Zaya ss: Feeling of love **chap9 pg22** up on 1st may - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Awww!!
It was choo chweet!!!(so sweet)
Amazing and a new concept!!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Amazing update ...
Loved it ...!!
Very intresting...
Continue next part asap ...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
CHAPTER 5
Zain's POV

Soon We reached at d dargah aaliya got out from car she asked me if I would like to come bt I refuse politely ...I hardly remember wen I went to dargah last time ...
"Ya aallah ,dargah mein jane k liye b koi mana karta h kya , chlo ab" she said as she held my hand n dragged me into d dargah
I hardly remember wen I cm to dargah last time
She helped me to do wuddu
I cm on knees n brought my hands to my face to pray as she did
I felt really peace there thanks to aaliya
We cm back to the car
"Now where would we go" I asked her
"Nowhere just drove around I wanna c Mumbai " she said excitingly
"Ok"
I started driving d car
As we roaming around d city I told about it
She seemed very happy
We were talking about anything n everything
We were not strangers anymore now
Suddenly she screamed n asked me to stop d car
As soon as I stopped d car she immediately got out from car n started running in opposite direction
I got confused
So I too got out n saw she was hugging someone
I was not feeling gud to her with someone else
I thought maybe he is aaliya 's would be husband
I got into d car bt was peeking them through mirror
I heard she was saying to him "aao zeeshan tumhe zain se milati hun "
bt I was not interested to meet him
As. they started walking towards me I saw zeeshan gt a call said smtng to aaliya n left
I felt relieved that I wouldn't have to meet him
coz don't y then I didn't meet him still feeling hatered for him
she came back n sat in d car
As soon as she sat in d car I blurted out
"so aadmi kon that??"
" u mean zeeshan he is my " she said that I ws already thought about him
" par wo yahan Mumbai mein hi rehta h , tumne bataya nhi" I asked him
" no actually uska transfer yhi ho gya h so dad needs decide kiy h ki nikah yhi hog"
"oh" that only word came out from my mouth

we were talking throughout d journey

It was evening wen we still roaming around Mumbai

"zain , muje coffee peeni h its my evening dose n I can't leave it pl koi cafe chlo na"

she said BT I was too tired to go anywhere BT home
so I told her
"aaliya plz abi ghar ja rhe h na, waha le Lena ,I m really tired plz bear me "

" no abi toh aadha ghanta lagega ghr phochne mein n I can't wait till than"

"acha theek h tum ghar jao air muje coffee shop pe chod do , mein apne aap wapis as jaungi " she said bit angrily

"nhi nhi abi raat hone wali h ,air agar mom KO pat chla to wo toh meri jaan le lengi " i said dramtically

"so let's go na " she said n dragged me in d cafe

precap : now its time for aaliya to be jealous;)
*___*___*___*___*___*___*___*___*___*
so here s d 5 chap
hw was it
do let me know
love
sanjana :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

awsm chapter sanjana
beautiful written
loved it
cont soon

thank a lot dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: LuvPreetikaRao

Nice update plzz continue and do PM me๐Ÿ˜Š

thank u dear
will pm in sm time :)
Edited by lovablegirl-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: harsh_pree

Wonderful update..
Loved it..


Mariya

thank u Mariya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: nashfa

Lovely chapter sanjana
Loved it
Continue soon


Riya

thank u riya
updated d next chap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sobtian...

Lovely Chappy..
Thanx fr d PM

thank u dear
n hw can I call u?? :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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YEH ME FIRST TO COMMENT!!๐Ÿ˜Š
it was a lovely update Sanju!! So Zaya goin for a coffee! Hope Aaliya gets rid of Zeeshan soon! N Zai mian toh jealous ho gye!!๐Ÿ˜† awesome update dear! Do continue soon... Will b waiting...
Love
Harshta๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: HARSHTA


YEH ME FIRST TO COMMENT!!๐Ÿ˜Š

it was a lovely update Sanju!! So Zaya goin for a coffee! Hope Aaliya gets rid of Zeeshan soon! N Zai mian toh jealous ho gye!!๐Ÿ˜† awesome update dear! Do continue soon... Will b waiting...
Love
Harshta๐Ÿ˜ณ

he he congrats
n thank u so much for the lovely cmnt
n abt zeeshan just wait for few more updates u 'll get to know ;)
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