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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

omg sakeenah.. u scared me ..

yes i will update soon
daara diya mujhe


Mein kya karun?
Tum chudail banke agar sabar ka imtehaan logi!
Toh phir mein bhi maha chudail bannke tumhe daraungi
Hahahahahaha *wicked laugh*😆

P.S Mane dara kese diya!?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
@sakeenah
main weekly update deeti
as daily not possible for me
haan mein chudail hoon
*evil laugh **
well u wrote it in big font and specially red
i though blood all over on my screen
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Hello all

Here's presenting the second chapter

This one dedicated to all the readers and likers

I hope u all will like it

...

CHAPTER 2

Yeh ishq nahi assan

Agg ka dariya hai

Doobke jaana hai

...

After aliya's checkup her reports were left to come

Ghulam was sitting next to aliya watching his daughter pale and lifeless

Doctor: may i come in sir?

Ghulam: haan doctor aayi

Doctor: i want u to meet in my cabin

Ghulam: okey doctor

Saying this doctor left while ghulam after caressing her hair and too followed the doctor

Ghulam: ji doctor boliye

Doctor: hmmm

Doctor looked serious as he went through the reports

Ghulam: sab sahi toh hai na doctor?

Doctor: ghulam sahib woh aliya ko

Ghulam: doctor aap sidhe sidhe bolte kyun nahi.. kya hua meri bachi ko?

Doctor: woh aliya is suffering from stage 1 cancer

Ghulam could not believe what he heard

Ghulam: u r joking na doctor

Doctor: i know ghulam sahib app kaise feel kar rahe ho par yeh sab sach hai

Tears polled around his eyes knowing this

Doctor: ghulam sahab yeh first stage cancer hai.. u should be thankful ki haemin pata lag gaya pehle se.. in this stage we always have more chances to save a patient from this dreadful disease

He got up from his seat

Doctor( continued) : around the world 90% of first stage cancer patient are saved .. so there are chances ki aliya bach jaaye. Toh ghulam sahab please be positive

Ghulam cried his heart out

Doctor: apne app ko sambhalen ghulam sahab .. apki beti ko apki zarort hai.. akhir app nana bhi toh banne wale hain

Hearing this again he could not believe his ears

Doctor: haan ghulam sahab she is pregnant ... u should pray to god ki woh baby iss duniya mein aaye ..

Ghualm wiped his tears

Doctor: ghulam sahab app aliya ko leke USA chale jayiye .. wahan doctor tyagi hai .. he is cancer specialist .. he is my friend .. app jayiye.. i will pass aliya's report to him.. he will be glad to help u

Ghulam: thank u very much doctor

Saying this he left for aliya's cabin

He didnot knew what he should do cry or smile??

One side his daughter suffering from cancer and on other side he going to be grandfather

He entered her room

He saw her staring at the window

Ghualm: aliya

Aliya: abbu... shayad yeh allah ka imtehaan hi hai.. lene do usnhe jitna lena hai.. ek din woh khud hi thak jaayenge as we will keep smiling at every problem he throw for us

She said trying to control her tears

Ghulam: meri bachi tujhe kaise pata laga

Aliya: abbu woh jab app gaye toh maine apko follow kiya aur apki aur doctor ki saari baat sunli

Ghulam was speechless seeing the bravery of his little girl knowing that she was suffering from cancer

Aliya: abbu pata hai

Ghualm came near to her and sat by her side

Ghulam: haan bolo beta

Aliya: jab ammi ka intkal hone wala tha tab unhone mujhse kaha tha ki woh allah mere liye ek esa ladka bhejenge joh mujhe kabhi nahi rulayega.. hamesha mere saath rahega.. hamesha mera trust karega .. par ammi hamesha jhoot bolti thi..

Tears made their way from her glittering eyes

Ghulam: nahi meri bacchii roo mat

Aliya: toh main kya karoon abbbu

Ghulam: log kehte hai joh hota hai ache ke liye hota hai.. late hi sahi tumhe yeh saachi toh pata chali ki zain tumhara kabhi tha hi nahi.. joh aoni biwi ki har taklif ko apna bana le use hi toh acha shohar kehte hai ..

Aliya cried her heart out

Ghulam: shaant hoja meri baachi.. zaara uss nanhi jaan ka toh soch toh kuch months baad haamare saath rehne aane wala hai

Aliya smiled through her tears remembering doctor's word saying she was pregnant

She caressed her tummy

Ghulam: aliya tumhe thik hona hi hoga.. mere liye nahi to hiss bache ke liye

Aliya: haan abbu main jaroor hongi

Ghualm: forget about past.. concentrate on your present to make your future better than your past and present

She smiled

They both hugged

Ghulam finally took a relief seeing her smiling

Ghulam: aliya main kal hi America ke visa ke liye apply karta hoon and ham phir udhar hi rehnge away from this place.. away from all the bad memories of past

Aliya: thik hai abbu

Ghulam: toh abb jaldi se yeh medicines lo and aaram karo okey??

Aliya: okey abbu

...

On the other side in barkat villa

After spending hours sitting on the beach zain went to his home

His home silent and everywhere sorrow

He climbed to his room

As he entered inside he saw aliya's photograph hand on the wall of his room making him remember all the good memories they shared

The bed make him remember their union and showing how they became one soul

He screamed with pain

Slowly he went near her photograph and stood there

Zain: kyun aliya kyun kiya tumne mere saath bolo.. i loved u from the bottom of my heart and what u did??

He threw all her pictures his one go

Then he went near the dresser where his love notes were stick

He picked each one and threw them in dustbin.. took a matchstick and burned them all

Zain: main tumhari ek bhi cheez nahi rakhni

Saying this he packed all her stuff in her bag and threw it out of the window

After doing this he cried .. cried a lot.. his mamu ki bhanji did this to him

After hours passed a beautiful morning awaited for everyone

For someone to mark the beginning to their new life and for some it marked the worst day of their life

...

So here was it...

I hope u all liked it

Do comment and like

Love

Priya❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Res
aweome chappy re.
Finally humne padh liya.
No long cmmnt.
Cont soon.
Edited by Sobtian... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Tht was an mindbobbling update!
It's a bueatiful story line Priya!
And I await this story to go ahead wid atmost curiousity!
Looks like you have something very exciting up your sleeve.
Also I can't for Zain to find out! It might not be soon but yet I await every inch of this story!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
wow emotional update
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Amazing chapter Priya!
Loved it.

Yes... It was very emotional...
Zain n Aaliya's pain was very well described..
Nicely written...

But u know, these weekly updates r torturous... Now we have to wait again for one whole week... Pls update soon if possible... Pls plz plz plZ.

And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Okay not to come off as offensive but this is a bit of criticism. Please take it a self-constructing way.

Do adhere to basic grammar rules.. the storyline and plot is goodbut the grammar needs to be worked upon.
Don't take it to heartit will benefit you only.
❤️ LoveSanika:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Good one Pepita ! looking forward to the next update and let's see how Zain gets to know all this !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Plzz continue soon
Thanks for the PM 😊
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