Tumhara saath chaey - A ZAYA OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello buddies!
Hw is everyone doing?! I hope all r good n going mast as our BI is going!! 😊
Well I hope u guys remember me, I m gonna post my 3rd work, an OS again!! I m too much into OS coz as I said in my previous posts, I m quiet busy in studying, so no tym guys!! Bt soon I ll come up wid FF,SS and more!!!

So dis 3rd work of mine is abut current track, were zain wants aliya to support in one month for nt coming close to each other! So in dis OS, only zain is dere , as he is writing his feelings n a note for his MEZ as he is nt able to express infront of her due to tension!!
So jst read n say me hw is it...here u ppl go!!


Tumhein kaise samhjou, mera tum sey dour rehna utna hey mushkil or takleef deh hai jitna tumharay liye MEZ! MEZ tum nahi janti mera dil kitna karta hai tumhein choun, tumhein apni bahou mein qaid karlou, apnay aap ko tumharay jism sey istarah saath jor lou kay koi alag na kar sakey or hum so called "two souls, one body" hoon. Pata hai MEZ jab tumhein raat mein dekhta hoon mujhe sey dour soye huvey tou dil karta hai abhi saari bandishein tor dou or tumhein apnay aap mein ghoom karlou. Or jab tumhein subah dekhta hoon, tou woh morning kiss ki craving hoti hai kay buss, likn dar kay beht jata hoon... I M SORRY PRINCESS!!!
Pata nahi yeh sab bandishein or mushkilain kab jaye ghi hamri zindagi sey. MEZ sirf baat yeh hai meray mein himat nahi hai tumhein wapis kohnay ki, mein tum sey dour janay ka souch bhi nahi sakta. Jab souchta hoon tou meri rohu (soul) kanapnay (shivering) lagti hai!!! Sirf 1 month ka saath chaey, mein janta hoon yeh sab jhooth hai balaye waigrah, likn sahi pouchou mein dar gya hoon, tumhein wapis kohnay ka koi risk nahi lay sakta!!! Mein kisi ko mouka nahi dena chahta kay koi hum dono ko alag karey. Bus sirf 1 month ka saath dou please!! Or mujhey pata hai tum zaroor saath doh ghi. Jaise mein apni aliya ko kisi takleef mein nahi dekh sakta, isi tarah meri aliya bhi apnay zain ko takleef mein nahi dekh sakthi or mujhey yakeen hai is baat ka. Tum yeh meri sab sey bari strength or kamzori ho. Prince ko apni princess ka saath chaey!!!!!

Or haan princess mera yeh tum sey wada hai 1 month kay baad jo tum chahou ghi wohi hoga, balkey meinay soucha hai hum kahi dour jaye ghay apna honeymoon mananay takay koi bhi hmaray beech mein na aye or hum woh keemti pal sirf aik dosray kay saath ghuzar sakay akeley. Jahan na koi bandish ho, na koi gila, bus sirf pyar yeh pyar hoga!!! Yeh wada hai zain abdullah/kitkit ka apni zindagi or pyar aliya zain abdullah/MEZ/MKB sey!!!!
PRINCE AND PRINCESS LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!!! 😊😳


So hw was it guys?! Little emotional one ..ryt!!!
Ignore all grammar, spelling and other mistakes!!!

Please do read n give yur feedback!! (Negative or positive)
Chappals r allowed!!! πŸ˜†

Keep watching BI!!
keep loving HARSHIKA!!! 😳❀️
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iman_harshika thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Only 2 likes n no comments!!! πŸ˜•
Was it dat bad?!! 😭
If it is I dont mind, give me feedback!! I want know were I went wrong!! I m in my nursery class of writing fictions!!

Thanks to those who lyked!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was cute..
Is it 2 soul 1 body??
Last part was lovely!

P.s. I forgot to comment! Sorry dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaya.harshika

It was cute..

Is it 2 soul 1 body??
Last part was lovely!

P.s. I forgot to comment! Sorry dear..

Thank u!!
Yes it is 2 souls, 1 body!! Typing mistake!!! Sorry!

Its ok dear!!! Yur comments give me more confident to write more!! So keep doing dear!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update dear😳, loved it❀️
Little emotional, felt really bad for zaya,
Keep writing!!
I will wait for more of ur works dearπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Beautiful update dear😳, loved it❀️

Little emotional, felt really bad for zaya,
Keep writing!!
I will wait for more of ur works dearπŸ˜‰

Thanks dear!! :)
Keep liking n commenting, I ll get more confident to write on!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: iman_harshika

Thanks dear!! :)
Keep liking n commenting, I ll get more confident to write on!! 😊

Pakka and I'm sure, u r gonna rock..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update !!
Very beautifully written :)
Continue writing more !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks dear!!
One of the best writer of the forum lyked my small work, its a pleasure for me!! Thanks alott!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing update !!
Very beautifully written :)
Continue writing more !!

Thanks dear!!!
Yes I ll continue to write more!! Jst need yur support n encouragement!!! 😊
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