FF : Neapolitan City - Page 4

Originally posted by: MM123456

You write absolutely fantastic , I get goosebumps by your work 😊 I am so glad that Ishveer will meet 😳 Hope to read romantic scenes between these two 😳

Please update soon 😃 I've read everthing you have written about Ishveer so far , and I love all the stories 😳 You keep suprising me with your writing skill ⭐️ 👏

Soory for my english, I do not speak english daily . Especially I struggle with writing english, so please correct me if I am wrong 😊

Lady Meringue,

Originally posted by: Rhapsody.

Lady Meringue,

You are a great writer. Your control over the language and your choice of words attract the readers to your work. Atleast it did me. 😆

This FF is really pleasing to read as it is based on the current track and hundred times more sensible. Though the suspense was not so much in the start, I loved the way you enhanced it.

Now Mr. Vaghela and Ms. Parekh have finally been made aware of the presence of each other. I look to read further.

Good job. :)

Can you PM me the next time you update?

Cheers.

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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much dear. 😳😳 And you are pretty succinct about the point you made. 😆 This FF was indeed a very bland start, but I've started spicing it up a bit here and there now. 😆😆

I'll definitely leave you a PM after the next update. ⭐️

Toodles! XD

Originally posted by: Rhapsody.

You are very much welcome. 😳

Now, I was, wasn't I? 😆 I know you will spice it up in the coming updates and I am excited to read it.

Thanks.

Please don't leave every chapter with a cliffhanger! My poor heart can only take so much.

Originally posted by: Petrichorlove

Please don't leave every chapter with a cliffhanger! My poor heart can only take so much.

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LadyM - I saw your PM but had kept this pending to read only when I had proper time !! And it was worth every minute of reading.. !

Thank you, thank you for a wonderful read, it is such a beautiful one as always..

Btw,I love the way you described the library, I am sure you are a library-lover ! And from one library lover to another, it is the best place to spend your life !! 🤗

Loved the way you have built up the relationship between Martha and Ishani in few paras, just puurrrfect.. ⭐️

Only complaint I have is how could you just leave us hanging at the last moment !! I want to know right now what is happening in their heads and hearts after seeing each other !! Now, Now, Now !!
😳😳😳😳

Please do post the next one soon !

Originally posted by: Petrichorlove

Please don't leave every chapter with a cliffhanger! My poor heart can only take so much.

Same here Petrichorlove !

LadyM, you have too many people dangling from the cliffs you have created !! You have to save them all as early as possible ! 😛😛😛

Originally posted by: matsh

LadyM - I saw your PM but had kept this pending to read only when I had proper time !! And it was worth every minute of reading.. !

Thank you, thank you for a wonderful read, it is such a beautiful one as always..

Btw,I love the way you described the library, I am sure you are a library-lover ! And from one library lover to another, it is the best place to spend your life !! 🤗

Loved the way you have built up the relationship between Martha and Ishani in few paras, just puurrrfect.. ⭐️

Only complaint I have is how could you just leave us hanging at the last moment !! I want to know right now what is happening in their heads and hearts after seeing each other !! Now, Now, Now !!
😳

Please do post the next one soon !