FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Kya kahu update ke baare meim
I don't know
Thankuu for giving us such a Amazing story
I'm.addcted to it
Air agar update nahi kiya to h spamming start karungi

Comm ing back to update I don't know how to disc ribe it
I'm jus t saying u have got an amzing talent
Update karti rahna
Byeee take care

Lots of love

Riya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
really amazing chp
i loved it
m jst loving hw u defining zain's character
he is handling d situation so calmly n gently
hope aaliya's heart will melt soon
do cont asap !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Once again Sim...
It's a test but this time it's a test for both...For one it is a War and for one it's Love. Everything is fair in love and war...the story has cone to a heart throbbing mode where anything can happen at any moment. It's amaing to see how Zain and Aaliya are deeply in love...but yes the fun part I truely look forward to is who bends down first...
Zain has bared enough of pain right from the start, but as Aaliya she's experienced not even half as whatever happened in between when she had lost her memory, she experienced nothing as compared to what Zain bared...
But it is also not to be forgotten about what she bared when Mamu died...
In the eyes of themselves their pain is greater then any of the others...

Coming to the writing...It was amazing! The way you express it brings my mind and heart on the character and as I always say...you make us feel the happiness, love and pain!

Update Soon! Is all that's left to say!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Chaptr 3 was nice n loved it. The way u wrote is magical I m lack of words to express it...!!!!!!
Waiting for Nxt prt
N thnks 4 cmpltng my wish n will be waiting
I missed u too for dt whole week, as day without u it's sumwhre incmplt
Loved ur work
Loads of luv
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Amazing Update SIM!
Love it completely...

U clearly showed Aaliya's pain and zain's determination to win her back!

The conversation between suraiya and Aaliya was also amazing!
Loved each and every part of the chapter actually...
Its difficult to pick out one...

Pls continue soon... Soon... AND SOON...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Siiim, well I definitely love ur story.
Love Zain's attempts to eliminate hatred and, perhaps, fear from her heart. I hope, at the end, he will be able to remove it from her.😳
On the other hand, I love the way Aaliya tolerates his closeness. I wish she hide her emotions a little bit better.😉
But the story is amazing. U write soo well. I really enjoy when I read it.👏
Good luck.
Btw, when to expect the next update.😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Why Sim Why you were not one of Beintehaa cvs it would have been great not great actually perfect
it was wonderful chapter Aailya's irritation and Zain's determination to get her back awesome combo👍🏼
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
The way you have waved words into feelings is just so so beautiful , you have described Zain Abdullah as a man willing to bow down at his knees in love , he knows he is at fault , he knows he has hurt her but he will do anything for her ! I hope the world gets to know more people like Sim's Zain ! Love you Sim Sahiba the Great !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Great update. Man aliya is mad and i totally get it but zain is equally determined now the real redemption starts. Aliya was so mean i would have preferred zaya having their rooms nearby lol Hopefully everyone is gonna be on zains side. the battle has just begun and hopefully we can also see some of the bv ppl i liked suri talking to aliya. cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Ur words make me rush to my place n update, wish was not in lab right now
Full time writing would be so much fun
Sim
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