VruShan OneShot: You and Me - Page 2

Thanks for giving another reason to smile ^_^

From a fictional point of view, the story was well written. Not very long and just plain friendliness. Good attempt. :)

Aww it was so so cute.
It was so VruShan-ish.

Now I wanna read more VruShan OS.
Thanks

As I told you I don't read VruShan works much. But reading your works I knew you would be able to catch up the subtlely needed while writing about VruShan. And I'm not disappointed. This was a very warm OS I have to say. VruShan's bond it itself very warm, their nok jhok their fights over declaring who is the winner or him calling her beta. They are all very beautifully captured in the OS. Best part for me would be the innocence that you kept in between them. That is where the VruShan chord stroke the best. Which was maintained very well throughout the OS. Their bond was as I said very subtlely written. A part which brought a hugeee smile on my face was when Vrushika put her head on Shantanu's shoulders. Great job done Nishi. Keep writing. :D

Mast OS boss...
Cheers to VruShan frndshp...
"Haar k jeetne wale ko Baazigar kehte h" -Vrushika...
"Haar k haarne wale ko Vrushika Mehta kehte h" - Shantanu...
They r just awesome...
Missing Maruti S, Dubey nd Kenya...
Thanx fr pm...

aaawww dis is cute... i dnt read vrushan os.. but i knew u wl do sumthing diff... & i ws so right... its fab...

This was so realistic . It so felt like vrushan .The essence of vrushan remained intact . Loved it

hey nishi

Lllooovvveeeddd it ...
Plzzz write morr more n more in vrushan...
I m feeling like read it again n again

to put it simply in a word...it was ADORABLE :D
vry well written
the way u portayed their bond...i luved it
on the whole it was amazing
thanks fr d pm :)