Tenu leke mein jaunga -zaya ff chapter 2 page 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Interesting prologue 😛
waiting for the updates
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Intresting concept ...
Continue fast !!
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Tenu leke chapter 1



"Sir waise ek air swaal aap ko aapki dono costars Shraddha aur Priyanka ke saath link kiya gaya aap kya kahenge "the reporter asked Zain abdullah who was sitting between Priyanka chopra and Shraddha kapoor who laughed out loudly at the question
"Woh jawaab toh yeh dono here desakte hai kyun Priyanka and shradhha "looking at them rolling his eyes ..
"Yes actually hum kuch bolenge nahi gayenge "as the both took their mike and smiled at zain
"Jaane kaun ho par ho tum kahi and hai dilko mere yakeen "and zain covered his face shy away ..and the girls giggled
"Thank you "they said and left the stage. ..
"Toh dekha aapne ...kya hai zain abdullah ka raaz kya sachme unhe Priyanka ya Shraddha pasand hai ya koi aur hai ...?" the reporter said


Bhopal abdullah house
Aaliya switched off the TV turning around and looked at surriya abdullah "aap phir yeh zain ke news dekh rahi ho ...usmaan uncle dekhenge toh aap ko bahut kuch sunnna padenga "
Aaliya sternly said to surriya who now had made sad face...as she couldn't see the news ...she got up and held aaliyas hands
"Waise tum bhi toh badi fan ho zain abdullah ki ...tum bhi toh news dekthi ho toh main kyun nahi " surriya asked aaliya
"Are usman uncle ghar pe nahi hote tab dekthi hu par aapko nahi dekhna chahiye aunty usman uncle ko pasand nahi hai Sab" she said as she moved away
"Main ayaan ko dekh ke aati hu uth gaya hoga "she left the room with surriya standing lonely remembering her past which she wasnt allowed to think of...





Aaliyas room


"ayaan baby utho" aaliya picked she her one son in her hands as he twinched his eyes
"Mumma "he said as hugging her tightly
"Beta utho chalk hum daadi ko Milne jaate hai"he smiled in his sleep still hugging her



Living room

"Are ayaan aagya"surriya took ayaan in her hands and readily hopped inti her hands
"Ab sambhaliye isse aap bahut shararti hogaya "aaliya kissing his cheeks as he laughed loudly at aaliyas comment ...

Surriya began to play with ayaan while aaliya walked to usmans who was sitting on the couch staring at surriya who was happy with ayaan.
Aaliya sat next to usman
"Bahut kush lag rahi hai na "usman asked aaliya
"Hmmm ..bahut kush ..par andar se woh bahut dukhi hai aaj bhi zain me news dekh rahi theee uncle "
As she looked into usmans eyes who had pain sorrow of loosing his only son ...
"Uncle woh aapka beta hai "aaliya said softly
"Nahi woh mera beta nahi hai mera beta hota toh che saal phele mera ghar nahi chodke jaata"usmaan shot angrily at aaliya
"Uncel zain ko main jaanti toh nahi par...jaise Maine TV pe dekha hai unhe woh abhi bhi aapko bhule nahi aur roz phone karte hai par aap phone bhi nahi lete "aaliya asked her with blank face
"Nahi baat karni usse usko bada aadmi banna tha so ban gaya mujhe koi zaroorat nahi hai uski "he said getting up from there and left the room



Aaliya sat there silent with looking at surriya playing with her son ...who was fatherless for now and a old man leaving the room who needed his son but didn't accept it he missed him but his ego was big to accept it ...




Mumbai

Zain 's house
"Arre producer Saab bhopal kyun par"
"Theek hai surf 20days shoot udhar and I want total privacy no one should be allowed to come near me and no one allowed on shoot samjhe perfect security " he said in a stern voice
"Theek hai parso ki flight book kardo "
As he kept the phone and slumped into his couch...

Thinking bhopal its gonna be difficult to resist myself from meeting mom dad...par pata nahi kyun mujhe aisa kyun lag raha ki zindangi mere liye baheee faila kar khadi hai bhopal mein mujhe a is a kyun lag raha hai meri muztaqbil udhar hee hai pata nahi a is a kyun laga raha shayad zindangi ek aur muka degi shayad "



So done with my torture And bakbak now u ppl comment and like it...critcisim welcomed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was really an amazing chapter
beautifully written
so nw zain gng to bhopal
eager 2 know wat will happen next
pls cont soon
Edited by jazly_zayafan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Awesome start yaar...
A bit confusing...why does AALU call USMAN uncle???
And some where zain ko pata NAHI he has a son haina...
So zain going to bhopal...can't wait for that...
Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
superb part
zain is gng to bhopal
waiting for d zaya's first meeting
cont soon !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazly_zayafan

it was really an amazing chapter
beautifully written
so nw zain gng to bhopal
eager 2 know wat will happen next
pls cont soon



Thank you so much will update second chapter tomorrow
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
WOah!
Zain a superstar!! (I LOVE HIM)
Chapter toh achaa tha bas mere man yeh sawaal hai ki woh baachaa kiska hai?
Bas itna bata do...
Muaah! loved it! ^.^
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Awesome start yaar...
A bit confusing...why does AALU call USMAN uncle???
And some where zain ko pata NAHI he has a son haina...
So zain going to bhopal...can't wait for that...
Plz continue soon...
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Because she stays on rent in usmans and surriyas house ...and about zain u will come to know more about him soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mera-Hi-Jalwa-

WOah!

Zain a superstar!! (I LOVE HIM)
Chapter toh achaa tha bas mere man yeh sawaal hai ki woh baachaa kiska hai?
Bas itna bata do...
Muaah! loved it! ^.^





Soon u will come to know wait
Thank you
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