[ArDi OS] The Eternal Wings of Love - Page 2

my previous reply didn't get posted 😔 I very much loved the concept of different timelines. Ardi were incomplete without each other. beautifully written!

Shyam, I really loved how you started the story. Its just fantastic. Loved your idea. 👏

One thing I forgot to mention -- the only characters whose name changes are going to be ArDi, otherwise the Pandavas' names will be the same, Kunti's name will be the same, Drau's family members will be the same.

i swear this os is a pure beauty.. dont. ever stop writing this okay ?? its everything i would've possibly dreamed about them 😳 with madhav thrown into the mix this can create havoc 😆

What an amazing concept...three different time spans...
and looks like u have cast the POI Panchali...she could cook!!😊
And Madhav/Govind at his mischievous best...
Looking forward to reading more

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

ooohhh govind!!!! 🤣
this is the best treat shyaam bhai!!! 👏

now i am officially your devotee!! 😉

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

What an amazing concept...three different time spans...
and looks like u have cast the POI Panchali...she could cook!!😊
And Madhav/Govind at his mischievous best...
Looking forward to reading more

Originally posted by: naq5

i dint know panchali i mean the epic one dint know cooking😕 is it true?

Originally posted by: naq5

i dint know panchali i mean the epic one dint know cooking😕 is it true?

Ofcourse my Draupadi knew cooking... 😳