Originally posted by: robsten_
And ur back with a bang...wow..such a amazing chapter
Aaliya seeing zain everywhere... Aww..and such a hot and handsome math teacher...Nice chapter loved it...Thanku ..be awesome...
Originally posted by: zayahangover
Sim r just awsoeme yaar
What u write no one can write
That's just awsomely written
Thanks
Kunika
Originally posted by: zayacrazy
Sim!
Youve blown the hats off! The litreal meaning of story has changed to reality! It feels like I'm a part of the story itsekf and I'm witnessing it! I always tell this to you and once again I say, you have an incredible ability to make the reader feel the character and slip on the characters boots!Aliya and Zain can never out date because they always have this amzing spark between Them! And we are always reminded that by reading this story! It's become a part of essential things you have to do- Read Sim's story!It feels good to know love stories still exist around here! And it's still possible to sense Love in the Air! Really today I thank you for takin me as in individual in a world were love is still termed as magic! And making me believe it still might comeback like it came back to Zain- Hopefully it will go back to Aaliya and the magic will tie their threads together, stronger this ime and Forever!
Congrts 4 ur new thread...firstly I would like to say dt u r an amazing writer...secondly each n every word u wrote touch my heart..thirdly Sry 4 commentng 4 too late...I hd read ur all chaptrs..forthly thnks 4 sndng me pm..I really missed u yr..hw was ur work..??
Nw to ur work...!!!!
Today chaptr was amazing n vry well written..as always u do...!!!!
Its gyd to read aliya's pov..it's heart touchng...n last part was incredible as " zain is a maths teacher" n dt smile he gave to aliya..!!
I hope get a chance to read zain's pov.."hw he cope up with d phase...hw he felt when aliya left him"...if it's possible..if Nt...it will be ok...!!!!!
N yr d shayari u wrote at d end of day chptr give a new life n touch to ur writing...!!!
Today's chapter shayari was really gud...sumwhere I left it similar with me..!!!
Waiting 4 ur d next update sim..!!!
Arohi
Originally posted by: Riya5666
Congratulations for ur new thread Sim!!!!
Now coming back to the chapter...U completely nailed it!!!The balance maintained between Rhea's guilt n Aaliya's hatred was so perfect!As i have said, words are always less to describe ur updates!!!U r just amazing!And thanks for updating soon...I wud really have gone mad if u hadn't!!!😃
Sim, first of all congrats for the new thread
Coming back to chapter
You described aliyas harted & rheas guilt perfectly
Zain as maths teacher
Continue soon & I Miss end u
Lots of love
Riya
Originally posted by: Meghapaim
Wonderful update
Congrats for thread 2Really glad ur back was missing the storyZain maths teacher he has come back in full form hope aliya show mercy on himPrevious thread I was in tears at the endDo continue soon
Originally posted by: manny136
Aww you are back. Congrats on the new thread. Now getting to the new update wow, more pov of aliya loved it. she is so hurt and angry as both rhea/aliya and the guilt as well but under all of that there is also the love that she is trying so desperately to hide. Its gonna take time coz aliya didnt get to heal and even though zain was great so far he was still deceiving rhea so she needs some time. Zain being the maths teacher loved it lol i was like dude who is this bro of some kid and bam zain comes for real no imagination like before n as a math teacher lol Would love to see how zain handled aliya leaving all those weeks ago coz he seemed so broken. Its gonna be a rollercoaster ride cant wait for the next update.
Originally posted by: zaya.fatima
Finally the wait is over yaaayyy you have updated I'm so happy
congratulations for 2nd thread Sim🥳About chapter what should I say it was l amazingThe way you have described the emotions and feelings from Aaliya's POV so so so heart touching I was literally feeling her pain in real sense and her repenting it have touched the deep cords of my heart👏Looking forward for Zain And Aaliya's kitkit,And the poetic lines and the song selection..❤️❤️❤️You are just Amazing dear May God Bless you😊
Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee
Omg yesss
This looks wickedCan't wait for the next partContinue soon and thanks so much for the pm
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