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Part # 54

Maan and geet were worried seeing a very stubborn angel... every one was trying to make her understand.. but she is adament... and it continued till the dinner time...

Angel - mujhe picnic pe jana hi hain... she said adamantly...

Veer was fed up with her and shouted... sab ke lad pyaar ne tumhe ziddi bana raha hai angel... main aakhri baar kehraha hoon.. tum nahi jaa rahi ho... samjhi... you are not going angel... and left from there leaving his dinner...

Naina - veerji... aap samjhayiye na veer ko... bachi hai school picnic pe jana chahti hain.. uske saare dost aur classmates jaarahe hain...

Maan - veer sahi hai naina.. uski baat mano aur angel ko samjhao... maan also said his decision and left the table...

Angel was expecting her bade papa would support her.. but when Maan didn't she ran to her room crying.. leaving the dinner table..

Naina looked at geet... geet nodded and naina left behind angel...Geet called maannn ... she called him from behind... He stopped and looked at her...aap kyun na kehrahi hai... usse jane dijiye na... bachi hai.. enjoy karegi...

Maan - geet angel ke liye decisions veer lega main nahi...

geet - par...

Maan just left from there, not wanting to argue infront of family...

Dadi - ab koi fayada nahi niana... yeh dono bhai aise hi hain... ek ki baat doosra support karega.. chahe woh galat ho ya sahi... tum jaanti hona... ab angel ko samjhao kisi bhi tarah...

Naina sighed and nodded ...

Later ...

Geet went to the room and closed the doors... she saw Maan standing in balcony and in deep thoughts... she went to him and hugged him from back... kya soch rahe hain...

Maan held her and pulled her more into him and said.. kuch nahi...

geet - nahi... kuch toh baat hai... boliye na...

Maan knew she will not leave so he shared - angel ke baare mein soch raha hoon...

Geet left him and walked to stand facing him... ek baat poochoon... maan nodded... Geet continued ... aapne mana kyun kiya maan... angel bachi hain... usse kyun in choti choti khushiyon se door karr rahe hain... Geet asked him seriously...

Maan - Geet.. angel ke liye kya acha hai aur kya nahi... woh veer ko ache se pata hai.. agar veer ne mana kiya toh kuch toh wajah hogi na...

Geet - aap veer se bade hain ... aap kyun nahi kehte usse... woh aapki baat ko na nahi kahenge...

Maan sighed... main jaanta hoon geet... veer meri baat ko na nahi kahega... lekin iska yeh matlab nahi hai ki main uske decisions mein interfere karoon...

Geet - yeh interference nahi hogi maan.. bas ek baar angel ko dekhiye... uska kitna mann karta hoga picnic pe jaane ke liye...

Maan - nahi geet... main veer k decision ke against nahi jaaoonga.. bas... wajah chahe jo bhi ho...

Geet - lekin unhone wajah nahi bataya aur angel se gussa bhi hogaye... aise toh uska masoom dil toot jayegi na...

Maan - woh abhi bachi hai .. aur veer angel ka pita hai.. veek ko achi tarah se pata hai angel ke liye kya acha hai aur kya nahi... aur main angel ko jaanta hoon usse achi tarah se... usse main manaloonga ... tum uski fikar mat karo... abhi toh tum... saamne jo hai uski socho ...

Geet - huh... kya... she looked around and said.. kaun hai yaha... koi nahi haina...

Maan placed his hand on his head and said... hey babaji.. mujhe yeh kaha se mili... kuch samajhti nahi hai...

Geet looked at him narrowing her eyes... thinking what he is saying... but maan in the next second lifted her up and said... madam.. this is my time and i don't want any interference...

Geet blushed and said... aap besharm horahe hai ...

Maan - toh kya hua.. apni biwi se sharam karunga toh bache kaise honge...

Geet turned red hearing is shameless talks... maaannn... she said slowly...

Maan - kyun nahi chahiye kya.. bache... he said with a passionate voice...

Geet didn't reply... Maan again asked her placing her on the bed... he went and closed the door.. locked it and came back.. but geet was still blushing... he joined her switching off the light...

Maan - bolona geet...

Geet didn't reply but just nodded her head hiding herself in his embrace ...

Maan - umm. bolo... kitne bache chahiye...

geet didnt reply... Maan said... mujhe na apne liye ek foot ball team chahiye... tum kya kehti ho...

Geet's eyes widened hearing his demand... she immediately sat up and said... kya main bache paida karne wali machine lagti hoon... mujhse nahi hoga itne bache paida karne.. mujhe bas do bache chahiye.. ek ladka aur ek ladki... samjhe aap.. isse aage ki sochna bhi mat... geet said pointing her finger at him... and maan is naughtly looking at her...with a big smile... as soon as she got what she said and geet thought she embarrassed herself... seeing her expressions maan burst out laughing...

Maan - main mazak karr raha tha geet... aur mujhe koi football team nahi chahiye... mujhe bhi sirf do bache chahiye... ek chota maan aur ek choti si pyaari si gudiya.. bilkul tumhari jaisi...

