Zaya ss...har KISI ko hota hai pyaar-part 7(pg 23) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: zayalove

Sorry habby
I m late ..
Its an amazing story ..
Loved it totally .
Zaya r adoreable ...
Update soon
Thanks for the pm janii
Lots of love
Alina


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And your welcome for the PM thing...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Sorry hubby super late...seems like you have problems of your own...it's ok...

Chudail hug🤗...CHUDAIL hug to you too...😛
Rocking Amazing!!...thanks so much dude...
Already loving Aliya... she is bold and straight itseems...something different reminds the FF Aliya...
Bechara Rizwan😆 Gauhar slapped her... YA kismat ne KISI AUR KA naam likha Huwa hai...
Waise kya Jodi banaya tumne... Rehan and Gauher🤣, couldn't stop rofling...that's what we all wanted right???
Hayee forgot!! Shazia and billu... jodi is cute...YA they will be only in the starting few I think...
Ab fahad ka dil thodne ka baaki hai😆...his name was unneeded...
Loved it... complety...thanks again...
Continue soon...hope you like the rest...
Thanks for pm...your welcome...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

nice start!!!😊
loved it❤️
please continue soon😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Nice update ...loved shazia and billals role too

Continue soon
Sim


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

Loved the update..
Continue soon..
Thanks for the pm


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing prologue and chapter was also aweosme ...
Continue soon !!
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Hello...back with an update...boring HOGA shayad...but anyways...

Part 2

While zain was on his way to the police station, his dad was busy with his regular duties...
*opens the cell*...tum ja sakte ho...he says...
Zeeshan who had a regular habit of fooling girls...smiles evily, gets up and tries to leave...while USMAN stops him by holding his arm..."EK minute"...while zeeshan looks at him furiously...

USMAN : ainda KISI ladki ko DHOKA DIYA na...toh saari zindagi in chaar diwaron KE Andar guzarna padega...samjha??
Zeeshan : *aap Chinta NA kare...ye toh roz KI baat hai...par is baar Tumhare chaal MEIN phasne NAHI wala*...he thinks and nods...while he lets go off him...

As He leaves the station in a hurry...he collides with zain..."sorry bro"..zain says but he doesn't show his face to him nor replies...zain greets his dad...
Zain : hey dad..PHIR se ek aur parinda Azad...*sits on the chair in front of his dad*...
USMAN : hmmm...kal raat se yahan pada Huwa tha...us ladki ne apna complaint wapas le Liya...isliye is baar chod DIYA...*busy reading the complaint book*...
Zain : ACCHA...aaj pyaar ka lecture chal Raha tha...damn it yaar...rizwan ko Saath le aana tha...

Usman keeps down his book : Kyun usey Kya huwa???
Zain : Sirf ladke nahi...ladkiyan bhi Kam nahi hai dad...bechara public humiliation se office hi nahi aa Raha...
Usman : aaj kal ka modern zamana...pyaar ka toh aaj koi matlab hi nahi rakhta...AISA hi chalta Raha toh har koi is Mahaul mein rehkar bigad sakta hai...
Zain : chill dad...aapka beta AISA kabhi nahi karne wala...
Usman : aakhir beta kiska hai...both hi5 eachother...

Zain : haan...dad...Itni der ho gayi...MOM ne kaha aapko ghar le aane ko...JALDI chaliye warna doosri class Leni padegi...they both leave together...

In the evening, Shabana was waiting for Aliya.aliya comes running..sorry sorry mom..aaj PHIR se...
Shabana : der kyun Kiya?? Ye mat batana KISI ki jodi banakar aayi ho...she asks...
Aliya : woh MOM actually...ummm...kitni tasty Khushboo aa rahi hai...bohot bhook lagi hai..tries to divert the topic...

She runs to the dining table...wah...Chole bature...mere favourite...thank you so much MOM...she starts eating...
Shabana : ab batayegi BHI kahan reh GAYI??
Aliya doesn't reply...
Shabana : Aliya main TUJHSE kuch pooch rahi hoon...Aliya nods as a no...

Shabana : Bata warna...
Ayat : kya Huwa ammi?? Appi...aap kab aayi??...still doesn't reply...
Shabana : pata nahi kya Karke aayi hai ye...kuch bol hi nahi rahi hai...
Ayat : hmmm...mujhe Lagta hai appi ko pyaar ho gaya hai...
Aliya starts coughing as food gets stuck in her throat...pani...pani do ammi...she grabs the water and starts drinking...pagal kya bol rahi ho??

