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Posted: 8 years ago
awesum part
loved maaneet moments
geet and dadi planned to meet their respective frnds
poor angel sitting alonevin garden n crying ...missing her frnds

cont soon dear
waitng fr nxt part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome.. Superb...
Thanks for update..

Continue soon...

Jiska darr tha wahi hua ...

Angel goes missing.. But by any chance is it geet behind this..

Angel ko cheer karne k liye she did this may be..

Agar aisa hai to .. Uski to watt lag gayi..

Sab log kitne darr aur tension me hai..

Sasha is in a hurry to count her days in kc I guess...
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Posted: 8 years ago
One more thing..
Its part 55 and not 54 ...


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Hello indu



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updatinggg...😳


Word Count: 1

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Part - 56



KM is like a body without a soul... no one had nothing from the morning... and their faces are dull.. the light of their house is missing and they can do nothing... Maan and Veer found them the most helpless men in the world... Naina was crying continuously and they could not do anything...

Every minute was passing like a year to them... they can do nothing but to what for someone to call them.. or at least give some information of angel...

And in their tension and anxiety nobody heard the sound of a car entering KM...

Geet entered in and everybody stood in their places seeing her...

Geet looked at every one .. everyone is seeing her.. she smiled at them and came to Naina and said... lo naina... apni laadli ko sambhalo... subah se bohut mast ki ...aur bohut sataya bhu mujhe... she said looking at angel lovingly... and continued.. thak gayi becahri... maine tumhari laadli ka ache se khayal rakha... usse time pe juice diya.. snack diya aur isse dinner khiladiya hai.. ab sirf ache se sone do... dekho abhi aadhi neend main hai ... Angel is half sleeping on geet's shoulders...

Naina took Angel and hugged her tightly and started to cry more... this is more of a relief.. That angel is safe...

Geet - Naina kya hua... Ro kyun rahi ho... but naina didn't reply her... She looked around and sadi.. Kya hua... sab aise kyun ho... but she got no reply...

Everyone sighed in relief seeing angel .. she is sleeping ... Veer came to Naina and took angel .. He kissed her with tears... These few hrs are the longest for them.. any parent will feel like that only.. Veer is no exception.. may be he is strict but he loves angel... very much... He signalled Naina .. and she followed veer who took angel to their room...

Geet - kya hua aap sab lo aise kyun dekh rahe hain mujhe... she turned to maan and said - kya baat hai Maan...


Veer slowly placed Angel, asked Naina to be there with her only and came down... and down stairs...


Naina's Mom - dekho aise pooch rahi hai jaise kuch jaanti hi nahi... ... aaj tumhari wajah se meri beti ne itna kuch saha.. .. veer jo kabhi bhi oonchi awaz mein baat nahi ki usne aaj naina pe gussa hogaya... tumhari wajah se... pata nahi tumhe kya mila yeh sab karke... tumhe pata bhi hai .. hum sab pe kya guzri... subah se bachi lapata hain... sab log pagalon ki tarah usse dhondh rahe the... aur tum usko leke ghoomne gayi... kyun leke gayi... tumne batana bhi zaroori nahi samjha...

Naina's mom was going on and on... geet was shocked literally in tears as no one had never said such tings to her till now... ...she felt very alone... Even though Maan and Meera are standing there... but nobody came in support of her... She can't disrespect Naina's mom but saying something to her... She is just waiting for Maan to say something in her support .. may be then she can open her mouth...

Meera - Kuch toh bolo... Geet... kyun leke gayi... kisi ko bina bataye...

Naina's mom again started and Veer came down just then.. he was about to stop her... but he stood rooted by Maan's words...

Maan - Aunty ji ke sawalon ka jawab do geet... Kyun leke gayi Angel ko bina bataye... aur kis haq se leke gayi... jawab do... kya koi jawab bhi hai tumhare paas... Veer aur naina ne jo saha in kuch ghanto mein..angel ko ghar pe nahi dekh ke .. kya koi jawab hai tumhare paas mujh pe jo gurza uska...

Geet was looking at Maan.. her eyes are showing only pain... like someone has pulled out the life from her...

Maan - jawab do geet ... kis haq se leke gayi tum Angel ko...

Veer - Bhai... Jaane do... Angel sahi salamat hai... aur kya chahiye...

Maan - tum beech mein mat bolo Veer... aaj mujhe iska jawab sunna hi hain...

