Zaya FF: Ostracised Healer chapter 6,page 21, 21.04.15 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Yesh...Teddy died Aliya has none..
She will find a reason
Thank u for lovely comment dear



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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

@ Kitkitmkb, saleha darling he didn't know her earlier... was my narration confusing...he.just met her...in that accident...

Yesshhh he has a very dark past


no no dear it's me !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: fariya98

Madhu u made me cry๐Ÿ˜ญ

Its too much emotional...
Poor aliya lost everything...
Cont soon I love to read more..๐Ÿ˜ณ

Sorry for making u cry jaan..even.i cried dnt worry๐Ÿ˜†
Thank.u for lovely comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

My heart is slamming hard against my chest to break it, to pound out of me...Teddy dnt deserve this...he is small...it should me...this is not the order...
I will not narrate stories to him anymore!!
We will not throw water balloons on others anymore!! We will not have fist fights!!
He said he will fight with anyone who teases me..!! My little saviour...
he will not go to College!!
He will not have a girl friend!!
He will not become a cricketer like Dhoni!!
Dhoni!! Dhoni!! I promised him same day that I will take him to dhoni...he will not see him anymore...
He will not get married, he will not have kids... !!
I wants him to have all these...he dnt deserve...For God sake he is a kid!! He should play...but not die...
I was literally crying throughout the chapter while reading it was way more emotional but these lines were so heart wrenching... My poor Aaliya lost her entire family.๐Ÿ˜ญ
Mind blowing work dude hats off to you๐Ÿ‘
Plz continue soon and All the best for your exams

Fathima chellam!! U r. Comment made me cry๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Thank u so much for lovely comment...
Thank u dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb


no no dear it's me !

What it's u??๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Next part I donno when I ll update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Amazing chapter once again Madhu!!
I m starting to looovvveee ur writing skill Madhu...
Like, really, really love it haan!!

Hmm... Zain also tried to suicide... Ohoo...

Both the characters r sad that means...
It is a very sad sad sad story...

But i want to read further .. So plsss continue soon haaan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
@ Riya5666!!
Thank u so much for loving this...๐Ÿ˜›
Awww u r loving my writing skills๐Ÿ˜† thank u thank u๐Ÿ˜† ..im not that good u know!!
Zain's baby...u r going to cry tons and tons for zain baby dear...
be ready with tissue...๐Ÿ˜‰
Thank u so much for lovely lovely comment...
It means a lot to me...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Madhu chudail sorry for the late comment
Kya kare bahut busy tha
Commig back too chapter it was awesome
As well as emotional
But this time there were tears in my eyes
Continue soon

lots of love



Riya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Wow wow wow I m speechless... You are one of the best writer in the forum..loved the way you wrote zain and aliya's character...they having thier own turmoil and both of them trying to find their way to happiness...and then the selection of words is just superb... I m loving this ff...continue soon
Edited by ank_23 - 9 years ago
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