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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazy4HarshIka

it was so gud read in one go...plz update soon.:)Plz add me in your PM list :)

Glad u liked it... Yaa will add u In my pm list πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
[QUOTE=Deepika_Zaya]wonderful update..yeah..zain saved aaliya..cont soon..[/QUOTE
] Thank u shoo much will update soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
πŸ˜†

Originally posted by: Ilovezaya

You dedicated the chp to me ... To the girl without a name πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Thnx for that πŸ˜ƒ ...

Coming to the chp..
It was great !
ZaYa dance was hot 😳

Rehan Salharudin ? 😲 ... Hain ? 😳 ... Yeh kya kardiya 🀣
Mann this name was enough to make me laugh 🀣

Sana ko maro pls 😈 😑 ... She deserves it 😑

Aaliya Zain ki baho main
Or phir Zain ke room main bhi πŸ€ͺ

Pls update soon πŸ˜ƒ

Yaaa I didn't knew pehle wats ur name but kal we met on twttr πŸ˜†
Thxx vini 😳
Yes πŸ˜† har tum rehaan khan pad ke mera demaag ghum gya tha so... Yeh likh diya πŸ˜†
Sana nhi Mar skti... πŸ˜†
Haan alu zain ki baahon mein... 😳
Thank so much for such a long n wonderful comment... Take care bbye
Annie πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Annie pls update karoo
Where r u yaar
Anyway iam missing u soon much
Come back soon
Love
Riya
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Posted: 9 years ago
Every chapters are awsome ..
Beautifully written..
Rehan salaruddin...lol ..yeh toh producer ka sir name.chura liya πŸ˜›
can u plzz add me in ur pm list?
And plzz cont soon..


Mariya
Edited by harsh_pree - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Annie is everything OK??
Why u don't update
Plz update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello guyzz!!
We r meeting after a long tym, I think? Sorry, sorry I was really busy...Sorry again Coz m nt with the update... Just wanna give thr schedule of my next three updates...
1- the upcoming update on 21st I.e. Tomorrow...
2- then on 24
3- nd then on 25..

Ok guyzz?? ... Btw Thank u for supporting nd bearing me till here... Hope so u'll like my further updates!!!
Keep sending ur lovely comments!! It really makes me motivate to write more!!
Bbye take care Luv u people!!!!!
Annie

Edited by Zaya2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hello jee!
ik m very very late kya kare yaar bht busy thi...meine kaha tha na ki 21 ko dungi but nhi ho paya... but now m free n enough of my bakwassπŸ˜† hope u like this update!
ignr typos...

happy reading...

chapter7

zain carried aaliya to his room...😳
when they reached in the room ... she opened hereyes a little bit nd said...

aaliya-zain...
zain-shhh aaliya*he makes her sit *
aaliya-aaah...araam se
zain-kya hua...*then he sees red marks on her hand *kahin yeh uss rehaan ne toh...😑
aaliya-aah*she winced in pain*
zain- tum aaraam karo...

zains point of view-
yeh mr.rehaan salahrudin tumne achha nhi kiya...ab toh tumhe iska hisaab chukana he padega😑😑tumhare himmmat kese hui meri aali...*he stoped in thw middle of his thinking*meri?naah...lagta h zayda pe li kal nipat ta hun iss begairat se..
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he makes her lie on the bed nd covers her with the blanket...