Veer - kyun zid karr rahe hai... jaane do

Naina's Mom - aisi kyun khadi ho... jawab do... kyun kiya aisa... tumhe naina ka khayak nahi aaya... Naina ka toh ro roke bura haal hoagya hai.. sirf tumhari wajah se... kya dushmani hai tumhari meri beti se...

Geet still didn't respond... suddenly she is looking pale.. but no one bothered to know .. they only want answers as their main concern is angel now...

Maan's anger was increasing as geet is not answering... He pulled her harshly and said... Jawab do Geet... geet still didn't respond... she is looking at him...

Maan left her and she stumbled back a little but she steadied herself somehow ... He said - Galati tumhari nahi hain... Galati meri hain... mujhe Angel ka security badhana chahiye tha... and his anger now directed towards Ali.. as he is asked to be with her all the time... aur tum.. maine kaha than a ki tum angel ke saath hi rahoge... toh kyun nahi the... ghar walon ke ilawa agar angel bahar gayi toh tumhe uska saath jaan hai.. toh kyun nahi the tum angel ke saath...

Ali - Woh ghar par hi thi ... aur main thodi der ke liye andar gaya... naina bhabhi ne hi bulaya mujhe...

Maan - bahane banana band karo... He again pulled Geet and shouted at her... jawab do geet... koi jawab bhi hai tumhare paas in sawalon ka... Geet was looking down.. she didn't even see into his eyes... He pulled her hand harshly once again to gain attention from her... Aaj tumhari wajah se pehli baar Veer aur naina ke beech mein anban hui... sirf tumhari wajah se...

Just then SD entered and Saw maan being harsh on Geet ,, She came to him and Shouted at him... Chodiye Maan... Geet ko... She peeled of Maan's hand and took geet into her arms... She supported Geet... She held her by her shoulders...

SD - yeh kya tarika hain Maan .. Geet se baat karne ka... kya aap apni tameez bhul rahe hain... ya yeh bhul rahe hain ki Geet kaun hai... hum yeh sab hamare ghar mein hargiz bardaash nahi karenge...

Maan didn't reply her and turned other side...

SD - geet bte aap theek haina... still Geet didn't say anything... her eyes are downcasted... lagta hain aap bohut thak gayi hain... aapne kya kiya aaj poora din aap apne doston se milne gaye na... hume kal zaroor batayiyega batayiyega,... abhi aap jaake aaram kijiye ga... hum aapke liye doodh bhejdenge...

She pushed Geet a little and Geet started with slow steps... she climbed step and went to her room...

Naina's Mom - Maaji aap nahi jaantii.. iss ladki ne kya kiya... meri bachi ko kitna rulaya...

SD - hum kabhi maanege nahii Geet ne aisa kuch kiya hain...

SD - Veer... aap batayiye kya hua...

Veer explained the happenings from morning... SD heard but didn't say anything...

Naina's Mom - ab batayiye maaji... kya kahengi aap...

SD - hum yehi kahenge ki yeh hamara ghar ki baat hain hum sambhal lenge...aap naina ko sambhala uske liye hamara shukriya... She joined her hands in front of her indirectly dismissing her...

Meera - Dadi... aap geet ki side kyun lerahi hain... Galati toh ki haina usne...

SD - hum kisi ke side nahi lerahe hain meera... humne sirf ek taraf ki baat suni... geet ko bhi apni baat kehne dijiye... tab pata chalega ki kaun sahi hain aur kauu galat...

Naina's Mom left from there annoyed...

She took few steps towards her room , she stopped a few steps ahead and said... Galati toh aapse bhi hui hain... aapne logo ne meera ko toh pooch liya... par kisi ne bhi geet ko phone karna zaroori nahi samjha.,.. agar phone karliya hota toh itna drama nahi hota... aur nahi usse itni baatein sunni padti... Khair hum thak gaye hain.. hum sone jaarahe hain...


Meera - Aap mane na maane Dadi... Galati toh geet ki hi hain...




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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update. Waiting for next update to know Geet 's POV . Feel very bad for that Maan shouted on her without hearing what she has to say.
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice part
maan scolded geet before every one
no one supported her
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Posted: 8 years ago
wondeerful updte...feeling sad for geet maan scolded geet without listning
anythng...
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi indu
nice update ..but yeh baat baad mein problem create kar sakti hai maneet ke relation mein ..maan scolded her in front of everyone ..didn't let her explain things from her side ..angel was with geet all were worried abt her ..but the words maan used for geet that with which right she took angel away was not correct ..meera blaming geet ab uski toh geet ko neecha dikhane ki aaddat ho gayi hai ..happy that dadimaa came there at right time ..

thanks for update
waiting for next
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