A new start-Collab A Zaya SS chapter 7 on page 17 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing update ...
Intresting !
Continue asap
N thnxx for pm :)

Thxx😉
Thxx again 😃
Yaa but nt me Riya will continue 😆
Ur wlxm😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Nice update annie.
update soon riya😊
Edited by fariya98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: fariya98

Nice update annie.

update soon riya😊

Thank u 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Thx. 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awsome chpter annie
Zain total lattu on aliya.
continue soon riya

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: butterfly20

Awsome chpter annie

Zain total lattu on aliya.
continue soon riya

Thxx Hania 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Next chap will update today...
but it got deleted. I will not give up
By the evening you guys will get chap 3














Riya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Chapter3😃
Its a short update
sorry for it
Happy reading😊


Aliya started crying ..."Kyu allah kyu mujhe hi sab musiibath de rahe he aap.Mere abbu ne kya kiya"

She reached home and saw her abbu lying down lifelessly.Her heart stopped for a moment.
She bent down and said

Aliya :Abbu aapko kuch nahi hooga.mei hoona aapki aaliya hei aapki paas aapko kuch nahi hooga

Aliya ran from there while shabana was calling from her behind
Aliya called taxi and they took gulam to hospital.


And gulam is taken to ICU.Aliya is shattered and sitting at a corner of hospital.Shabana can't see her daughter like this even aayath.
aayath went to wards aaliya.she placed her hands on aliya's sholder.



Ayath:Appi *with tears in her eyes & in a broken tune*

Aliya turned her head towards aayath.Aliya smiled between her tears
Ayath:Appi aap aise kyu
Aliya:Pata he ayath abbu mujse vada kiyatha ki vo mujse kabhi chodker jayegi.Aur vo aise kaise javuga. Mujse vadakiyatha.Vo nahi jayegina ayath bolo ayath bolo.Cried even harder

Ayth hugged her tightly kuch nahi hoga unko abbu unke do betiyom ko chodker nahi jasakthi hum unko nahi janedoonga.Aliya nodded her head.

Ayath:to ye rona band karo hum dona Gulam ki betiyom he aur aise vaise chezzomkeliye rota nahim he haina appi


Aliya smiled he sister has become matured now.Aliya looks at aayath
aayth:appi aise kyu muje dekh rahe he ?
Aliya "ki tum ab bade hogaye ho
ayath:appi aap bh chalo ab utho

And then the doctor came...



Done😉 .Its a emotional one naa😆
sorry for short update
next chap by my annie😳




Precap :zaya meeting at hospital😳



Riya😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
hayee mere chudail hug de emotional chappy😭oyee meine krna h update chal aaj he kr deti hun shaam ko pakka promise chudail promise😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
wow superb ! emotional update ! Nicely written ! Update soon !
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