Originally posted by: darlingpinks
vidya diIt was amazing!!!Enjoyed throughout the osLoved how you used Raman's tirednessA lighthearted os with all elements of a story in it- comedy, romance, guilt, fight, drama, everythingLoved the divider scene- the license fight and the bechara policemanLoved these lines:"Yeh kya hogaya.Pichli baar maiyya-biwi kaha to daant padi.Ab padosi bola to bhi daant padi. Beta idhar se katle warna ye dono tumara keema banakar tera jeena haram kar denge""Baaki lecture tumhare khatare ko suna dena.I'll leave""Jhooti. Compensation needed"Awesome yaar.Keep writing
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