Zaya ss: Feeling of love **chap9 pg22** up on 1st may - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
It was awesome Sanju! So finally Zaya hv been introduced to each other...n bechari Aaliya she couldnt sleep coz of Zain... N OMG zain just winked at her!πŸ˜‰ n Aaliya *blush**blush* 😳 n uh updated preety fast!πŸ‘ thnx a lot dear for the update n for the pm!😊 (hopu u dont mind me calling uh Sanju!πŸ˜›)
Love
HarshtA:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Awsome update..sanjana
Beautifully written..
And thnxc for pm..




Mariya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
A little longer , it was good liked their pov's !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Cute update
Loved it especially the povs
Continue soon

Riya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
thank u all for d lovely cmnts
will reply rest of ur cmnts later actually limited posts
anyways here u go...
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CHAPTER 3
zain's pov


Next morning I woke up early
N got ready to go for d recording.I was just going to open d door suddenly I heard mom's voice she was calling me
"Yes mom" I asked
"Zain bete aaliya ko apni meeting k liye der ho rhi h ,to tum usse drop kar dena ok beta take care"
She said n left d hall
"Chaliye madam"
I said her dramatically
She followed me till we reached near the car

Aaliya'pov
I got into d car n took my seat
He also took his seat
The journey was silent
I was just looking out of window
Then I spoke ...sorry for d last night
"He gave me confused look "Sorry ?? Mere room mein aane k liye?? Its k I didn't mind" he gave me assuring smile
"Arre nahi nahi actually usse pehle jo hua tha uske liye , actually wo kya hua na k" n I narrated him whole story
"Hmm...its k waise muje acha laga tumne apni bat mere sath share ki " he smirked
"Nhi aisi baat nhi h actually mein nhi chahti ki tume mere bare mein koi misunderstanding ho" I said
"Oh don't worry miss aal-ya" he smirked again
I again turned my face to look out of window
Then we reached at d destination
Actually my destination
He wished me good luck for d meeting n then left


Zain'POV

I came home late in d evening
I was tired
Bt wen I saw aaliya's smiling face I felt my all tiredness went away
I was feeling refreshed
I went into my room
I didn't realize I was still smiling
"stop zain wat r u doing its not good
u didn't believe in love n also she is getting married in some days "
I thought to myself n went for sleep
Next Morning
next morning I woke up
I cm for breakfast after refreshing up
aaliya after finishing her breakfast said "mami mein dargah jaa rahi hoon ,I'll be back soon "
"haan theek h beta par tum kiske sath jaogi driver toh aaj chutti par hai "mom said to her
"koi baat nhi mami mein cab le lungi"she said as I was busy to staring at her beautiful face
"arre aide kaise zain hai na woh toh aaj free hai ,wo tumhe like jaiga haina zain !!" mom said facing me
"haan haan sure mom ,main chlta hoon " I said as if I was just waiting for that moment
aaliya looked at me surprisingly
I smiled to his confusing face
"she looks cute with this expression on her face" I thought to my self
n we went for our second journey
dont know y bt i have strong feeling that this will going to be best journey of my life

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end of chap 4
sorry for d typos
love sanjana


Edited by lovablegirl-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: fariya98

Awesome chap Sanjana...πŸ‘

Cont ASAP..😊

thanks a lot dear
hope u like next ones too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Zainedil

very nice update Sanjana ..

I really like the double POVs ..it gives a diff touch to the chapters ..
so Zainu winkedπŸ˜†blushy Aaliya
update soon
love
Sim

thanks a lot sim
yeah me too like to write in both of them POV :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

great chap ...
cont soon...

thank u priya
keep reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
awsm chapter sanjana
beautiful written
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Nice update plzz continue and do PM me 😊
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