Destiny of love. #CHAP-14, 10 April - Page 61

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amin21

Wow

worth waiting update yaarπŸ‘
Beautifully written
so asad has his own reasons for what he does to zoya😲
but doesn't he think it can make the situation worse for both of themπŸ˜•
as usual felt really bad for zoya
please don't let bilal take her back there😭
ghafur n rashid😑😑
Eagerly waiting to read more about asad's pov.
And dear just a note
its not seven but four wives for a man to marry and yes as you mentioned he should give all rights to each of them equally
thanks for the pm
love it

thanks you πŸ˜†
He has reason an its one..INSECURITY 😑
He understands but the pain 😑
Till asad is alive nothing will happen to Zoya 😳
Asad pov..umh.. Yeah i shall give some more on his pov πŸ˜‰
Oh sorry. Actually I asked my friend and so i wrote it. I am sorry again you are welcome
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

That's really shocking part

I hate Rashid and gaffour with that billal
I just hope asad is there to save zoya
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon

billal is my fav villaim uptill now😎
Asad is there. Till he is alive 😳
I will thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Heyy Shruthi...😊
Thanx alot for the P.M...πŸ˜›
Well this was a Raw , Unnervingly Dark and Brilliantly written part... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ⭐️
Finally !!! We got Asad's POV...πŸ˜ƒ but he has his own reasons to not share his actual reason behind his brutal behaviour towards Zoya... that doesn't mean he is right...but he is actually concerned for her...
Well iam confused...What is Mr.Farooqi's orgianl name...and still who is this an abuse on Man's race Bilal..πŸ˜•
Rashid & Gaffur...😑
You wrote the last part very closely real...it is the reality ..kudos to you.. πŸ‘
Continue soon.. πŸ˜ƒ

thank you for appreciating my work 😳
Let me help you.
Billal is villain he is pimp basically when you saw zoya in past she was trapped and sold by a pimp to asad everynight. He is same.
And the question why she didn't recognized last time. She was tense and it didnt alarm her that time may be next time she will not miss it 😳
Mr farooqui is total different dad. He has no name in mu story i prefer to keep him mr farooqui. He is not evil. 😳
Thanks as reality is more harsh than fiction
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Shruthi..
I read the latest update..this time I unresd super fast *collars up* πŸ˜†
U know I feel Asad doesn't like being vulnerable in front of Zoya..he so wants everything to go back like how it was..he wants her to b happy but he just doesn't know how to show her his love without hurting her..I can understand y Asad doesn't want marriage...his parents crappy marriage must have removed the fairy in marriage he had..the grave scene was nice..

I like this Asad...he has soo many emotions bottled up inside him but he only potrays one emotion with excellence-anger.

He loves Zoya that is obvious..I hate this Bilal n Gaffur...I mean sending a girl back to that dump

I'm sure my superhero Asad will save zoya..let's c what happens in future update..plzz give us more of asya in the update..

Update soonish...love ur story..

P.s-ooh so valentines ur reason for disappearing ...cool..hope u had a lovely valentines..btw where has fari disappeared? 😊

Loads if luv
Sara
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Posted: 9 years ago
bechari zoya...
i always feel so bad fr her...
pehle asad ka ajeeb behaviour n nw increasing no. of devils around her
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi i m new to this forum .Read your story its awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very well written..
Asad 's emotins..he lovs zoya bt cnt express his fellings
Rashid,gaffur nd billal was 😑
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Posted: 9 years ago
unresserved on page-86πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg!!!
Fabulous update
So dark n intense
Loved it
Update next chapter soon
Do pm me
Lot's of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
so nw zoe again in trouble nd i knw tat asad wil b ne savng her
wel wrtn shruthi...waitng fr nxt update nw i thnk zoe wil bcme aware of asad intentions nd d care he hav fr her
i lvd hw asad reveald hs feelngs to soul of his mother
cntnue soon
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