Thefateful evening......arjun.Draupadi os - Page 28

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

f I am not wrong you are the writer of Ardi Kalyug story,The story re written.I am also like you mad after ArDi and their painful love life. I read all the stories on ArDi like Subh Punarmilan ,Krishna nair's story and of course the story re written and enjoyed them all. Thanks for appreciating my story. The scene you mentioned Arjun's Exile scene got tears into my eyes while writing Draupadi's pain. As for Subhadra not much is being written about her even in the Epic. So no need to worry. I feel happy if I can win your hearts with my writing as love for ArDi binds us together. Don't hesitate to comment on any part of the story. It ignites the zeal to write more...With lots of love...Lakshmi.

Yes I m the writer of ArDi Kaliyug's story but I have written Story is Yet to Come not rewritten one . 😆

Yeh last updates were amazing ! Loved the Krishna and Parth relation . 😳And then Satya pulling Drau's leg by talking double meaning things . 😆😆

Lovely update! loved the drama 😆 And draupadi..she fainted 😲 Waiting for her reaction when she knows the truth! 😆

Balaram Revati Yudhisthira Bheem got a frown on their face. How could Arjun do this as he is still newly married bridegroom to Subhadra,the bride .Krishna slowly alighted from the chariot.Subhadra had a miffed expression on her face. Draupadi leaned on Priyamvada trying to control her feelings as she very much aware of Maharaj,and Bheemsen side glancing her with concern. Kunti who just came with the help of maids as she was awakened by them and given the news slowly made herself to the front. She looked at Draupadi's face and could gauze through her soul and feel the turmoil. How could her Phalgun be so ruthless and uncaring towards Draupadi? She addressed Arjun.What did I hear Phalgun? Who is this graceful lady? Would you mind to explain? Arjun looked at Krishna .before Govind could answer Balram thundered. No Kanha not you . Let Arjun defend his action this time. What would he say in the name of Vishnu to my dearest Bhadra? And to my unfortunate Krishnaa? For the first time Maharaj Drupad pleaded with Arjun for the sake of her happiness. Draupadi could'nt believe her ears. For the. First time her father questioned him on her behalf. Arjun caught her eye with a strange expression that she can not fathom. Arjun turned his head and looked at Kalindi whose face became pale due to the unusual welcome she got. He does'nt want to say anything before his friend admit kalindi's reality. Yudhisthir questioned Arjun with a grim face. Arjun,we are all waiting for your answer. Bheem shouted. Why are you silent? I am sure you are brave enough to admit what you did. Krishna admired Parth's loyalty towards him. He did'nt say a word even though he is facing the heat without his fault. Krishna approached Kalindi took her hand into his and proceeded to Balram.

Krishna touched Balram and Revati's feet. He said in his magnretic voice. Tau,This is Kalindi,Lord Surya's daughter. He offered her to me. I accepted her as my wife. I need your blessings. Revati admired Kalindi's humble countenance. She hugged her and said. Welcome to Yadu Vansh Daughter of sun god she said and blessed Krishna .Balram patted Krishna on his back. Kanha you and your friend tricked us into confusion. Any way I bless you both wholeheartedly. He hugged Krishna. Subhadra Pran go Krishna and clasped his neck.You fooled me Bhrata.Why did'nt you say it before? Unnecessarily I blamed Arya in my heart for no fault of his. Krishna teased her. I want to see your reaction . So I waited till now. So saying he looked at Draupadi as if that is meant for her. Draupadi felt embarrassed. Did she expose herself too well before every one? She checked herself. Drupad approached Arjun and said. I regret having doubted you Arjun. I beg pardon heartfully.I can't help it as I am the father of a daughter. Arjun smiled and said precisely. I understand. He was bothered about Satya who left that place and disappeared. Revati took Kalindi to her chamber. Kunti requested Krishna.Kanha I request you to give me the chance to celebrate your marriage in Indraprasth. I want my brother Vasudev and Devaki Bhabhi. To grace my home. Krishna obliged . At once Balram sent Satyaki to bring their parents. Satya sat in Draupadi's chamber. Draupadi is in Dining hall looking after the dinner arrangements. Her heart is free from tension thanks to Govind who cleared the misunderstanding.She earnestly desired to meet her husband and say sorry to have doubted him. She could not have the opportunity. Subhadra is luckier .She said sorry to Arjun before every one. She can not say so.As she is the wife of give not one.

