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Indi di, Indu,
I'm so enjoying reading these chats!Indi di, you are right, bringing la home was precipitated by that argument with nani. Otherwise don't think he would've brought her into his private space. And he likes the calm his home affords, along with happy busy family members. But I wonder, that argument with nani was also because in a sense he had started to lose grip on himself from the gota pom pom attack. If not maybe he would've had a more calmer chat with nani, di, et al.Maybe I should be expending all this thinking on what I should really be doing😆
this is what you really should be doing. 😆
yeah, pompom dhari seductress was on his mind but i think that nani chhotey friction was nothing new. both fiery strong people and you could feel his gussa and suffocation at nani insisting on getting him married, he speaks of his "ghutan", bringing achhi bahu to see him, then attacking the girl he thinks he can chill with, a streak of my life my wish in him, he says as much.
and again, it was jija darling that sprang the bring la home idea...
all along the larger scheme of moving the action to rm. but story telling had a nice feel... a smoothness. of course, by the time he is raving and telling jija about why his way cannot be respected... that fab bedroom chat with jija soon after he brings la home and in angry with nani... he is talking about his right to live his way, not believing in marriage, gf has just come home, he is angry...
"zindagi meri hai... aur mujhe aap jaantey hai... shadi ko leke mera nazariya baaki sab logon se alag hai..." i loved te way he said that.
and at shyam's kaman se nikla hua teer aur zaban se nikla hui shabd, his subconscious plays a deadly trick... his mind goes to some other place, you can feel it.
when shyam goes to you can't press rewind... a beat... his thoughts have raced to pompom rani and all hat's done and cannot be undone.
the actions he can't reverse.. the snapping of the dori... dropping her from his office... in the guest house... and finally in the storeroom, her declaration she is leaving.
it's like a body blow... his breath heaves... aargh gorgeous acting and neat neat story telling. you can't stop your subconscious, it does what it does.
never felt wrong... felt human.
and shyam at this stage was not bad either. i liked the fact they let him wear his ear ring... wish they had gone for subtlety with shyam and that story.
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