PicOSthon: 39 OSes | Catch up with the ones u hv missed! :) - Page 98

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: darlingpinks

vidya di
It was amazing!!!
Enjoyed throughout the os
Loved how you used Raman's tiredness
A lighthearted os with all elements of a story in it- comedy, romance, guilt, fight, drama, everything
Loved the divider scene- the license fight and the bechara policeman 

Loved these lines:
 "Yeh kya hogaya.Pichli baar maiyya-biwi kaha to daant padi.Ab padosi bola to bhi daant padi. Beta idhar se katle warna ye dono tumara keema banakar tera jeena haram kar denge" 

"Baaki lecture tumhare khatare ko suna dena.I'll leave"

"Jhooti. Compensation needed"

Awesome yaar. 
Keep writing

Thanks dear.
Glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: peace..

@vidya_prasad: dis is d first tym i read ur OS. you write well yaar! πŸ‘πŸ‘

i was laughing like crazy on dese lines:

Yeh kya hogaya.Pichli baar maiyya-biwi kaha to daant padi.Ab padosi bola to bhi daant padi. Beta idhar se katle warna ye dono tumara keema banakar tera jeena haram kar denge πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

"Baaki lecture tumhare khatare ko suna dena.I'll leave πŸ˜†

Yes,Guilty kumar accha tha πŸ˜†
 
I found d OS really really cute. Well done yaar! 


Thanks a lot Pallavi di
This comment means a great deal to me.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: darlingpinks

vidya di
It was amazing!!!
Enjoyed throughout the os
Loved how you used Raman's tiredness
A lighthearted os with all elements of a story in it- comedy, romance, guilt, fight, drama, everything
Loved the divider scene- the license fight and the bechara policeman 

Loved these lines:
 "Yeh kya hogaya.Pichli baar maiyya-biwi kaha to daant padi.Ab padosi bola to bhi daant padi. Beta idhar se katle warna ye dono tumara keema banakar tera jeena haram kar denge" 

"Baaki lecture tumhare khatare ko suna dena.I'll leave"

"Jhooti. Compensation needed"

Awesome yaar. 
Keep writing


Thanks dear.Glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: peace..

@DipaRB6.. firstly let me confess I was really excited for this second OS of urs on the thread. Ek to d pic was brilliant, plus u r soo soo creative.πŸ‘Infact I am so glad to hv met u on the thread.😊

Kudos again for choosing d pic..i thought a 100 times bfor putting the pic in the list..infact i never thought anybody wud voluteer to take it! And you did such a brilliant job with the pic.. i mean u even encorporated the media bit n him touching her blouse/saree part in an altogether different scenario!πŸ‘πŸ‘hatsoff! Shashtang Dandwat Pranam to you maate!πŸ‘πŸ‘

Coming to the story..i loved the whole concept. Her not saying the i love you.. then regretting it later wen she fears loosing her life..n later the i love you and d love making😊
I found d catty part..n her eyes looking like Ruhi really cute.😊😊N the media bit and then encorporating d towel around her n him touching her for confusing d saree as kanjeevaram!πŸ˜†Super creative..I mean I cud hv never been able to think of such a concept.

Plus the writing was as elegant as always.

Again, thank you for participating here. I am indebted to you for dis. Really.😊



Thanks so much Pallavi!! Your kind words mean a lot! Also thanks for creating this awesomely unique OSathon...it really challenged the amateur writer in me and was tons of fun. Looking forward to continue reading the remaining entries and definitely yours! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Dipa
Very well written. Loved it.
Confession and the way you used the picture was very good
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Posted: 9 years ago
vidya Prasad
cute os
totally loved it...
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lazeema

vidya Prasad

cute os
totally loved it...
thanks for the PM

Thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM.
It was So Lovely Part.😳
Ishra Love Moments were so Beautifully explained.😳
The Whole Os was SO lovely explained.😊
Please Write like this On Ishra and Pm to me.😊
                                                                            PriyaCherry. 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM.

It was So Lovely Part.😳
Ishra Love Moments were so Beautifully explained.😳
The Whole Os was SO lovely explained.😊
Please Write like this On Ishra and Pm to me.😊
                                                                            PriyaCherry. 

Thanks dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
dipa reading ur OS first time...
really superb...
never think the pic can be written like this