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Posted: 9 years ago
Duryodhan is fuming at the spies who brought Information about Bhanumati's choice. He blamed them for providing un authentic information as per their own will. What proof do you have. He shouted at them. One of the spies tried to explain. Yuvraj, we dared to say the truth which we collected with great difficulty. One of us took the garb of a maid and entered Antahpur of the princess that is Kunti mata's sakhi Priyamvada's nephew. Here he is. Priyamvadha'snephew admitted boldly. Yes, Yuvraj I managed to enter inside with those who are decorating her chamber. Luckily no one recognised that I am a man. I saw four portraits of Kumar Arjun hanging in her chamber. The other maids are discussing the possibility of Kumar attending the swayamvar. One of them revealed that the princess is desperately waiting for him. Karn sent the spies away and assured Duryodhan. Don't get depressed. He is not coming to kasi. We will deal with the situation. Let us abduct her to be on the safe side. Duryodhan nodded his head in approval. After the night meal, Arjun discussed strategy of his forthcoming battle with Pitamah and Guru Dron. The Kamarpa king who is at the foot of the mountain ranges made truce with the leader of demons and submitted himself to their power. He regularly gives them ransom in the form of food materials and valuable gems they get from the rich mines. Occasionally yakshas will come to exercise their power out of their fancy and extract whatever they want.that includes beautiful girls.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Duryodhan is fuming at the spies who brought Information about Bhanumati's choice. He blamed them for providing un authentic information as per their own will. What proof do you have. He shouted at them. One of the spies tried to explain. Yuvraj, we dared to say the truth which we collected with great difficulty. One of us took the garb of a maid and entered Antahpur of the princess that is Kunti mata's sakhi Priyamvada's nephew. Here he is. Priyamvadha'snephew admitted boldly. Yes, Yuvraj I managed to enter inside with those who are decorating her chamber. Luckily no one recognised that I am a man. I saw four portraits of Kumar Arjun hanging in her chamber. The other maids are discussing the possibility of Kumar attending the swayamvar. One of them revealed that the princess is desperately waiting for him. Karn sent the spies away and assured Duryodhan. Don't get depressed. He is not coming to kasi. We will deal with the situation. Let us abduct her to be on the safe side. Duryodhan nodded his head in approval. After the night meal, Arjun discussed strategy of his forthcoming battle with Pitamah and Guru Dron. The Kamarpa king who is at the foot of the mountain ranges made truce with the leader of demons and submitted himself to their power. He regularly gives them ransom in the form of food materials and valuable gems they get from the rich mines. Occasionally yakshas will come to exercise their power out of their fancy and extract whatever they want.that includes beautiful girls.


luv ur posts...u should bcme a writer...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Guru Dron gave necessary tips to Arjun. I know you never wish to use Astras and depend upon your archery skill only. But sometimes you should take resort to Astras if not the superior ones but of a lower level. You are against illusions and mystic powers. Keep that in mind. Grand father said I wish is would be able to accompany you, as a spectator not as a warrior. I already missed your Fish Target feat. Arjun smiled. Get the Fish Target made here. After I return I will hit it before you. Guru Dron taunted Arjun. I heard your Father in law kept it as it is for display. Let us go there and do it for your grandfather. By the way I hear Drupad is obsessed with you and leaves his daughter behind in loving you. Arjun blushed and Pitamah laughed heartily. We have another competitor in him as per loving Arjun is concerned. GuruDron joined him as an embarrassed Arjun looked on. Draupadi stood at her window looking into the garden. Ever since she heard about Bhanumati's choice of Arjun she felt a pang in her heart and her unrest increased thinking about her husband's War Expedition, Why should they fix it in such a short while? They can let him relax a bit, and...Draupadi relented. No she should not be an obstruction in his path. He is born to accomplish greater purpose as Govind always said. With heart and soul she should send him off with a smile on her face. Priyamvadha came inside and called her. Princess, Maharani is waiting for you. Come along. Draupadi was surprised. At this time of hour,Gandhari should go to sleep. Why she called her? She followed Priyamvada and came across Gandhari who is waiting in the corridor of her chamber. She placed Her hand on Draupadi's shoulder and said. Arjun is waiting for you in the inner garden. Go and spend sometime with him. Your mother in law is with him. Draupadi got the shock of her life. At this time of night, how can she? Gandhari drew her nearer and whispered .Bahu tell him at any cost I want Duryodhan to get Bhanumati as his wife. I want you to tell Arjun. Even if he by chance is pressurised to take the princess, he should not dodo. Gandhari said. I know Arjun is least bothered about all this ax he is pre occupied with his war preparations. Still if he gets any kind of pressure from bride's side he should restrain himself. Duryodhan desparately loves Bhanumati. Let her be my daughter in law. And you Bahu leave your inhibitions and be happy. Draupadi 's heartbeat increased. She does'nt want to go before Arjun in her present state which is so disturbed but she has no option. As she reached the highly guarded garden of Kurus with Priyamvadha, she saw Kunti and Arjun on the spacious and wide jhoola covered with flowers. Kunti got up and told Draupadi. Gandhari Didi wanted you to be with Arjun as he may have to go again. She made her sit beside Arjun and said. Make it sure that after coming back he won't leave us and go for a long time. Priyamvadha told Arjun. Kumar, I will wait at the entrance . She indicated that she will wait till Draupadi comes after spending time with Arjun. Kunti left with Priyamvada. Draupadi is confused. How could she open the topic of Bhanumati and tell Gandhari's wish?Arjun realised that She is seriously thinking of something.He raised her face to him and looking into her eyes complained. I am here,still you are in your own world? Is this your way of punishing me for leaving you again? Draupadi placed her hand on his lips. I am not angry with you for going away.Arjun looked at her with disbelief. Draupadi said with an endearing smile. Who will not desire the glory of being the wife of the best yodha ever. I know you never rest on your past triumphs and go on reinventing yourself. Arjun smiled at her. Really? I can't believe it. Or is this a Bahana to keep me away from your thoughts,that occupied your mind now,He questioned her searching her Eyes deeply .She said under her breath,Too clever. He laughed and said,Try your best but your eyes will expose your self. Draupadi looked up and asked. So what do my eyes display? Arjun instantly answered.my image. Draupadi closed her eyes and blamed them. Why are you so transparent before him? Arjun looked at her mesmerising beauty and lost himself completely.
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Posted: 9 years ago
my FF

