Mohan-Nanhi OS part 2 on pg 3 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was just wonderful. Too emotional u made me cry. Mohan also suffered alot 😭 he wishing chawani was just too good hats off to u πŸ‘
u know i always wanted to find something like this in the show and u pen it down in such a beatiful way . Too good πŸ‘ πŸ‘
continue soon and thanks for the pm πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

This was just wonderful. Too emotional u made me cry. Mohan also suffered alot 😭 he wishing chawani was just too good hats off to u πŸ‘
u know i always wanted to find something like this in the show and u pen it down in such a beatiful way . Too good πŸ‘ πŸ‘
continue soon and thanks for the pm πŸ˜ƒ

Thank u so much commenting and all ur appreciating words. Yes, mohan too suffered a lot. It was obvious. But i thought to give it another dimension and showed mohan's guilt too. I'm glad u guys liked it. And sorry to say, but this is a os. I wanted to write nanhi's pov. But i wrote mohan's pov too as u guys wanted it. But i'll surely pm u, if i wrote any other nbt work. Thanks again.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this was wonderful .πŸ˜ƒ
ya , a little bit long but nice , cute and emotional .πŸ˜ƒ
thanks for the pm .
and sorry for late comment . i was off IF for a long time so did not see your pm.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice piece of writing yet again. Thanks for the pm. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dinazz

this was wonderful .πŸ˜ƒ

ya , a little bit long but nice , cute and emotional .πŸ˜ƒ
thanks for the pm .
and sorry for late comment . i was off IF for a long time so did not see your pm.

oh, don't be sorry. It's completely fine and thank you so much for commenting. I'm glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shayranahui.

Nice piece of writing yet again. Thanks for the pm. :)

thanks for the comment. i'm glad u liked it.😊
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