Arshi 's And he came... will update on 12th of dec

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi people... i'm starting this new thread as my previous one has been locked since i dissaapeared again ðŸ˜³ irresponsible i know but i just couldnt get the time.. anyways in this thread i'll give the future parts i.e from part 6 will come in this thread...

Introduction:

Kushi saves a baby. decides to be its mother. but when the child's father comes into the picture her lives changes forever...

INDEX:

Prologue and part 1 to part 5:  Thread I

Part 6 pg 3

Part 7 pg 9

for pm pls buddy arthi_r,


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story.cont soon
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rohinid

Awesome story.cont soon
Update soon

thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi..

This is the teaser:

App kaha gaye they mujhe chod kar?? She asked softly to the sleeping baby.

Pata hai mumma kitni parishan thi? Mene baby ko kitna miss kiya malum hai?  Aur kya mere mannu ne miss kiya mujhe?  She asked painfully.

Kya papa ne miss kiya mumma ko?  Kushi asked again but this time she couldn't stop the tears sliding from her eyes.  It was too painful, the thought of losing both of them, the thought of them not loving her as she did.  That is when she understood something, the pain she felt, the misery she lived when she realised he dint respect or love her. The reason why she blasted at him she now understood.  She was in love with Arnav.  She loved him and with her words she was about to lose him and Abhi forever. 

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This is the teaser..

I'll update this weekend.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on new thread..
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice teaser
Congrats for the new thread
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is really nice of you to continue this story, but I really feel bad for Khushi in this story. She was craving for LOVE and AFFECTION, she got attached to baby ADHINAV and all it took was a loos of control and attraction one night and Arnav really made a MESS out of her life and mader her feel like a wh*** and treated her like one too and poor girl is now left with NOTHING. To top this she ran into trouble with customs officers...is ARNAV involved in UNDERWORLD or SMUGGLING..?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for the new thread
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats on  new thread
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats 4 d new thread...
nice teaser...
loved it...😊