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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ddsoaps

Awww May that was so so beautifully written...

Al in their characters yet letting their guard down when need be...

Loved the office scene between Vik and Jiya and Shobha.


well done

Thanks a lot DDπŸ€—
i actually want to see Vikram and Jiya laugh and play together in the showπŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

WOw wow !! Too beautiful!πŸ˜³πŸ‘

Loved it to core.
Loved your writing style!
Vikram and Jiya are limits! 🀣
Loved Jiya's copying Vikram!! πŸ˜†
God... the OS was too good! ⭐️

Thanks Nancy πŸ˜ƒ
hehe, yeaah, Jiya is one real naughty girlπŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: shanti05

May you have pen down beautifully πŸ‘ !!
I had a smile when Jiyu was with Vikram he is her superman & she is his cute sutli bomb

That specs imitation was rocking πŸ‘
Great work !!

Thank you very much Shanti! πŸ€—Glad you liked jiya-Vikram scene😳 superman to the rescueπŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

Thanks Nancy πŸ˜ƒ
hehe, yeaah, Jiya is one real naughty girlπŸ˜›

Welcome !
I love your writings. Read 3 works by you today. Great Job! Star
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww what a lovely story 😳 .. Loved the Jiya-Vikram bonding u described in your story especially the part where Vikram brings her in his office and then acts like a dotting father which even pleasantly shocks Shobha and then she finally discovers the real man in Vikram who is so loving and caring 😳 .. I so want such a scenario in future too once Shobha and Samarth separate .. really want Shobha to think of Vikram and hv a smile on her face 😳

Wonderfully written dear πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

Welcome !

I love your writings. Read 3 works by you today. Great Job! ⭐️


Thanks a lot again! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Awww what a lovely story 😳 .. Loved the Jiya-Vikram bonding u described in your story especially the part where Vikram brings her in his office and then acts like a dotting father which even pleasantly shocks Shobha and then she finally discovers the real man in Vikram who is so loving and caring 😳 .. I so want such a scenario in future too once Shobha and Samarth separate .. really want Shobha to think of Vikram and hv a smile on her face 😳

Wonderfully written dear πŸ‘πŸ‘

Glad you liked it Jyoti! 😊 Thank you very much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Dear
Kindly change the last scene and make her accept him and show their happy living
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