Shabana : phir bata na...Itni chup kyun ho...
Aliya : ammi aap hi ne toh kaha tha...khane ke waqt baat nahi karna chahiye...she gets up takes her plate to the kitchen...
Shabana : baat badlana band kar...kitna pareshaan hoke phir rahi hoon par tujhe itna bhi Khayal nahi hai...
Aliya : sorry mom...woh main Shazia ke ghar gayi thi...usne kaha tha ke woh FAHAD se shadi nahi karna chahti hai isliye main...

Shabana : Shazia...kitni baar kaha doosron Ke ghar ke maamlon mein dhakal mat dena...
Aliya : par maine toh kuch nahi Kiya??
Shabana : Sacchi??

Aliya : haan...zyaad nahi...bas THODA sa...lecture dena pada...
Ayat *giggles* : lecture...Tumne Shazia ke Abbu ko lecture DIYA??
Aliya : kyun nahi...MAAN hi nahi Rahe they...isliye MUJHE hi bolna pada...
Shabana : AUR woh maan Gaye??
Aliya : ofcourse maan Gaye...nahi toh plan 2 chalu kar deti...*giggles*

Ayat : hmmm...AUR woh kya hai??
Aliya : tujhe kyun bataoon...waise bhi tu is sab ke liye choti hai...
Ayat gets angry: excuse me...main choti nahi hoon...AUR waise bhi Tumhare Saare ideas jaanti hoon...
Aliya : really toh Bataao kya plan tha??
Ayat : bhaag kar Nikah karana...correct...
Aliya : tujhe pata tha??
Ayat : kyun nahi pata hoga...tumhari Saare romance books pad chuki madamji...dekha hai kitna research kar chuki ho...

Aliya furious : tu mere kamre mein kyun gayi??
Ayat : kyun AUR kya kya hain Wahan par??*giggles*...Abhi dekh kar aati hoon...
Aliya : ...she tries to run behind her but Shabana blocks her way and looks at her angrily...

Shabana : terey Abbu hotey...toh woh bhi AISE hi karte...
Aliya : kya?? Par ammi...pyaar toh pyaar hai...I mean aapne Shazia AUR Bilal ko dekha hai...ek dum love birds KI tarah Rehtey hai...isliye maine uski madad Ki...

Shabana : agar tu pyaar ko pyaar Maanti hai...toh ab TAK tujhe kyun nahi Huwa??
Aliya : ye baat toh main bhi sochti hoon...par lagta hai ALLAH ne Mujhe ek surprise rakha hai...and I am sure...Jo bhi Hoga...woh mujhe bohot pyaar karega...
Ayat from behind the door : Wah appi wah!! Pyaar ki ek kahaani ka dialouge no.354...*laughs*
Aliya furiously : chodungi nahi tujhe...and runs behind her...

At zain's home...everyone were having their dinner...while the door bell rings...Suraiya leaves to open the door...it was Sanam...USMANs friend Mir khan's daughter...who returned from USA...
SURAIYA : AREY sanam beta...
Sanam : wow...aunty...*hugs her*...aap toh Pehle se zyada hot lag rahi ho..

.Suraiya blushes and smiles...aao na...hum ABHI dinner kar Rahe they...
Sanam : no no...it's ok aunty...aap jaayiye main yahin pe...
Suraiya : nahi...you will have dinner with us...aao...she drags her along...

Sanam greets everyone...
Usman : sit down...she agrees and sits next to zain and smiles while zain doesn't care...
Suraiya : beta...ammi Abbu kahan...
Sanam : woh aunty next month hum India transfer ho Rahe hai...isliye main yahan Pehle aa gayi hoon...
Usman : ye toh bohot ACCHI baat hai...settle hone mein THODA time toh lagega..

Sanam : haan uncle...AUR MUJHE job bhi chahiye tha...isliye kal se main apne friend ke Saath...
Usman : friend...AREY friend Ki kya zaroorat...tum yahin reh sakti ho...
Suraiya : of course...AUR tum zain KI company bhi join kar sakti ho...I am sure Wahan bohot offers honge...kyun zain??? Everyone look at zain...zain was silent...

Usman : AREY miyan...Bataao bhi...
Zain : haan... dad...par...
Sanam : awww...thank you so much zain...main Abhi MOM ko phone Karke batati hoon...she leaves...😛
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So khatam HOGAYA...Sanam wasn't in the CS...but just an addition...evil or not...maybe you will find that out later...

Hope you liked it...
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Ahf...

Edited by 786ahf_bi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing prologue and chapter was also aweosme ...
Continue soon !!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zayadreamland

loved d concept
cont soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Aliya is the match maker
And her family knows about it!

Wonder what role Sanam will play

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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