Arjun and Draupadi It was the celebration day at Indraprastha. All had gone very well and all the residents were pretty happy. Post that the Rajasuya yajna was to be held soon. Next morning as the soul sisters Draupadi and Subhadra were collecting flowers the Dasi came in and informed," Master Arjun wishes to meet you. Subhadra had a natural smile on her face thinking why her Arya would have called her. She hurriedly kept the flowers by Draupadi's side and hastily asked the Dasi whether she was supposed to go in her room or he will be waiting for her somewhere else. The Dasi hesitantly replied, "Dear Queen, it is not you whom he wishes to meet, in fact it is the Maharani Draupadi whom he wishes for." Subhadra stepped backward. Draupadi thought, "Neither is it supposed the year of me with him, nor there is any reason." With a confused face she left. There in Arjun's room it was dark. Suddenly all the lights lit up around her. A voice called. Draupadi was very much familiar with it. It was Arjun's. She noticed him and enquired him of the arrangements. Arjun said, "It has been long, since I've come back from Dwarka, I have not talked to you. So, thought about it. Draupadi was miffed. She said, "If you are thinking of this, then I'm sorry. I have other works too." Arjun held her hand when she was about to leave. He said, "Have you become so busy now? That you do not have time for your husband? A person shan't do so much work." Draupadi's reply came as a slap on Arjun's words. She said, "You have yourself pushed me into the work. And now...OK fine! This is not my year with you. So, if anybody notices me here with you then I have to be blamed." Arjun said, "But I have married you with full rites. I have not married you just for one year. I have total right on you." Draupadi said, "Gone are those days when I used to wonder all these you are saying. Today I am a strong lady. I have taste of the world. It's time you shall have it too." Arjun suspiciously said, "So, now I wonder, you have lost your heart to someone else." Draupadi, "I have full right on my heart. But being a wife of 5, I can't even think of another one in my life. My life has been pissed in between you 5." "Sure, it is my greatest enemy, Karna..." "What the hell!" "No, no... I just saw you together talking and giggling. During the celebrations I saw you all talking to each other." Draupadi irked said, "Talking does not make someone fall in love! And by the way, you shan't be talking about all these! Are you taunting me or making me realize that I am a betraying wife." Arjun, lost in her words said, "Hmmm, so you have changed a lot. But let me confess that I fell in love with you the minute I saw you and deeply when we started talking." Draupadi said, "Are you trying to attract me?" "No, just speaking my heart out!" "Well, ok, I'll bring something to you to eat." Arjun said, "Well, you did not reply." "Later!" Now I am going. Arjun once again held Draupadi's hand and said, "Now will you stay back for some time?" "Ok but only for some time." Arjun was surprised by her attitude. By these years she had changed a lot. -------To be cont.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kasmile

pls reply how was my FF

. Well. Every one has a right to write their own version and you can very well present your own story. I suggest you not to do that here as it exclusively belongs to Arjun Draupadi. There are so many writers in the forum who will happily share your love for karna and welcome you there. Another Palace of illusions will be created by you making karn as hero and Draupadi as heroine. Your wish. But this is not the right place. I repeat. Hope you got my point.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kasmile

pls reply how was my FF


Hey kasmile!! Ur ff is really nice but I don't think u should continue it in this thread πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Myraluvpanchali


Hey kasmile!! Ur ff is really nice but I don't think u should continue it in this thread πŸ˜›

I. Kasmile, I wish you good luck for your Ff. But don't continue it in this thread. By the way in Geeta, Lord addresses Arjun,Anasuya, One devoid of jealousy . Hope you got it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Myraluvpanchali


Hey kasmile!! Ur ff is really nice but I don't think u should continue it in this thread πŸ˜›


Bt why? i havent stated any thing against ArDi...Its only abt ArDi😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kasmile



Bt why? i havent stated any thing against ArDi...Its only abt ArDi😭😭


No,no I mean u should start ur ff in a new thread,this thread already have an ArDi Os πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kasmile


Bt why? i havent stated any thing against ArDi...Its only abt ArDi😭😭

The reason is you can not continue your story here. You can have a separate thread for your Ff. This is a thread meant for The Fateful Evevning. You can comment on it. That's all.
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