zaya ff ... Love ne mila di jodi :) part 25 page 116 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u so much guyzz for ur comments i will update after 16 coz my exmas will be over by than ... and to all those who wants pm buddy me
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Amazing prologue !!
Would love to read further :)
Continue fast
N do pm me
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amazing character sketch..continue soon😊
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Amazing CS Alina, continue soon
Thanks for pm😳
I ll be waiting
Quite interesting
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Thanks guyzz for ur lovely comments will update after 16 dec coz my examsr going on ...
Once again thank u
Love Alina
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All the best for your exams
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

All the best for your exams


Thank u priya ... ;)
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Originally posted by: zayalove


Thank u priya ... ;)

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Finally my exams r finished now i m working on my first chapter ...
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Sorry for being late yaar actually was too much depressed abt the peshawar incident and than my mother went to pakistan ... so was little busy ... so now enough of my chatter n lets begin with the chapter ... actually to b very honest i dont know wht i m writing ... but i m jst writing to kill my tym and anxiety oz i m missing mama alot ...
So lets start it ...

CHAPTER 1
Barkat villa
It was a peaceful morning for everyone ... all of them were busy having their breakfast but one member was missing ... n that was non other than zain usman abdullah .. he was sleeping peacefully .living in his dream until he felt the sun rays falling on his face ...he groaned as his mother came n opened the curtains... zain covered his face with blankets ... surraiya came nd sat beside him pulled his head on her lap .. and started making circles in his hairs ..
Surraiya: uth jao zain .
Zain : sone do na mom plzz
Surraiya : nahi zain tumhe abhi shaziya k ghar jana hai na engagement ka shagun le ke
Zain sat up with a jolt ...
Zain : shit mom ap ne mujhe pehle q nahi uthaya bhai mujhe maar dale gein ..
Surraiya : q fahad tumhe q maare ga
Zain : arey mom woh babhi ko hai ka love letter
Zain : oops
Zain blurted out ..
Surraiya giggled and ruffle his hair ..he kissed her cheek and ran into the washroom..
After 25min he came downstairs . Cladded in his denims white tee and black blazer looking as handsome as ever ... surraiya smiled seeing him ...
He came and sat beside surraiya who was cross checking all the things going to haider mansion ... fahad and rizwan also came ... and took zain to the corner
Fahad handed over the letter to zain and blushed ...
Zain : oho bhai u r blushing ... letter dete waqt yeh haal hai toh phir .. suhaagraat par kiya hoga .. zain teased him
Rizwan : bro fahad bro sari raat blush karte rahe gain or suhaagraat guzr jaye gi ... rizwan also teased him ...
Soon both zain n rizwan were running while fahad was running behind them ..
Fahad : ruko tum dono ko main abhi bata ta hoon ...
Soon fahad caught both of them and pulled their ears ...
Zain :ahh ouch bhai lag rahi hai
Rizwan : ouch bro lagi rahi hai ...
Fahad :ab pata chala bchoo main abhi bhi tumhar bara bhai hoon
Zain : han jis ka bas sirf hum par hi chalta hai ...
Fahad pulled his ear once again and zain winced in pain again
Fahad : kiya kaha ...
Zain : kuch nahi kuch nahi ..
Suddenly surraiya came with shagun things in her hand ...
Fahad left both zain n riwan surraiya handed over the things to zain ...
And left from there saying
Surraiya: yeh sab aj ki engagement ka saman hai ...
Zain : ab dekho bhai ... ap se badla loon ga ... mere kaan khenche na ap nd ..
Fahad made a puppy face ... and requsted zain to not spoil his love letter ..