Satya did not go to dining hall. Her ego was hurt. Krishna came and tried to convince her but she did'nt alow him to speak. He went back and told Arjun. Now you should achieve this feat. I already told you it is your task.Arjun was desperate. Madhav, How could I tame that tigress who always competes with me? She will throw me out I am sure,he said. Krishna smiled at his Parth. You don't know your talent. Did'nt you achieve the impossible when you pacified Krishnaa? Arjun is confused. But she. Is my wife.Madhav.and she loves me a lot. He reasoned. Krishna laughed and said. Great revealation indeed.but Satya also likes you,even though she competes with you. Arjun admitted.ofcourseKrishnaa Also said so.Krishna encouraged his friend. Now boost up your courage and tame the tigress.Arjun reached Draupadi's mansion where Satya is relaxing or fuming with anger. Draupadi is in dining hall . She thought that it will be better to leave Satya alone for sometime. Arjun knocked the door and Satya opened thinking that it must be Draupadi. She was taken aback on seeing Arjun.He entered inside and enquires innocently. Krishnaa did'nt return yet? Satya nodded her head and waited impatiently to see him leave. Arjun relaxed on the Asan ignoring satya's discomfort. Satya blurted out. I will close the door if you move out. She said. Arjun feigned surprise. Why? He questioned. Satya clarified. Because I want to be left alone. Arjun smiled his devastating smile. Why are you so unwelcoming today? he asked. Satya got angry. Why should I welcome you today ? For helping your bosom friend in fulfilling his wish? Arjun firmly replied. No. Not for that. But certainly there is something which makes me deserve your welcome. Satya asked bluntly. Don't try to. Fool me with your words. Arjun pretended to be hurt. You know you are the only one with whom I want to share today's thrilling experience since you have the taste. Satya looked into his glowing eyes. Arjun continued. You know what We got the thrill of our life today. We went to hunt the animals. We killed many.we took some elephants also with their trainers into the forest. Satya was curious. For what purpose? Why do you need elephants? Satya forgot her anger and questioned. Arjun smiled. To challenge the tiger . Actually we went to hunt the ferocious tiger only. The villagers who dwell on the Yamuna banks complained about the terrible tiger which is attacking them time and again and killing small children and innocent people. So we are ready with the elephants to divert the attention of the tiger if it attacks us. Satya is listening with utmost attention.what happened then? She asked. Arjun continued. It is after sunset we did our expedition. It is the time generally the tiger will attack the adjacent village. The victims will be cow herds,small children returning homes or women carrying water pots. But even after the probable time the tiger did not show up. We told the trainers to keep silent and make the elephants also standstill. Suddenly the birds stopped twittering .there was an unusual calm in the air. I fixed my arrow on the Gandiv.krishna is ready with his discus though I said I will manage the tiger. Suddenly an angry growl and a roar was heard. The yellow black tiger hurled on the elephant and threw the trainer down. Before it could proceed I released my arrow which sounded the tiger but not killed. The tiger stood still yelled in pain then silent. I watched its eyes and steadied my stance. Satya got tensed up. Then? She asked. Then the tiger jumped into the air and readied itself to attack the elephant and the trainer, my arrows truck it in the mid air and there ended the matter. Satya wondered. Your arrow caught it in mid leap? How did you measure the timing? If it misses it may strike you even. Arjun shrugged his shoulders. Just like that. Now don't ask me to show the feat again. Satya laughed heartily and smirked. Why did'nt you take me along? I would have watched it. Arjun retorted. You know then the tiger will bounce upon you as you are the dearest wife of Madhav the miracle doer. Satya sulked. Don't say that. He is a flirt. He utilises the opportunity to explore new experiences. Arjun said softly. But ultimately he will return to you only as you are his destination. All other girls are like restrooms in the middle. You are his goddess. Tell me did he give any reason to feel he does'nt care for you? Satya thought for a while. Of course no. She said. You know Satya men always wander through different stations or attractions but their destination remains same. You believe it or not Krishna can't survive without you. Satya looked at the handsome archer who sounds sincere and real. Suddenly Krishna and Draupadi came inside . Their faces showed that they are listening since long time.Krishna approached Satya and caught her hand. Believe it or not nothing is planned before. Forgive me if I hurt you. Satya looked into his beautiful face and turned her looks to Arjun. Arjun winked to her indicating her to oblige. Satya smiled and placed her hands round krishna's neck. Promise me you always remain Satyapati,though you have many girls in your life. Arjun is my witness. Krishna sounded serious. Satya laughed and said. Panchali I told you. These two are impossible to tackle. So saying she accepted the stretched hand of Krishna and walked out with him . She winked at Panchali.Enjoy your night. And she left with Krishna. Panchali looked at Arjun with surprise. How smartly he changed the mood of Satya by telling his feat which she likes. Satya worships heroism that is why his feat with tiger enamoured her and changed her mood. Arjun pulled her close and stated. Some one doubted me and almost fainted suspecting an innocent one like me. What punishment should she receive? Draupadi 's face turned red. How could he watch her that keenly.? Nothing escapes from his razor sharp eyes. She was thrilled remembering the way he struck the tiger in the midway. Why are you silent? Are you ready for punishment? He asked with a naughty glint in his eyes.Draupadi sincerely admitted. I am sorry I misunderstood. You brought another co wife for me. Arjun seriously said. How could I? I said I won't bring any one into Indraprasth. Draupadi pushed him away and went to her favourite place. Her jasmine plants are filled with blooming jasmines that are elated. Their worshipper is back. Arjun hugged her from back and whispered. I missed you Krishnaa.

