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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

I liked their convo it was funny continue soon ! ;)

Thanks๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update and thanx for the PM ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello hello jee!! Sorry but I couldn't update the chap yesterday coz if banned me coz being a groupie m nt allowed to post more than 20posts so, they banned me for 1day nd btw coming back to the story
Ummmaaa it'd coming in 2 hrs so stay tuned ๐Ÿ˜†
With annie!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You better update fast ๐Ÿ˜ก
Or I'll SPAM u ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Ilovezaya

You better update fast ๐Ÿ˜ก
Or I'll SPAM u ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†


Ohhh gawwd ๐Ÿ˜† m scared ๐Ÿ˜† bhago yaha se ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello people!sab kse ho?mein ajkal bht jaldi update de rhi hu na?๐Ÿ˜†btw thank u sho much for all the comments ๐Ÿ˜›.
this chap i would lyk to dedicate to all my readers ,who take time to read and comment also๐Ÿ˜ณ


CHAPTER 5

THE FRESHER'S PARTY

all the four guyzzz were sitting in the bar and drinking wine.

ashad-bro kya idhar-udhar dekh rha h?

zain-*comes out of his thought* kuch bhi toh nhi

there enters a girl wearing red dress,she was looking damm hot ๐Ÿ˜ณzain's mouth was left open seeing her,(he was ghoorying her lyk a owl๐Ÿ˜†)
when she turned around ,he was shocked to see that this girl was none other than but it was aaliya...omg!aaliya๐Ÿ˜ณ

he thought to tease aaliya once more๐Ÿ˜ณ

he walked towards her and from the back he whispered in her ear

zain-jaaneman bht hot lag rhi ho๐Ÿ˜‰

aaliya was shocked when she turned around and saw zain smirking ๐Ÿ˜ณ

aaliya-tum...*remembered the conversation b/w her nd unknown the way he said jaaneman while talking on the phone*

zain-kya tum huh๐Ÿ˜†

aaliya-toh wo tum the?๐Ÿ˜กtumhara demaag thikane pe h na ๐Ÿ˜•

zain-aree ek toh taarif karo upar se mohtarma ki baate bhi suno

aaliya- idiot phir tumne mujhe jaaneman kyu kaha ๐Ÿ˜• mein kya tumhari girlfriend hun?๐Ÿ˜ก

zain-ab tak toh nhi ho pr agar tum itna force krogi toh bana skta hun ,mujhe koi prob nhi h๐Ÿ˜†

aaliya-uhhhggg tumse toh baat krna he bekaar h ๐Ÿ˜ก

with that she left and took a seat in the corner

zain also went there with his friends chatting drinking while his friends were noticing each nd every gurl in the entrance and passing comments but zain was constantly looking at aaliya๐Ÿ˜ณ
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AUTHOR'S POINT OF VIEW
guyzz now u'll see the new entry in this story
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there enters a guy which is also in the 2nd year named zubier qureshi,he is also very popular,handsome and very smart.

he is enemy of zain and his gang๐Ÿ˜•

he passes by zain with a evil smile and while walking he sees there a girl sitting on the couch with her friend drinking orange juice wearing a red dress nd friend wearing white .
he found her pretty but not more than the red dress wali.๐Ÿ˜†

he decided to go there and sit next to her.

zubeir -hey young lady!*moves his hand forward for a hand shake*

zain sees this ,he was about to go there but saif stopped him nd took him to the dance floor ๐Ÿ˜‰

aaliya-hello*but doesn't forward herhand*

zubeir-my name is zubeir ,zubeir qureshi๐Ÿ˜Š nd urs?nd m in 2nd year

aaliya-mine is aaliya haider๐Ÿ˜Šm in 1st year day before yesterday i came to this college .

zubeir -think so,u don't live here

aaliya -yaa m from mumbai๐Ÿ˜Š n u?

zubeir-m from here only i mean delhi

aaliya-*allah pehla aisa ladka h jisne tameez se baat ki kyuki do se mile ho ek isse nd ek wo pagal bandar se๐Ÿ˜• shukr h yaha pe koi toh achha h๐Ÿ˜Š*

zubeir-kaha kho gyi*shakes her*
aaliya-huh...

aaliya was about to complete when there was an announcement

speaker-hello girls nd boys,so here we are starting with the dance competition๐Ÿ˜‰everybody come on the stage๐Ÿ˜Š

zubeir-ummm would u like to dance with me ?

aaliya-yaa sure

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ashad-hey sarah would u like to dance with me๐Ÿ˜‰*he said with a wink*

sarah-yes*blush*๐Ÿ˜ณ

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saif-kya tum mere saath dance karogi ?

barkat-par mein toh ashad...

