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hello jee! sab kese ho?sorry forr the late update hv wrote this chap 4 tym.i donno why,it gets delted when its about to end now i hv wrote finally ...
chapter 3

in the pacific mall(delhi)

both aaliya and sarah went straight to "forever 21"for shopping.

there sarah while selecting...

sarah-aalu yeh dekh *shows her the black dress*

aaliya-hmmm achhi toh h par tere par suit nhi karegi😛

sarah-achha😕chalo mein aur dekhti hun

she took 5-6 dresses nd went inside the changing room.

in the meanwhile ,aaliya was getting bored so decided to check her whatsaap and saw 2 messages one from aayesha(school mate) nd second from unknown.
she opened nd was shocked to see...

unknown-hay jaaneman!kese ho?

aaliya-who's this?

unknown-tumhara aashiq😉

aaliya-dekhiye mein apko nhi jaanti maybe apne wrong number ko message kiya h

unknown-baby kese baate kar rhi ho? of course mein tumhe jaanta hu nd koi wrong number nhi h 😛

aaliya-agar yeh koi prank h toh bht hi ghatiya h m nt stupid😡

unknown-mein aur prank !mein kya pagal hu jo tum jese hasina ke saath prank khelunga😆😆

aaliya- aagr aaj ke baad is number pe messagekiya na toh dekh llena😡😡

unknown -hayeee 😛vese tum is attitude meinlagti badi kamal ki ho😉😉

aaliayaa_*hayee allah yeh mere samne aa jaaye mar mar ke bhoot na bana diya toh mein bhi apni ammi ki beti nhi😉*

aaliya was about to blck that number but suddenly her phone started ringing ...she was agin shocked to see that unknown number.

she decided to pick up that call

aaliya-tum ho kaun nd kyu pareshaan kar rhe ho?

unknown -kitni baar kahu tumahara aashiq ,tumhe bada maza aa rha h yeh mere se sunne mein😉

aaliya *in a frustrated voice *bbye 😡

unknwon -aree ek min suno toh kya tumhe yaad nhi humari pehle mulakat jab tum mere bahon mein thi nd phir...

aaliya-bas chup rho begarat😡😡*with that she cuts the call*

she was constantly murmuring*besharam,begerat himmat kese hui uski😡*

sarah came out of the room nd shakes aaliya

sarah-aalu tujhe zaroor kuch hua h😕

aaliya- hmmm kuch kaha tumne?

sarah-han meien kaha ki koi prob h toh mujhe batao?kaha khoi rehti ho tum ajkal?

aaliya- nhi ree aisa kuch bhi nhi h btw kuch select kiya ?

sarah-haan yeh do kare the *shows white dress which is above knee nd second one is red which is knee length .*kesa h ?

aaliya-bht achha h par do?

sarah-tumhe kaunsa pasand aaya?

aaliya-red wala par kyu?

sarah without telling moved towards the counter..

sarah-bhaiya yeh do alag alag pack kar dena😊

she paid him nd moved out of the shop

aaliya followed her and asked the same thing but she ignored that question nd said...

sarah-aalu bht bhook lag rhi h ,chal ccd(cafe coffee day) chalte h😊waha pe coffee bhi pe lenge nd choco brownie bhi kha lenge...

aaliya-thik h chalo


in the ccd-

waiter-mam ur order 😊

aaliya-one "devils own"nd wbu sarah?

sarah-me "kaapi nirvana"

waiter-ok mam,aur kuch?
aaliya- han belgian choco shot bhi kar do 2😊

waiter-ok mam*nd leaves*

aaliya-sarah tumne bataya nhi kyu pucha wo?

sarah-wo red dress tumhare liye*hands over the bag*

aaliya-mere liye kyu meine toh kaha bhi nhi ?😲

sarah-dekho i knw tumbhi short dresses nhi pehnti nd tumhe yeh bht paasand bhi thi toh isliye meinesocha ki tumhe gift krdu nd han plz yehi party mein pehna bht achhi lagogi😊


aaliya -pr sarah mein party mein jaa he nhi rhi coz meri tabyat thik nhi h😕

sarah-hayee kyu kya gya ?

aaliya-mera sir dard kar rha h

sarah-chalo mein bhi nhi jaati tum rest karo😊

aaliya-aree nhi tumne itni tayyari kari h tum jaao😊btw thank u for the dress par mein yeh nhi le skti.

sarah-agr tum mujhe apni dost manti ho toh yeh dress bhi logi nd chalo gi bhi aalu har roz thodi na hoti h plzz chllo

aaaliya -par...*suddenly remembers zain*

sarah - par var kuch nhi u r coming nd thats it

aaliya - achha par sirf 1 hr ke liye, ok?

sarah-han baba ok😉*hugs her*

both of them finishes there coffee nd pays the bill nd leave ...

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in the evening
the girls hostel

both of them gets ready,aaliya was wearing red dress ,red heels nd her hair were left open nd applied red lipstick.

while,sarah was wearing white dress,white heels and her hair were tied in a messy bun nd applied a pink lipstick.

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in the other room,
barkat was wearing a short black dress while sana was wearing a black crop top nd denim shorts which reached only till the mid thigh.nd she curled her hairs . she was looking pretty but not more than aaliya.

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in the boys hostel

zain nd ashad both were wearing tuxedo,while saif nd rizwan were wearing a black suit
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the frshers party

all 4 guyzz were sitting in the bar nd drinking wine

and there enters a girl...



precap- pakka ull get dance 😛and a new entry in the story 😃
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phewww finally khatam hua sorry for leaving ut here but seriusly it took me 3 hrs ,the main reason is it was deleting every tym when it was about to end sorry again its nt up to ur expectations. rotten tomatoes nd branded sandels r welcome
next update tom evening😛

ananya😳


Edited by Zaya2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Its so cute chap annie...😳
I love besharam zain😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Awesome chappy.
Precap is nyc.
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Sobtian...

Awesome chappy.
Precap is nyc.
Update soon.

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thank u😛yaa i will btw whats ur name😃mine toh u knw 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: fariya98

Its so cute chap annie...😳 thnks😳

I love besharam zain😉 mee too😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Sobtian...

Its k.
BTW u r very sweet.


awww thank u sho much😳 i hope u lyk iy😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
amazing chp
really beautifully written
loved it
hehe i like aaliya n unknown's convo
coz i know who is dat unknown person ;)
do cont soon !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: fariya98

update

update
update
update
update😉


kar toh diya update😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Annie meri choti chudail
cute chap tha
continue soon











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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zaya2

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thank u😛yaa i will btw whats ur name😃mine toh u knw😆


U can call me Aanya.
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