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Posted: 9 years ago
Yajnaseni looked at her husband thoughtfully, Arjun will become busy with his preparations for Magadha journey, She may not be able to enjoy his presence as frequently as she does now, She cursed Jarasandha in her heart for making her part with Arjun at a crucial moment of her life, She knew she is not healthy enough to bear any complication this time, Arjun followed her line of thought carefully, He made her sit relaxingly on the couch, What is worrying you Krishnaa,Still time is there for our departure, Don't take much stress as it is not good for you or for our son, He leaned on the pillow beside her and felt the presence of his child , Draupadi ran her hand through his hair, What disguise you take to hold to Jarasandha? She asked curiously Brahmins,Arjun answered with a smile, Draupadi was surprised, She renmembered her swayamvar,He looked so handsome in that attire, Who will believe you? Jatasandh will easily recognise you The scars on your shoulders and your good looks will surely get you trapped,Then why was I not recognised by any of you in Panchal? Arjun asked challengingly, Panchalli replied with patience, That time no one expected you will come as abrahmin, Not even my father, Even your foolish cousins could not recognise you Iwonder, Arjun laughed at her way of mentioning Duryodan and others, Don't blame them. They could not come out of trance on seeing your extraordinary beauty, Poor fellows, They lost their brains, Panchali taunted him, But one great hero is there who did'nt even bother to look at me, I am sure you would have married any one without bothering as you cared for the fish target above anything, Arjun played with her hair which is in single plait, Sometimes we misunderstand someone by fault, Ican prove here itself that I am so absorbed in your beauty like any one else on that day, Draupadi knitted her eyebrows and asked, How? Arjun looked into her eyes sharply and said, After you came into the arena you changed your veil I think Malini did that, Draupadi was surprised, Yes, she did change her veil that is too heavy ,She asked Malini to replace it with a lighter one that is more transparent, Arjun observed her and continued, You looked at Madhav when Angraj approached the target, Draupadi agreed, Yes, I was worried if he would hit the target, Arjun continued, you are playing with your ring on your middle finger it fell down once to the next row where Dhrisht is sitting, Draupadi's face became red, Yes, She got tensed up and played with her ring and it fell down, Arjun mischeously smiled at her, When I came forward you stared at me then bent your face and started curling up your pallu end round your finger, Draupadi was spellbound, He observed her in detail, No doubt in it, Just when I have to take aim You looked at Madhav,he smiled at you and you closed your eyes for a second, You must have prayed for my success, Poor Arjun, The princess cheated him on seeing a handsome Brahmin take aim, She forgot that she should belong to Arjun, The way Arjun said those words made Draupadi angry and she retorted sharply, No need to blame me, Madhav told me that no one except you can hit the target, And he assured my father that you would definitely come to fulfill the prophesy, He conveyed the same through his look when you are about to hit the target, It is up to you to believe it or not, Arjun laughed heart fully, you know Krishnaa, you look so mesmerising when you get angry and quarrelling, Don't ever stop quarrelling, I will get bored, Draupadi took her hand from his hair and pushed him away, Don't ever suspect my father and me, we both are sincere and honest in our love, She said with a broken voice, Arjun Cajoled her, Don't get hurt, I never doubted you oryour father, By the way I won the argument, You should agree that I observed each and every move of yours, I forgot to tell one thing, When you are keeping back your curls I wondered when I will do that service for you and many other also, Draupadi blushed and Arjun was enamoured by her devastatingly beautiful face,
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Finally the day has arrived on which The three have to start for Magatha, The previous day Arjun took a promise from Draupadi that she would take care of her health and present her son when he comes back from Magadha, He particularly asked King Drupad to be with his daughter and take care of her, He told him with regret, I feel bad for leaving her in this state but I have to be with Bhrata Bheem, I hope you forgive me for my lapse, Drupad assured him, You did nothing wrong, She will be alright, You perform your duty, As the three of them appeared in Brahmin attire, Draupadi could not help but stare at Arjun who exactly looked like he did during her swayamvar, He approached her and whispered, Gone into Flashback? You just look like the dreamy eyed princess waiting to put the garland round my neck, Draupadi averted her gaze,embarrassed, She did Tilak and Arti to them and prayed to Ma Durga to bless them with success, Krishna asked Satya to take care of Draupadi, Arjun asked Subhadra to be alert with Abhimanyu as he became naughtier by then, As they started in the early hours even when darkness is still there Kunti and Yudhisthira prayed for their safe return,The three of them proceeded briskly and within three days crossed