Ek "OS-Thon" Thread YHMians Ke Naam- THE LAST UPDATE PG 70 - Page 55

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Ok ok i came back remembering that Anki u r going n we wint meet for some time.
Thank u babe so much for staying up to now for this!
I tried my best to finish it just for u.
As usual u r a lovely reader and have the best of words for everyone.
Love u gal!
Best of luck again.
Remember i am just a pm away.

Woohoo!!! That was superb!!!! This was so hot that I think something had to catch fire with the intensity of it all...And throughout it was laced with your trademark humour! And the concluding sentence was pure poetry like the union of these two colourful characters...

OSJ it was a fascinating story..not much action but hotness is emanating from each word of yours..a vibrant one...loved it

Originally posted by: sunny303

I just read from Tweety's 'appi' all the way through to  your 'dessert' ...and just wow☺️..slow clap ladies, slow clap...job well done😃😊😉

Originally posted by: twerping

Woohoo!!! That was superb!!!! This was so hot that I think something had to catch fire with the intensity of it all...And throughout it was laced with your trademark humour! And the concluding sentence was pure poetry like the union of these two colourful characters...

Thanks so much for the PM!

Edited by omshreejaanu - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: peace..

that was sooo beautifully written OSJ!  😊  a lot of love emanating from the story..again soo beautiful! loved the last 2 lines.

Beautifully written!
All the writers in this thread did a wonderful job thank you all! 🤗 Edited by SanayaBarun - 9 years ago

OSJ...Finally you posted yours...Was eagerly waiting for this one!
Ohh my my..Whatta beginning! The title...Its enough to make one blush had this not been a G fest, its so APT!..☺️☺️
" Why do you even try to do MY job? " <=== That one line..Gaawwdd..It was so SEXY! That one itself has me blushing like an idiot already...☺️☺️ Ahh, ofcourse..what followed next was ahem..HOT! Yours didn't need action..the intensity of the words is enough to make one go red! That's exactly what happened in this one too. Ahh, the beauty with which you write is simply..BRILLIANT! ⭐️👏 The last 2 lines were the cherry on the yummy cake! 😆

To put it in your brilliant words..I succumbed to your flawless writing! 😳 Thank you for that beautiful OS! <3 😃

OSJ, Finally you posted ... Worth the wait it was .. This was truly the dessert after the main course.
Just loved the way she was muttering and stared in to him when he came forward to help her..
All succumb to his charm when unleashed and JKR is not different.
Just loved the way she surrendered herself to him and the way it was explained
Hot, Sensuous and what not.. I did not want the OS to end..
Lovely work 👏👏👏, I blushed blushed and blushed ☺️☺️☺️
Thank you for this
Edited by arunabhi - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Okk aruna di

i read the updated version

its wonderful yr

really..raman ne ishu ki achi band bajadi

good job divya u asked for update

hahaha .. Thanks for reading it ..
Puttar ☺️☺️...
I will have to tell her today