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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nashfa



offo choti chuail kal update karoongi😆


Kar diyo warna mujhse bura koi nhi 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zaya2


Kar diyo warna mujhse bura koi nhi 😆



Karoongi mere choti chudail😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice chapter
loved it
eager to know wat will happen next
do cont soon !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya_arora

nice chapter
loved it
eager to know wat will happen next
do cont soon !




ThnankuuThnankuu 😃
Wiil continue soonsoon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gonna Update now😆
Edited by nashfa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi! I'm here with part 3 of Love makes life live😃

Thank u for all the valuable comments.😉

Hope u like this part too.😊..

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Silence was spread everywhere around them.

She decided to break the silence and spoke angrily

"How dare you?"

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She stood there standing looking into his eyes.

He was shocked. He thought he would receive

a different behavior. He thought she would

either ignore him or else leave that place

immediately.

She stood there confidently. He asked her

baffled, "What?"

She started "Don't you have any feelings?

Can't you understand what love is? Do you

every time have to control other's life?"


He stood there listening to her patiently

waiting for her to finish. Initially he thought

it was for him-for what he did but later he

realized she was talking about something else.

As she went on lecturing about love for about

15 mins then he understood it was about his

brother-like friend and his girlfriend's

marriage she was talking about not him.


He stopped her in between "Excuse me! Stop

it madam" he shouted.

"What's your problem" she asked

"I should ask the same thing to you .you are

speaking from past half an hour not leaving

me


to speak at all. Bolne do na bande ko."

She became silent and listened to what he

spoke. He spoke in a high tone, "I'm not

against zubair-barkath's marriage

understood. It's you who has problem

. I came here just to meet barkath's family to

make them understand that love has no place,

time and caste. I think her mother is having a

problem with poor son-in-law."

She finally understood what he wanted to tell

and just told sorry. But it was against her

attitude to apologize so she started again

"This doesn't mean that you are completely

right mister. You have no right to control

anybody."



"Stop shouting yaar." He shouted

"Stop being a control freak. See now you are

trying to control me also phirse." She stopped

there at a moment .she didn't' knew what

made here say that word phirse'.

zain held his ears and told "sorry! Aaliya ji

.mujhe maaf kar di jiye.main kabhi bhi kisi ke

bhi life control nahi karunga.kisi aur ki kya

apni khud ki life control nahi karunga.ab

khush.Waise main Zain Usman Abdullah -

Zubair ka bhai and you're-"

"Aliya Haider Barkath's best friend." she

replied.

Even Zainwas shocked that she didn't react at

all. She didn't cry nor did try to ignore him.

She was calm as though they had met for

first time. Even she felt strange why she was

like that with him. She was comfortable with

him. They both walked inside the hall

together.


Zubair and Barkath were shocked to see this

sight. How could Aalu be so silent with Zain

zubair and barkath wondered. However they

were happy.

Cake cutting was done. Later was time for

dance. It was couple dance. zain and Aaliya

sat in a corner as they were without partners.

She initiated the conversation with him. "So you don't have a date"

"No. and you?" he replied.

"No"

"Wanna dance? "He asked holding out his hand.

"Sure." she held his hand. They went on the

dance floor and danced happily.zubair-

barkath were astonished.

Kehte hain:

Khuda ne iss jahaan mein

Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya

har kisi ke liye

Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara

Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta

Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta

Tu humsafar hai

Phir kya fikar hai

Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai

Marna issi ke liye

Kehte hain:

Khuda ne iss jahaan mein

Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya

har kisi ke liye...

While dancing Zain's phone rang out. He

excused himself and left the dance floor. He

was looking tensed. She waited for him in

corner of the hall. When he didn't come she

went out of hall looking for him. She found

him outside on a bench

She went near him and found him crying. She

kept her hand on his shoulder pacifying him.

He saw her and looked down. She settled

herself beside him and asked "Why are you

crying Zain?"

He hugged her and she hugged him back.


Precap:Zain and Aaliya's POV😳

That's it.Done with part 3.I know it's not up to your expectations but bear me.Again apologies for spelling, grammar and Hindi mistakes.😉

Please give your views good or bad and help me improving😊

Like aur comment karna😆



Riya😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
It was nyc.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
chudail maza aa gya update kar hayee that song is one of ma fav
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Sobtian...

It was nyc.
Update soon


Thankuu 😃
will update soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Zaya2

chudail maza aa gya update kar hayee that song is one of ma fav






Song is your favorite mine too😆
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