the rivers Kalakuta ,Sona,Gandaki and Sadanira, After that they reached Sarayu river adjacent to Kosala,ruled by Srirama, Then they crossed Mithila and reached river Bhagirathi, Arjun visited the plays during his pilgrimage, Then they travelled in eastern direction and reached the outskirts of Magadha, They ascended the mountain Gorath and saw The lavish palaces of Girivraj,the capital of Magadha, Arjun was awestruck on seeing the high security provided to the city, He asked Krishna, Madhav, the city is surrounded by hilly regions, Jarasantha surely has natural boundaries as his security officials, Krishna agreed, Parth,The give mountains called Goratha, Rishabha,naihara,Rishigiri and chaityakadri are protecting Girivraja on all sides, That is why it is called Girivraj, It is not advisable to enter through the main entrance, Bheem disagreed, Why should we go through other way? Let us use the main entrance, he said, Arjun convinced him, Bhrata Bheem We are not attacking him straight, We should use our brains to defeat Jarasandh, They then reached chaityaka hill, Krishna showed the Bheri Drums , This was made by the flesh of a big bull and three drums were made of it, If any outers entered here the drums will sound, Let us break these drums, As it is already nearing mid night not much security is there, Arjun and Bheem killed the few with silent kicks, Krishna then instructed them to destroy the drums without noise, It was done, The three of them were immensely happy as they destroyed the means of information about their arrival. They lied down there and decided to enter the city the next day, Arjun closed his eyes and felt his lotus eyed beauty looking at him ardently, he silently questioned her, Krishnaa, How are you? Did you eat well? How is my son? Krishna who is beside him got closer, Parth, your wife has slept already, She is well, Now sleep happily, Arjun looked at Bheem Who is in deep sleep,He turned to his Madhav,and closed his eyes,
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It has been ten days since Arjun and others left Indraprasth, The city bore a calm look without excitement and activity, The citizens missed their God Krishna, Their ever active and charming prince Arjun and boisterous Bheemsen, As for the royal family,Yudhishtir is a worried man as he thought defeating Jarasandh at his Homefront is next to impossible, Only redeeming feature is Bheem will be council led by his smart cousin Krishna and ever victorious Arjun, Kunti observed his unrest and assured him, Kanha is there to look after my sons, Moreover the Devine words I heard on Sata sringa mountain will become true, Your brother will make you Chakravarthi Samrat, Subhadra is tired of running after Abhi, She had no help as Nakul and Sahadev are busy in administration and security matters in the absence of Arjun and Bheem,The sons of Draupafi are initiated into studies at Dhaumya's abode, Abhi started missing his father. and Mama,He is also impatient that his baby brother is not waking up from sleep,He ran to Draupadi who is already into her ninth month to bring him out, Draupadi kissed his cute face and said,Abhi, wait a few days, He will wake up and come out,Abhi got angry and insisted, He is sleeping much, I will teach him not to,Subhadra came over and took him away, Drupad who is with Panchali then praised Abhi, Like father like son,Too cute , Draupadi who is reclining on her coach remarked, You will find everything about him cute only,Drupad smiled and retorted, Not only me,Every one finds him cute ,including you and your friend Govind, Draupadi kept silent , Yes, That is the problem,Every one claims right over him, except herself, She felt her child move rigorously inside, As the Rajavaidyaa said he has grown much inside despite her not eating much or taking care, He may not wait too long the Vaidyaa said, Occassionally Panchali is getting false pains and she is now apprehensive of her D Day , She almost stopped going out of her chamber, She did not take interest in walking also after Arjun left, Satya came almost gasping for breath, You know Dear, Our men entered Magadha,The news came along, Draupadi's heart missed a beat, Satya saw her pale face and assured her, Why do you worry? They are invincible, My Lord is above every one and he will definitely punish Jarasandha,Bheem is mighty ,He already killed Hidimbasur and Bakasur, As for your man with attitude, if he wishes he would kill maras and within minutes, Panchali smiled at the way she referred Arjun, You find him arrogant but I am sure you like him, Satya smiled back, Yes I adore him,I never saw a more competent warrior all my life, Ofcourse he is arrogant and he monopolises my lord, But still I am attracted to his whole persona, Draupadi felt the pain increase and she tried to bear with it, Satya saw sweat on her forehead, She is worried and rushed to call Priyamvada,
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chappy. Btw, will u continue this os till vastraharan? If then, plz do write a story on arjun's pov. I read many about draupadi. But don't know about arjun. If possible, plz write on his pov that how he felt.
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely updates! i wish this story continues till swargarohini..till their souls unite forever atlast!
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Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

