Ordinary and Extraordinary(pg 3,4,5,6,7,8,14,15,17,20,21,23)ch13pg25 - Page 12

Continue soon it's amazing 🥳

Ye kya kardiya yahn kyon rukaye? But it's good in a Way i am more excited for the next chapter ! ;) the description of the fire was so beautiful ! Continue soon I love it !

Have you ever read a painting
If not then just read your work
Ann, it's so visual I don't hve words, the fire the rain the crunching if the leaves
The subtle dialogues
I love the vivid description, it takes u through the experience, u ace in the way u paint the scenario ... A magnificent experience ...
Seriously I can nvr ever pen down my scenes like that, the use of words is an art n u my frnd hve a phd in it
Hats off for this one
Love you loads
Proud fan n crazy friend
Sim

Amazing update...
I'm lost too, I can't wait for d next part plzzz update it soon tnx :)

i loved it...
Its really amazing..
Pls cont soon...

i jst loved it
plz cont asap

Ann you describe whole scenario so well that i felt i was actually watching them in jungle wonderful job👍🏼

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Annn

Loved it ...you know what i liked the most

was Aaliyas murmur when she said she liked the Jhumkas ...that is imagination ...an art to convey even the deepest n tingliest of sensation ..

I hope she realizes it was for her ...his love ...

love you loads

Sim

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

Ann you describe whole scenario so well that i felt i was actually watching them in jungle wonderful job👍🏼

but why you stopped there I'm impatient to know what happens next

update soon hope zaya will find eacother

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Have you ever read a painting
If not then just read your work
Ann, it's so visual I don't hve words, the fire the rain the crunching if the leaves
The subtle dialogues
I love the vivid description, it takes u through the experience, u ace in the way u paint the scenario ... A magnificent experience ...
Seriously I can nvr ever pen down my scenes like that, the use of words is an art n u my frnd hve a phd in it
Hats off for this one
Love you loads
Proud fan n crazy friend
Sim