Zaya ss: Feeling of love **chap9 pg22** up on 1st may - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Superb start ! Waiting to know their story and thanks for the pm !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so guys here is 2nd chapter
Its all in past
hope u will like it
fingers crossed ;)
here u go..
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Chapter 2
Zain's pov


I was really depressed today ...so I gt out from home n started walking on d road..

it was a starry night
d whether was beautiful
cool breeze blowing away ...I was feeling refresh n all my depression gone away ..n I was just enjoying

suddenly a girl cme running n clash into me ...she was running looking behind
...I couldn't control myself n we fell upon each other on d road...her silky hair was on my face..I saw her from near...she was looking extremely beautiful...her eyes were so innocent... wat wat ...wat r u thinking zain...u can't fall for her...u don't believe in love ...n its just an attraction... I said to myself


she didn't look at me...she straightened her self n murmured thank u ...n she went hurriedly.. I was just staring at her from behind until she faded away in d dark ...I was wondering y she had nt recognized me ...I mean i m a rockstar ...she..she just didn't even look at clearly...n one more ques running around my mind ...what was she dng here at that time...anyway hope she will reach her house safely..I thought to myself n again started walking...

Aaliya's POV
uhh... god
damn it ..i m so late ...dad will fire at me...I said as I was running like if someone is running behind me to catch me...

actually I cm here I mean from bhopal to Mumbai to sign a deal
..I reached at d airport about 8pm
...my dear Mami send a car to airport to pick me
...I saw d name plate of mine name n went to d driver
I asked if surraiya abdullah send her..
he nodded n I sat in car..
she is my dearest Mami ...actually my dad n her husband I mean my mamu r childhood frnds
n mom considered mamu as her brother so I call them mamu n mami...
my mom n dad were always argued abt that..
bt to tease each other...
thinking that I didn't realize a lone tear escaped frm my eyes..
I looked up n said
...mom I miss u ...
suddenly in middle of d road d car gt punchered ...
it was abt 10 o' clock ..
driver said it will take sm time...
bt I couldn't sat there n wait for d car to alright
so I asked him abt d way to go mami's house


he tried to stop me bt I didn't stop n ran
coz I know if I'll not reach at d time
..n Mami will surely inform dad abt it..
n dad oh God he barely agreed to send me alone
...now don't know what will he do then..

so I was fastly n suddenly I crash into someone...
I was in a so hurry that I didn't realize wen I fell on him...
I didn't even look at him...
I could feel his eyes on me
BT I avoided it n straightened myself
I murmured thank u n ran

precap -their second meeting ;)

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SO guys here is d second chap
hit like n cmnt ...
sanjana




Edited by lovablegirl-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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note :guys there will be short updates actually the story is short n don't worry I'll update daily ...
thanks
sanjana
Edited by lovablegirl-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Riya5666

Nice start!

Loved it, really!
Pls update soon...

thank u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Superb start ! Waiting to know their story and thanks for the pm !

thank u dear
n regarding pm ur wc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Wow amazing story
Sanjana ..
Zainu as a rockstar ...
Amazing chapters ...plzz update soon i m looking forward to it ..
Plzz pm me ...

Take care ...

Lots of love ...

Alina
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Very nice sanjanna
Liked the different views on the same scene, so zain is a rock star cool
But very short update, peth Nahi bhara :)
Love
Sim
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome update
waiting for their 2nd meeting
Continue soon



Riya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Amzing sanjana..
Beautifully written..
Waiting for their 2nd meeting..
Cont asap



Mariya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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๐Ÿ˜ƒ U FINALLY UPDATED!! COMING To THE UPDATE...IT WAS SHORT YET AMAZING!! N AALYA DIDNT RECOGNISED ZAIN- THE 'ROCKSTAR'๐Ÿ˜†... Amazing start... Thanx a lot Sanjana for the pm...n continue soon!! Will b waitin!๐Ÿ˜Š...
Love
HarshtA๐Ÿ˜ณ
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