lovely updates! i wish this story continues till swargarohini..till their souls unite forever atlast!




So true! I also want it. But soon coming the most heart wrenching part😭
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The people of Girivraj were spell bound on seeing the three strangers who are Brahmins in attire but looked like Kshatriyas in every limb, The awesome threesome went to the main streets and approached the vendors who sell scents,cosmetics etc, They took the fragrant perfumes and applied them to their bodies, They wore flower garlands taking them by force, Then they entered Jarasandha's private chamber as there is no restriction to Brahmins to enter there, The king wanted to worship them thinking them to be Brahmins, But they did'nt accept his worship, Jarasandh became suspicious and asked them who they are, By then he got information that they destroyed drums at Chaityakadri and entered the city not through the main entrance, Then Krishna revealed, You are our rival, That is why we entered thus, Jarasanfh was surprised,Then Krishna told him in a harsh tone, You are the culprit who are killing innocent kings before Pasupatinath, I warn you release the kings and change your behaviour, Otherwise we know how to save them, Now I tell you who we are, I am Vaasudev Krishna, These two are Bheem and Arjun, Jarasandh became furious, So this is your plan, You think I will release the kings on your word? Never, I am ready to fight with any of you, or all three together, he said with arrogance, Then he chose Bheema for the dual fight, The terrible fight started and continued till thirteen days, It started on Padyami and continued till Trayodasi, On that day Krishna warned Bheem not to prolong the fight and finish off Jarasandha, Arjun encouraged him, Bhrata,Hurry up, He does'nt deserve to live further, Pool up all your strength and kill him, Then Bheem took hold off his feet and banged him on the ground , He then split him into two parts as the people of Magadha looked awestruck, But the two parts joined together and Jarasandh came to life, Arjun looked at Krishna in confusion, Krishna smiled and took a small stick,broke it into two and threw them away in different directions, Bheem observed and understood, He again split Jarasandh into two and threw them in different directions , They did'nt join and Jarasandh was finished finally bringing relief to many prisoners, Prople felt happy for getting rid of that tyrant, The Kings were brought out from prison and we're grateful to the three saviours, Then Jarasandha's noble son Sahadeva fell at Krishna's feet and begged for mercy, Krishna blessed him and assured him he would rule Magadha but he should accept the sovereignty of Indraprasth, After four days Sahadeva will be coronated and they can start for Indraprasth, Arjun sighed in relief, His mind is preoccupied with thoughts of Panchali,...Back in Indraprasth Panchali got false pains three times in those thirteen days, She became too week and had no energy left when real pains happen and she had to push the child, Kunti and Gandhari were worried on seeing her condition, They started Saptaratri Pooja for Durga Bhavani praying for the safe delivery of the child, Yudhishtir got the news that Jarasandh was killed and the Kings were freed, The three victors will return in a week, Indraprasth celebrated one more victory and awaited the return of the three warriors, On paurnami day Panchali got severe pains, All through the day she suffered , The Rajavaidyaa panicked as Panchali is unable to push the child out, The child was restless but needs mother's support to make his way, Satya had tears in her eyes seeing Panchali almost unconscious and helpless, ,,,,As midnight approached Arjun became restless, He could not sleep, Krishna brought him out of the chamber, Madhav, Panchali is not well I sense, She needs us there, Arjun had tears in his eyes, Krishna nodded his head, Just then he heard his Sakhi chant his name,Govind in her trance, She is taking the names Arjun and Govind one after one, Krishna told Arjun taking Jim in his arms, Parth, She will be alright, Close your eyes, Arjun followed his word and closed his eyes, Panchali felt her Arjun by her side, He took her hand in to his, Krishnaa Dont worry, I am here, He said, Panchali saw him clearly in her unconscious state, She clasped his hand, Dont go away, She murmured, Rajavaidyaa who is there got confused and thought that she is in delirium, She cajoled her,Queen, just once push him with energy, I beg you, I can't, she said helplessly, Arjun said, You can, You are my wife, you will never accept defeat, come on do it, He said, Panchali gathered her energy and taking Goind's name tried her best, The baby cooperated with his mother and made his way into this world, The baby came out to the surprise of Rajavaidyaa who held him tight and he cried , Kunti,Gandhari and all others waiting outside sighed with relief, Panchali closed her eyes blissfully feeling her Arjun beside her, At GirivrajArjun opened his eyes and looked at his Madhav with relief, Madhav I dreamt that she is alright, He said hugging Krishna, Parth's Madhav smiled happily as he made the two souls
Get together and feel gratified, You have soul connection,I told you Parth,He said with his Devine smile.
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Posted: 9 years ago
the part where she gives birth couldn't have been more beautiful! I loved the soul connection part..how Krishna helps them feel closer! It was divine!
waiting for the happy reunion of the parents and their baby 😳
Hope arjun is their for pragiti's birth!

PS - i really want you to continue this OS till their last trek...your writing will just enhance the whole thing for us Ardians. πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naturelover33

Awesome chappy. Btw, will u continue this os till vastraharan? If then, plz do write a story on arjun's pov. I read many about draupadi. But don't know about arjun. If possible, plz write on his pov that how he felt.

Definitely, I will write Arjun's point of view,
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

the part where she gives birth couldn't have been more beautiful! I loved the soul connection part..how Krishna helps them feel closer! It was divine!

waiting for the happy reunion of the parents and their baby 😳
Hope arjun is their for pragiti's birth!

PS - i really want you to continue this OS till their last trek...your writing will just enhance the whole thing for us Ardians. πŸ€—

I hope I can continue with your support, So far it is a fulfilling experience glorifying ArDi's Devine love,
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