zaya ss: iss dard-e- dil ki sifarish(chapter 4 updated 27/04)no pm - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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sirf forum to chod nhi rhi. Ab hum tumse bat karna chod rhe. Dis ll benefit me.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sobtian...


go na I ll not stop u. I m nt talking abt dis plc

i know tu kiski baat kar rahi hai..
mujhe sahi mein kuch nahi hua hai
bas uss addiction ko little bit kam kar rahi hoon..
esa nahi hai ki main kabhi nahi aaongi.. mein jarroor aaongi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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See priyu anya is right
Agar forum chorna tha toh hum se dosti q ki
Or mujhe apni beti q banaya
U know na how impotant u r to me
Meri jaan hai tu
*tadap tadap k iss dil se ah nikalti rahi ...mujh ko saza di pyaar ki aisa kiya gunah kiya jo lut gai main mumma ki mohabbat hhaai *

Dukhi atma turned into singer
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zayalove

See priyu anya is right
Agar forum chorna tha toh hum se dosti q ki
Or mujhe apni beti q banaya
U know na how impotant u r to me
Meri jaan hai tu
*tadap tadap k iss dil se ah nikalti rahi ...mujh ko saza di pyaar ki aisa kiya gunah kiya jo lut gai main mumma ki mohabbat hhaai *

Dukhi atma turned into singer


bye. Atb.
Edited by Sobtian... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for d response..
will continue it when i will get time
priya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jaa yaar..

Na teri story padhni hai..
Na teri shakal dekhni hai..


Last story?
Jaa. Mei bhi baat nhi krti. :X



Lots of ghussa,
-Tanu.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello guys..
sorry for the late update
this update is for my bestie alina..
love u jaan
here i go stopping my bakbak for my love
...
CHAPTER 1
"tallaq tallaq tallaq" the three heart wrenching words echoed in the qabristan
the man looked at the lady with his blood shot eyes and left the place
"allahhh" the lady cried
no one was there supporting her
she was blamed for a sin which she never committed and could not ever dreamed off in her 100th dream
her abbu watched his daughter breaking down in thousands of pieces but he could not help
his only daughter for whom he could do anything and could not see a single tear in her eyes was crying
he walked towards her and wrapped her in arms
" kyun abbu?? kyun yeh mare saath hi kyun hota hai.. jisse main pyaar karti hoon woh mujhe chod jaata hai.. pehle ammi phir mammu and aur ab" she cried
rain was not taking a name to stop like god himself was crying seeing his ladli in this condition

" abbu "
she lifted her head to see her father
" abbu kya apko bhi yahi lagta hai ki maine mamu ko maara?? main iss sab ki zimedaar hoon?"
she looked at him waiting for his response
" nahi meri baachi.. mujhe yakeen hai yeh tune nahi kiya.. "
he said cupping her face
" toh fir kyun abbu zain ne esa bola ki meri wajah se mamu ki death hui.. agar mein na hoti toh mamu idhar hote.. kyun abbu esa kyun bola zain ne"??
aliya asked ghulam
ghulam was spell bound and he was not having any word to say
suddenly aliya faint
the graveyard was silent and no one around
bas he and his dearest daughter aliya
seeing her fainting he quickly tried to wake her
" aliya open your eyes.. aliya pls jaldi ..apni abbu ki baat nahi manoogi" he said
aliya lay in unconscious state
could not her daughter condition like this he carried her to the nearest hospital as soon as possible
she was carried inside the room and nurse asked ghulam to wait outside
ghulam " allah meri beti ko sahi salamat rakhna"
he send a quick prayer and went to reception to fill the form
after filling the form he picked up the telephone to call zain and to inform about aliya's condition
but he quickly cancelled it as the memories what happened in graveyard and because of zain only her daughter is in this state he cancelled the call
he moved to room no. 4 where aliya was admitted and waited till doctor came out
ghulam: doctor aliya ko kya hua
doctor: wohh
...
here chapter 1 ends
hope u all liked it
for pm buddy me
priya



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Emotional chapteršŸ˜­
Filling bad for aliya
Cont soon..
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