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Draupadi walked back into the chamber and said, Arjun. I have to check the accounts whish are to be submitted in the Sabha tomorrow. You take rest as you look tired. So saying she took the accounts and started checking it Arjun went to where she is sitting and lied down placing his head on her lap. Draupadi tried to make him get up from there. But he did not budge.What is that you are checking? How could you waste your time on such meaningless work? You know how much quality time you are wasting instead of enjoying the moments of love? Draupadi got angry at the same time she could not hide her smile hearing his last lines. I hope you are also a part of the administration being a Pandav. How could you say this is not important? Here the numbers are not tallying with total and I have to find out which one is missing from the list. Arjun snatched the list from her hands and within minitues he found out the missing thing and tallied the total. Draupadi widened her eyes and questioned. How did you do that so fast? Arjun threw away the list and hugged her tight. I told you this is not the time to waste on such insignificant things , Enjoy the moment. You know I can't even sleep without you these two days. Ask Madhav. Draupadi taunted. Ask him. You both will support each other. Who will believe you? But I have slept peacefully. Arjun pretended as if he is listening to some one. Draupadiquestioned who It was. Arjun said. You know the jasmines are telling that you could'nt even sleep for a moment without me. He is smiling naughtily and pulled her to him. Don't pretend any thing . I know my Krishna too well.He bent down and kissed her without giving scope to say anything.

