Love Makes Life Live- A ZAYA FF chapter 10 update on page 33 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Awesome CS RIYA...

Would love to read more...
Do pm me...


Thankuu Habeeba😃
will continue soon😊
will pm you😊
Edited by nashfa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: zayalove

Interesting ..plzz update soon



Will update soon Alina😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: LuvAaliyah

Nice update can't wait to read what happens next 😊



Thankuu ..will update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Interesting 😊 cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
He he hehe
Mera wish granted hua
Got 10likes and comments
You guys are wonderful
Love you all
Will update by tomorrow


Lots of love
Riya 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Heloo everyone .😃
Me again😆
So i got 10 likes and comments & me here to start the story😉
I am not that much good at Hindi .Pls forgive me if there are errors😕

here's part-1😊




"Aalu ,wake up " shouted ayisha.
"di only 2mins"replied sleepy aalu from bed covering duvet over her.
" aalu are you cooking Maggi that you're telling 2 mins.wake up" told ayisha.
"Sone do na di" told aalu
"aalu,dekh Barkath aayi hai " told ayisha.

Aaliya immediately woke up and told " where? ".
" here" came a voice from door .IAaliya got down from her bed and hugged Barkath tightly.after few mins she broke the hug and spoke "I'll not speak with u Bakbak."
"Why what did I do?"
"Ah u don't do anything.why didn't you come with me to Delhi. You left me alone"
"Hey Aalu it was u who came back from Mumbai without informing anyone."
"Leave that.I missed you."
"Me too".
Just the they heard shabana calling for breakfast. They went down to have breakfast.

After eating tasty breakfast ,Aaliya,ayisha and Barkat sat on sofa.
Aalu.aaj zabair ka birthday hai muje une kuch khass dena hai
Zubair ka birthday.. ohooo said Aaliya
stop it aalu .Acha y batao kya gift dena hai askd aaliya
pata nahi, par tum aur ayisha di mer help karoongina
haa zaroor said aaliya and ayisha together


SAME TIME AT MATT COMPANY

Zain abdullah was sitting and seeing files when his best friend Zubair entered
"zain can I charge my phone.its battery is dead."
"Sure" replied zain.
zubair put his phone on charging while zain got a call.
"Find her as soon as possible. I don't want to hear anything. Just find her out."
He kept the phone being angry.
"What happened zain." Asked zaubair.
"Nothing by the way happy birthday bro."
"Thank u"
zubair checked his phone and said"shit barkath will kill me."
"What "
"zain look 85 missed calls from barkath."
"Barkath-your gf"
"Yes"
Again zain got a call and he replied the same thing as Earlier.
"What are you hiding zain i.whom are you finding?"
"Aaliya yaar"
You are finding Aalu,but why?"
"Sav jagah chaan Mari yaar par mil hi nahi rahi hai.Pura Mumbai doonda"
"Mumbai me kaise milegi woh toh yahi hai na." Slipped from zubair's tongue.
"Kya kaha tune yahi hai.kaha hai bol." Said zain


zubair thought. But now nothing could have been done.He knew he had to tell truth to zain otherwise he would find out.
"Woh bhai,yahi hai woh,Delhi me.gulam mansion me hai jaha barkath hai ab"
"Thanks zubair."
zain wore his coat and left towards his car.
"Ms aaliya Gulam haider I'm coming".


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Howz it.
Need your valuable comments. Sorry for my mistakes. Mind you my Hindi is too bad😆.


okay i will update next chapter only if i got 10 likes and comments😆


riya😳


Edited by nashfa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice chapter👍🏼
Interesting story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Hi riya!
The story seems interesting!
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice part ...
Seems intresting...
Zain finding aliya ...
Continue asap ..!!
N thnxx for pm !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: fariya98

Nice chapter👍🏼

Interesting story



Thakuu & will continue soon :)
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