Geet smiled hearing his cute demand... and nodded her head... Maan continued... but abhi nahi... mujhe tumse bohut pyaar karna hai abhi... toh no interference at present...

and they continued to talk about their future.. kids and everything...

next morning ...Breakfast table...

Angel was as usual asking for permission... and geet looked at her.. she felt bad seeing angel like that.. but she couldn't go against maan's words.. Veer decided and there is no another word on that...

Geet - dadi... mujhe aapki ... she looked even at Maan saying him with her eyes that it is for him too...and said... permission chahiye...

Sd - kisliye beta...

Geet - dadi... mere saare friends milrahe hain... unhone outing plan kiya... ek din ka... kya main jaa sakti hoon... bohut din hogaye unse mile hue...

Sd - aap akeli jaayengi... kaha jaarahe hain...

Geet - haa dadi.. ghar se akeli jaaongi.. magar raaste mein friends se milungi... place kuch decide nahi hua.. mostly mall jaayenge... kuch time spend karenge.. lunch ke baad shayad film bhi ... aur dinner bhi unke saath hi karungi... 10 baje se pehle aajaoongi...

Geet - dadi plzz... shadi ke baad pehli baar milungi unse...geet said in a flow...

Everyone looked at her wide eyes... Geet got what she blurted out and closed her eyes... as meera is sitting there with them... she prayed .. babaji.. plz.. di ne yeh baat nahi suni ho...

but.. meera heard what she said...

meera - shhadi... kiski shaadi hui geet... tumhari...

geet mumbled... di... woh... mere dostonki shaadi hui... haan... geet patted herself... bach gayi babaji...

Meera - sab ki shaadi hogayi...

geet - na... nahi.. bas do ki hui... bakiyon ki nahi...

meera - tum nahi gayi unki shaadi mein...

geet - nahi... they are from other cities... so I couldn't attend... two of them are from south... unme se ek ki sgaadi abhi abhi hui... she moved here with her hubby... ussi ne plan banaya...

Meera looked ta her geet smlied... meera also forced a smile and started her bf...

Geet sighed in relief... she turned to dadi and said.. dadi... main jaaoon kya... she said in a pleading tone...

Sd - hume koi problem nahi hai geet.. aap maan se pooch lijiye...

Meera looked at sd... lekin dadi maan se kyun poochna...

Geet made a baby face... pata nahi aaj maine kis ka face dekha hai subah subah...aur kiska.. khud ka hi dekha hoga... isliye yeh sab ho rahi hai...

Maan thought dadi ne phasa diya... maan na bilkul bhi mat kehna.. kya pata aage koi bhi cheez poochegi ya nahi... tej ki baat yaad haina... maan remembered tej's words....

Sd - Meera.. Geet Maan ke yaha kaam karti hai.. toh boss se toh permission leni padegi na... she winked at geet... Geet sighed in relief... bach gaye aaj... babaji main aapk ke paas paidal chalke aaoongi.. aaj do do baar bach gayi main...

Sd - Maan aap kya kehte hain...

maan cleared his throat and said... tum kab jana chahti ho geet...

Geet looked at him.. he is so formal to her... she knew meera is there so he is pretending... she didnt like it... but she had no other go... she replied... Saturday...

Maan checked his appointments on his phone and said...I have a site visit that day... toh tumhe zyada kaam nahi hoga... so I think you can go...

Meera thought... so geet works with maan only... when maan has work geet has to be in office... I need to go to office once... Saturday will be perfect... Maan and Geet will not be there.. so I can go and see the things over there...

Dadi - waise hum bhi jana chahte hai apne dost se milne...

Geet - Dadi... aap bhi...

Dadi - kyun .. hum bhi matlab... kyun hum nahi jaa sakte kya.. apni saheli se milne... bohut samay hogaya hai unse mile hue... toh hum abhi jane ki soch rahe hain.. waise idea appka hi hai...

Naina - lekin kaun dadi..

Geet - aur kaun hosakta hain.. meri dadi se milne jarahi hain.. haina dadi...

SD - Haa.. hum gayatri se hi milna chahte hain...bohut din hogaye hain.. maan aap hamari ticket kara dijiye... sham ki flight ki ..

Maan - Ji dadi... main papaji ko bhi phone karleta hoon...

And once again Meera caught it... she said... Papaji... kaun Maan...

Geet thought... aaj ka din hi kharab hai... and she said.. papaji matlab mere papaji.. haina maan...

Maan - haan... mera matlab wahi tha... geet ke papaji... both of them looked at eachother... they sighned in relief when meera didnt pester them more...

Everyone left to their respective works...

On saturnday Geet left to meet her friends and Maan to the site visit which is outside Delhi... and veer to his meeting... Meera also made an excuse of going to mandir and left the mansion...

Angel was sad she missed to go to picnic that day... all her friends went to picnic on that day and she is left alone... she sat in and garden and was crying silently... as nobody was there to see her or play with her... ever her badi dadi left to meet pari's dadi... everyone went meet their froends.. but she is not allowed to go with her freinds... she thought of it more and cried even more...

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Nice update dear angle wants to go picnic but veer and Mann denied but geet as why Mann said angle to veer daughter he has right to decide what good for her
Geet left to meet her friends and daddimaa also angle left alone and silent cries