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in the morning...

aaliya wakes up...

aaliya-aaah...*she holds her head with her hand coz her head was spinning*shayd kal raat ki vajah se dhuk raha but yeh mein kaha pe hun...

she looks around n realise that she's in zains room nd memories of last night were rushing in her mind.
she got up from the bed nd went to the window side...
when opened the window the cold winds blew nd kissed her face...she closed her eyes to feel n a small smile crept on her face...😊

after few seconds when she opened her eyes again she saw zain jogging on the ground...
he was wearing his black tracksuit...

aaliya's point of view-
hayeee...kitna hot lag raha h😳...
ek min mein yeh sab kya soch rahi hun...nah nah,allah tauba -allah tauba!*she mentally slapped her self*
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someone patted on her shoulders, when she turned around ,she was shocked to see...ZAIN!

aaliya-*hayee allah yeh mere baare mein kya soch raha hoga*umm...goo..good morning!

zain-good morning aliya!😊😊
aaliya-toh kese ho ?
zain-bilkul mast ,tumahare samne khada hun...πŸ˜†tum sunao
aaliya-m bhi thik he hun..
zain-hmmm...
aaliya-uhh..achha ab m chalti hun...
zain-aree ruko toh...
aaliya - han..
zain -woh tumhare kapde...πŸ˜‰
aaliya look down at herself nd realise that shes wearing zains long shirt which was below knee length...😲😲😲
she was unable to say anything but grabbed some courage to speak up...

aaliya-yehh mere kapde...*she was not able to complete*😲
zain-aree ...tum gaalt samjh rhi ho yeh tumhare kapde kal raat sana ne change kr diye the...nd usne tumhe yahi sone diya coz tum bht thaki hui thi

she was relieved to hear that...
aaliya-achha...toh me-r-e kap-d-e a-b ka-ha h?*she said stammering *
zain-woh waha par*he points upwards towards the cupboard..*tum ruko m utarta hun...
aliya was already embarrassed ...
aaliya-nahi sir thank you for the help mein khud le lungi...

she took a ladder nd started to climb on it...
aaliya's point of view-
pata nhi itni upar kyu rakh diya seddhe se rakh nhi skta tha chair pe pagal...

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she found her clothes ...she was coming down step wise step but suddenly her foot slipped nd was about to land on the floor when zain catched her in the right time ...
his hand was on waist nd hers was wrapped around his neck ...
both were staring each other😳😳n shared a good eye lock of about 5 mins...😳
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he made her stand properly nd said...
zain-aaliya r u alright?
aaliya-yes*not meeting her eyes with his*
ab mujhe chalna chahiye...

she was about to step out of the room but she remembered something...
she went back to zain...
zain-kya hua?
she quickly wrapped her arms around his nd gave a quick hug...zain was surprised at first but then he aslo hugged her back...

aaliya said"thank you so much sir jo kal apne mere iye kara n apne mujhe us rehaan se bhi..."she said still not meeting her eyes with his...she continued "nd thanks for the shirt mein apko aj wash krke de dungi nd thanks again mujhe bachane ke liye"zain stared at her..."aree isme thanks ki koi baat nhi h agr koi bhi tumhare jagah hota toh m yahi kartaπŸ˜‰*he winked at her* nd plz mujhe sir bnulana band karoπŸ˜†

she smiled at him n said bye nd made her way towards the girls hostel...

he waved his hand nd winkedπŸ˜‰


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PRECAP -aaliya gets to know that sana was not in the room since the party nd now the question running in her mind is who changed her clothes πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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sorry jee itni tym baad update kara wo bhi bekaar ...so rotten tomatoes nd chapals nd all r wlcmπŸ˜• pakka next chap u will lyk ...😳 bass iss bar maaafi 😭😭😭
next update depends on ur response...
luv
annie😳


Edited by Zaya2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello hi. Long Time na.
It ws cute update.
Hailaa!! Aliya in his shirt aur precap me wo to kisne change ki.
Cute eyelock.
Continue soon. Means really soon.
Jaldi milna chahiye.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sobtian...

Hello hi. Long Time na.
It ws cute update.
Hailaa!! Aliya in his shirt aur precap me wo to kisne change ki.
Cute eyelock.
Continue soon. Means really soon.
Jaldi milna chahiye.

Hi aanya 😳
Ty πŸ˜‰
Yaa aaliya in his shirt 😳
Ty again πŸ˜ƒ
Han Han jaldi milega πŸ˜›
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