ZaYa SS:~Mar Jayian~ *Ch2(A)-Pg4* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Wow it's amazing.

Do cont soon, pls.
i am dying to read it.
great prologue. :)


-Tani.

Thank You!
I'm so glad that you were waiting to read my crap.
Hopefully you like this crap ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
awesome chap
I just loved it
beautifully written
do cont asap :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Lovely chapter continue soon !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Amazing chapter...
It was amazing! Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
It really cute update..😳
Love it...😳
Continue ASAP...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Amazing update !!
Very nice :)
Loved it !!
Continue soon !!
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#17
nice update loved it
want to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
aww this is so sweet...plz continue asap.n if possible pm me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Amazing update...
Loved it..
Beautifully written..
Cnt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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~Mar Jayian~

Chapter 2: Tum Hi Ho! (Part A)

Do you all want to know how Aaliya's mother died? That day was a horrible nightmare for Aaliya and her family.
In the morning:-
Aaliya:Ammi, main toh keh rahji thi kithodi der aur rook jaati to kitna achaa hota...Kal chali jati par aap hain ki nahi
Shaban: Aaliya, main chahu toh tujhe kabhi bhi na chod ke jao par beta bhopal mein humara ghar hai..waha pe bhi humara bahut kaam hai.
Aaliya: Par ammi...uhhhuuu
Shaban:Meri bachi, sun, chahe main yaha tere samne na hu par main hamesha tera dil mein tere saath raungi...samjhi?
Aaliya:jee ammi!
And they quickly hugged each other.Then they were interrupted by the beloved Zain
Zain:Ek minute...yeh kya ho raha hai..hug? woh bhi mere bina?..No chance
And he also joined their hug.
Ghulam:Chaliye shabana flight ka waqt ho rhaa hai.
Shabana: ha chaliye!
They left but the never knew what was waiting for them ahead.
Aaliya was folding her clothes, while her phone rang.
Aaliya was in utter shock, tears coming down from her eyes like river.
She called Zain, her only savior
Aaliya while crying talks to Zain
Aaliya:Zainn!
Zain:Aaliya! kya hua? kyu ro rahi ho tum?Kya hua aaliya? rona band auro aur bolo
Aaliya:Zainn...ammi...
Zain:Aaliya bolo kya hua?
Aaliya: Zainn...ammi..allah ko..pp..pyaari ho gayi...
Zain:Nahi...Aaliya please rona band karo..main abhi ghar aa rha hun...phir hum bhopal chalenge.
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Sorry guys I'm late
The computer was not working actually.
And the second part of this chapter would be updated very soon!
Promise!
Suni (You Know me)
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