Am I in dream? Why am I feeling that this is the same day on which we went in this raft in Panchal? Arjun,how nice it is if time stays here. Without moving? I hate to go to Hastinapur. I hate to see their faces. " Arjun got up and took her face in his hands and looked into those lotus eyes. ' Krishnaa, I don't know why but even I wish this moment stops here.I don't want to go to Hastinapur either. But you know I can't resist Eldest.That is my weakness . " Panchali felt depressed. She moved away from him and fixed her gaze on the beautiful Yamuna waters. What will happen in their lives? Will they ever be able to be blissfully happy and contented? What is in store for them tomorrow? " Arjun held her from behind and kept his face on her shoulder. ' Forgive me Krishnaa for everything " he uttered the words reminiscing the past and dreading for the future.

the last happy moment of ArDi...🤢😭

Panchali continued looking into the Yamuna waters that are flowing without tides . Just the mild sound of the water and nothing else. Everything stood still indicating the calmness before the storm. The white silk Pallu is flying in the air again and again touching Arjun's face. The jasmines in her hair are spreading the fragrance as if vying with the blue lotus fragrance.Arjun clasped her waist tightly and turned her towards him. ' isn't it beautiful,the ambience ,the nature ? We can not experience this in our closed doors though they are made up,of jewels and diamonds." Panchali wondered at his Prakritiprem. The hero who developed Indraprasth into heaven always prefers nature's lap to his luxurious bejewelled chambers. He is different from others.She thought so and instantly touched his hair again trying to keep it back. Arjun swallowed her extraordinary beauty with his hazel eyes.He made her lie down on the smooth silk carpet that was there in the raft. Panchali understood the desire in his eyes. She bit her lower lip and said.' Let us go. Pragati will wake up." Arjun gave a peck on her neck and said with confidence.'She won't.She knew her father has to explore the beauty of her mother and is busy." Panchali's face became red.' Surely you are becoming bold day by day. " she patted on his cheek as if giving a warning.Arjun continued his worship and confessed. ' I am helpless and still trying my best to know the secrets of your beauty." Panchali blushed and tried to get up as the moon was covered by deep black clouds suddenly. There is thunder and lightening in the sky. Arjun,let us go ,it may rain now. We are in the middle of the river." Arjun smiled bewitchingly.' The princess of Panchal is getting afraid? But Arjun's wife should not fear,you know." The drizzle started and they both became wet. Arjun loosened her hair and spread it on her back. ' cover me with your hair Arala Kuntala ( The curly haired one)?He whispered in her ear. Panchali started enjoying the rainshower,the togetherness of her beloved husband.The Fireborn gifted him her warm hug and made him heated up with passion and desire.Arjun rewarded her by making her enjoy the special moment under the chath of the sky,in the midst of water, Panchali shivered with her overflowing love for her Arjun and uniting with him uninhibited,made it a memorable moment for both...The next morning Kunti observed her daughter in law sneezing continuously and asked. What happened? You have cold it seems. Kunti also observed the corners of her eyes turn reddish. Priyamvada smiled meaningfully and signalled Kunti not to ask further. Priyamvada knew that the princess is not there in the chamber for three hours previous night.By chance she went to fetch the keys of the ornaments Room nearing midnight as she forgot to take the ornaments of Durga Mata to be decorated early in the morning. She found Malini alone in the chamber and stayed till Arjun and Panchali returned.Panchali felt embarassed and did not say anything...Vidur arrived in Indraprasth and Arjun went to the outskirts to welcome him.'Kakasri,I know there is some important reason for your visit. It is always a pleasure to have you here. But I am curious to know it if you don't think otherwise." Arjun's words brought tears in Vidur's eyes. He instantly revealed everything.' Duryothan became mad with envy on seeing your prosperity. He convinced his father to call you all on the pretext of visiting the new Sabha Mandap built there. Sakuni planned to grab you of everything by making your Eldest play the game of Dice.You know Sakuni cheats. His magical power will make Yudhishtir lose everything. I know your Eldest is obsessed with the game.Prevent him Arjun,from accepting the invitation. Don't come to Hastinapur. You will be doomed." Arjun was shocked and stupified. He remembered Sahadev's words. ' A great calamity awaits us Bhrata,I don't know what it is". Now Arjun knew what it is.

Looks like i missed quite alot.

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

Looks like i missed quite alot.

Well, coming to the updates, they are Wonderful ! i liked it when arjun's wives were around..it was a bustling atmosphere then..now it seems..to..idk empty 😕

you did a great job with the recent ardi scenes..were a pleasure to read. 😳

though ik what calamity is to happen..i can feel arjun's raw tension and i'm as much as a wreck as him..i just dread whats coming up! the only reason i'm looking forward to read it is..because i want to see how arjun stands up for her. ⭐️bharat did a very good job in this sequence, and arjun was the pati who stood up for her the most..there were subtle and unsubtle scenes between Ardi even during this whole dice game. Looking forward to future updates..it'll be heartbreaking but there's no way around it. Ik you'll do justice to them.

I'll try dropping by to read and comment as much as i can.

ps - i had a question, in your story is it still arjun's year with draupadi during this whole incident?

Happy Diwali Yukti. It is a pleasure always to have you here.I agree with you about the forthcoming events. I am scared to write the part. But then I would definitely write Arjun's trauma and why he couldn't act when his dearest wife is insulted and humiliated. I also believe that God throws us sufferings and happiness also in our share. Those who come out unscathed are the blessed people. I feel we should take inspiration from ArDi to face hurdles and come out as winners. In my story Panchali belongs to Arjun only as Kunti extended their period. It was not mentioned in the Epic to whom she belonged that year. But Vikarn certainly raised the point when he says' Yudhishtir did not have the right to stake her. She belongs to five of them." Point valid. But making her a stake without consulting the brothers makes me angry and dejected. ...Any way I am planning to show the undeterred love of ArDi towards each other even in such calamities. Finally I am too happy to have you here on Diwali. You may not believe it but I thought in the morning ' Yukti became that busy that she can not even peep here even for Diwali. Is she not interested to see the OS that she motivated and encouraged heartfully? But you came now,I am delighted. I will always wait for your feed back.