saif-ashad ...ashad toh sarah ke saath h ๐Ÿ˜›

barkat-*feel lyk crying but to show she agreed*ok no prob mein tumhare saath he karungi๐Ÿ˜‰

saif-lets go๐Ÿ˜ณ

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rizwan was partner less so he decided to sit alone in the corner๐Ÿ˜ญ *๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†*

while zainu on the other hand decided to ask aaliya as he knw she wont say a no but he was completly shock when he saw aaliya ,dancing with that stupid zubeir.that tym he feel lyk killing him coz his hands were on her waist ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก


zain was also partnerless he was angry no...very very angry๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

nd there the song was playing

surkh wala ,soz wala,faiz wala luv
hota h jo luv se zyaada
waise wala luv
ishq wala luv'
hua jo dard bhi toh hum ko aaj kuch zaayda hua
'ishq wala luv'
yeh kya hua yeh kya khabar yehi pta h
zayada hua
'ishq wala luv'


both aaliya ndzubeir were swaying with eachother zubeir was lost in aaliya but aaliya was continusly staring at the bar table as there was zain sitting and drinking nd seeing her with jealous *wali *eyes

zain-yeh mujhe ho kya rha h ?mein kyu bardash nhi kar paa rha allah๐Ÿ˜•khud ko...kyu?

suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulders ,he turn around nd sees sana...
sana-vese lagta h tumhe bhi koi partner nhi mila ๐Ÿ˜‰kyu na hum dono...

zain-nahi mujhe nhi jana

sana-plzz zain chalo naa...*moves forward*๐Ÿ˜ณ

zain-8pushes her away* yeh kya kar rhi ho tum๐Ÿ˜•

*he thought that it will be a good chance to show aaliya*

zain-*grabbed her by waist nd took her to the dance floor *๐Ÿ˜ณ

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aaliya-zubeir zara mein aayi ๐Ÿ˜Š

zubeir -aree kya hua?tum thik ho na

aaliyua-han baba m cumin in 2 mins*was about to leave when he saw zain looking at her with a evil smirk on his face while holding sana...


aaliya was shocked at first but said to herself that why she's been bothered ?its his lyf ...

she was about to leave again when she was grabbed by someone ,very tightly holding her waist

nd the song changed


she opened her eyes nd was shocked to see zain

aaliya-zai...

zain-shhh*puts his finger on her lips*

-------dance---------------

aa raat bhar...(2)
jaaye na ghar(2)


aaliya's hand were on his shoulders nd his hands were on her petit waist๐Ÿ˜ณ

hai saath tu...
kya h fikar
jaye na ghar...aa raat bhar...

he turns aaliya in front so her back facing him,he holded her by waist nd swayed her in the air...

jaaye jahan jahan jahan dil kare
jaane kahan kahan kahan phir mile..
iss raat mein bete umar ,saari umar
aa raat bhar...jaye na ghar

zain putted her down nd she was scared now ,so decided to leave but zain grabbed her again nd started dancing ...

namkeeniyaan h nazdukiyan h
rang hi rang h nazaro mein,
hasne lagi hun phasne lagi hun
armaan dil mein hazaaro h

he was sooo close to her ,she was feeling really awkward .he smelled her hair ๐Ÿ˜ณmaking shivers run down her body ...


toh paar de sabhi hade
gale lage kabhi nhi hone na de sehar
iss raat mein bete umar saari umar...

he was turning her round nd finally picked her up in his arms๐Ÿ˜ณ

aa raat bhar(aa raat bhar)
aa raat bhar(aa raat bhar)
jaaye na ghar(jaaye na ghar)
aa raat bhar...

he finally make her stand...

aa raat bhar...aa raat bhar

with that the music ended but both of them were so lost in their eyes that they didn't hv idea evrybody was hooting cheering for them nd ashad nd saif were whistling ...they isharofied rizwan ..๐Ÿ˜†to...

rizwan moved forward nd with his elbow he pushed zain in front ,nd both landed on the couch which was near them...

zain was on top of aaliya nd again their eyelock session started ๐Ÿ˜ณthen they were disturbed by rizwan's whistle๐Ÿ˜†

rizwan-bhai aaj chodna h yaa nhi isi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

both were compeletly embarrassed ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

finally zain got up and aaliya with the anger and embarrassment mixed pushed zain nd moved outwards๐Ÿ˜•

zain also followed her...

to be continued...

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pheww khatam hua ! rotten tomatoes nd chapals are welcm ๐Ÿ˜•

i knw its a crap but meine ab likh dioya yeh do read nd like nd ho ske toh comment bhi kar dena๐Ÿ˜†

annie ๐Ÿ˜ณ




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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
It was nt crap.
Awesome chappy.
I loved jealous zain.
Jaldi jaldi update to acha hua. Their dance was amazing. Isi tarh zayalicious chappy deti rehna annie.
Thanx for d PM. :)
Edited by Sobtian... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Aeh!!!
It was not at all crap!
It was very lovely actually!
Their dance... Waah!
And upar se haumaare jealous zain babu!!!
What a combination, naa?
Amazing update...
Do continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Sobtian...

It was nt crap.

Awesome chappy.
I loved jealous zain.
Jaldi jaldi update to acha hua. Their dance was amazing. Isi tarh zayalicious chappy deti rehna annie.
Thanx for d PM. :)


Sachi? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Thxx ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thxx again ๐Ÿ˜‰ Hehe ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Yes I will try my best ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰
Ur wlxm ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya5666

Aeh!!!

It was not at all crap!
It was very lovely actually!
Their dance... Waah!
And upar se haumaare jealous zain babu!!!
What a combination, naa?
Amazing update...
Do continue soon...

Thank u Riya ๐Ÿ˜›
Thxx again ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Yesh๐Ÿ˜†
Thxx ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Yes I will ๐Ÿ˜›
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