Draupadi felt the heat of Arjun's intense passion that multiplied due to the two days separation. Where did he suppress that much love all these years she wondered. She is hooked on to his ever smiling persona to that extent that she simply submitted herself totally to him. Arjun passionately drank the nectar of her beauty with his eyes and absorbed each curve each crevice of her Devine form ,as the poet in him praised her beauty with superlatives that made the fire born blush and hide herself in his heart. He let her hair loose and said, you should not tie it up and curb the freedom of the tresses.See how beautiful.they looked. He caressed the tresses with love and commented. Simply gorgeous. I should thank my father in law for creating such ethereal beauty for my sake. It proves his love for me. Draupadi smiled at him and replied. Of course my father and brother love you more than me. Drishti is angry with you for not taking him along with you. He is miffed and said you treat your other brother inlaw in one way and him in another way. Arjun raised his eye brows. Who? Madhav? I don't even remember my relation with him frankly speaking. He is beyond relationships. I hope Dhrisht will understand this one day.Draupadi assured him. He will Arjun. But the problem is every one would love you wholeheartedly and want you to love them . Arjun laughed at that and taunted. Now I hope you will understand why you have to deal with that many co wives. I don't want to . I don't know why I feel dead if I see you or imagine you with another. That includes your Subhadra also even though she is Govind's sister. Arjun tried to change her mood. You know how beautiful you look when you sulk? I wish to see that feeling more often. The best way to make you sulk is to bring a co wife Draupadi tried to move away from him but Arjun did not allow her. He stretched his hand and took the brush with which they make designs on their body and started to sketch a beautiful design below her neck. Draupadi giggled and tried to move away in vain. Arjun finished his design and praised his art and Draupadi's beauty. The artist in me awakened I am in awe of your beauty,the design looked beautiful due to your unparalleled splendour Forgive me if I hurt you in my passion uncontrolled.I wish I would be a sweat drop on your glowing skin When I touch you ,my goddess you shiver with ecstasy, I am afraid how could you bear the ultimate moment of bliss...Draupadi got tears in her eyes How fortunate she is to have her beloved drool over her beauty. Her moments of wait culminated in joy .Krishnaa merged in Arjun's passion without inhibition with supreme love... The city of Bhogavati located in Patala can be reached through water only. It is the city of Nagas ruled by Vasuki the serpent king. Nearer yo that the Kingdom of Daityas is located.it is ruled by Lohitaksh the demon king. The nagas and demons have good relations. The demon king is keen to change the friendship into alliance.He has an eye on Vasuki's sister Naga Rekha.that day Vasuki summoned Kaurava,another naga chief who happened to be the father of Ulupi. Vasuki confronted him Kauravya. Why did you make an alliance with The Third Pandava who became the cause of destruction nagas at Khandava Dahan? You know Takshaka fled from the forest only because of him.Aswasena's mother was killed by him. Khandava forest which used to be the abode of nagas became Indraprasth,the abode of Pandavas. And you went ahead and married Ulupi to him? What is your answer for that? Kauravya humbly replied. Revered Vasuki maharaj? You know everything. The request of Agni is the main cause for the burning of Khandava forest. There is no fault of Arjun. As for Ulupi'smarriage my daughter threatened she will die if she does'nt marry Arjun.What can I do in that situation? I went for my daughter'shappiness. Vasuki ridiculed him. Girls will desire the unattainable objects. We should be sensible not to accept their fanciful ideas. See my sister Rekha she would never cross my word come what may.Any way be prepared for a war with your soninlaw. I will make them leave Indraprasth and run away. ...in the Royal garden Rekha is sitting with her dear friend Lavitra. Lavitra told the princess. Your brother is thinking of accepting the demon king Lohitaksh for your sake.He is disgusting. I saw him once. Rekha is silent. She is thinking of the image of a handsome warrior she saw in her dream. Who is he? He has hazel eyes,curly hair and a very big bow in hand. Kavita heard her discription and drew his portrait immediately. Rekha's face brightened up. Yes this is the one whom I saw in my dream. Lavitra concentrated her mind and with her magical power found out who he is.She stated vehemently. He is the third Pandav,Arjun.

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

Lovely update! loved the drama 😆 And draupadi..she fainted 😲 Waiting for her reaction when she knows the truth! 😆

read the update? Know about Vasuki's sister?