Zain took pity on him and assured that he will do nothing ..
Soon zain and rizwan left ...
Here in Haider mansion ...
Shabana was busy .. with hee work and was preparing things for zain and rizwan ayat was helping her .. or irritating her with her talks ...
Ayat : mama zain hai or riwan kab aye ge shaziya baji kitni lucky hai na unhe itna ache devar mile ... waise mama main kiya pehno gi baji ji mangni main
Shabana : offo ayat chup karo ... kitna bolti ho
Ayat : par mama main toh
Shabana stopped her work and looked at her youngest daughter ... held her chin
Shabana : han mujhe pata hai k tum apni baji ki engagement k liye bohat excited ho . Lekin abhi mujhe kaam karne do zain or rizwan abhi ate hi honge ayat : lekin mama meri dress ka kiya ...
Shaziya : yeh rahi tumhari dress .
Shaziya enters with a beatiful lehnga of pink colors .. ayat was very excited to see it ...
Ayat ran and hugged shaziya ...
Ayat : thank u thank u so much baji this dress is so cool ...
Ayat leans forward and whispered in shazia's ear waise zain bhai or rizwan bhi apka dress la rahe hain jo fahad bhai ne choose kiya hai ... shazia blushed
Ayat : oho blushing ... ..oh yaad aya .. hamari saint appi kahan hai ...
Shazia : wahi jahan har subah hoti hai .. orphan bacho ke sath park mein khel rahi hogi ...
Shabana : or woh bache bhi us ke sath kitna khelte hain ek rin na jaye woh orphange se calls ani shuru ho jati hai aloo api k liye ... sach main aliya meri bohat achi bachi hai ...
Shazia n ayat pouted ... : hum apke achi bachi nahi hai kiya mama ...
Shabana : nahi tum log bhi meri bohat achi bachi ho ... chalo ab jaldi se ready
Ho jao zain or rizwan atey hi honge ...
Soon ayat and shaziya went to their room
Ayat got ready and wore and casual jeans and top ... while zain and rizwan enter haider mansion ... shabana greeted them and the servants took shagun from zain and rizwan's hand .. they all seated ... shazia also came down ... shabana left the youngsters and went to call surraiya for the shagun ...ayat rizwan zain and shaziya shared a great bond ..
Zain took out a letter from his pocket and grinned
Zain : bhabi yeh ap k hone wale shohar sahab ne ap k liye diya hai love letter
Shazia blushed
Zain rizwan n ayat in unison : ooo...
Shazia ran into her room ... zain got up to leave .. he leans forward and whispered in rizwan's ear ..
Zain : chal romeo main bahar ja raha hoon tu apni juliet ko rose de k aja ..
Rizwan: bro ap ko kaise pata ..
Zain : coz i m zain intellegent abdullah ..
He greeted ayat and went out..
When he was out he saw a girl in backyard .. she was wearing a beautiful salwar suit of white color with red embroidery on it .. her Hair open .. she was playing with some kids ..there with red ballons in her hand kids were running behind her for ballons.. she was chuckling ...zain could hear her giggling but he was unable to see her face soon he saw the girl handed balloons to kids and now she was walking towards her home ... she was walking and zain was watching her soon rizwan came and tapped on zain's shoulder .. zai came out of his trance ..
Rizwan : kiya soch k muskura rahe ho bro ..
Zain : ku .. kuch bhi toh nahi ...
The girl was now running as she was getting late .. she slightly bumped into zain but didnt stop but left from there saying sorry after turning for abt nano second ..
Zain : yeh haider mansion main yeh kon hai .. pehli baar dekha isse toh
Rizwan : oh bhai yeh aliya hai ..shaziya bhabi ki choti behn
Zain : what .. shaziya bhabi ki ek or behn hai ..
Rizwan: han q app ko nahi pata tha kiya ..
Zain : nahi..
Rizwan : bro aliya ek bohat hi sweet larki hai .. kafi shy types hai .. but really very challenging ...
Zain : woh toh sham ko engagement main hi pata chale ga ...
Pheww ...
Now enough of my torture ..
Read n comment ..
I serioulsy dont know wht i have written
All your jotaas chappals are more than welcome
Lots of love Alina :)
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