~||ZaYa SS-Love is in the air||~ Part two updated on page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey ZaYanatics!!
I am back with another story but this time it is not going to have a sad ending.๐Ÿ˜›
This is the first time I am writing a SS.
And I am not a writer so please ignore the mistakes.๐Ÿ˜Š

The characters are almost same but situation is different.
Shabana is not in the story, she is dead.๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜†
Suri and Usman have only two sons Barkat is not there.
I hope u all don't throw rotten eggs on me for this story.๐Ÿ˜†

-Prologue-

Zain's POV

"Mom please I don't want to go to Bhopa".
I tried to explain her that I don't want to go to Bhopal but she was not in a mood to listen. Today Mom came up with a stupid idea that we need to have some "family sharing time".She patiently explained me that spending preplanned quality time together as a family would encourage love, mutual respect and bonding. She said that it had been a long time after Shabana's death we ever went to Bhopal.

I patiently explained her that she should stop watching all those daily soaps on colors. After mom had started watching that daily soaps she has started acting weird. Anyways, Now I just have to convince her that I don't want to go to Bhopal and meet that idiot Aliya. But mom was acting like she has become deaf she was not listening only.

"Mom, I don't want to go there u all go I will stay here only", I protested.

"Zain what's your problem Usman sahib has clearly said that everyone has to go"

"But mom..."

" I don't want to hear anything Zain u r coming with us and that's final and if u want Rizwan can also come with us"

"Okk mom I lose u win...I am coming with u all"

After protesting so much I had to agree to go with them. Mom said that we will leave today in the evening. I don't have any problem with Ayat and phoopa but Aliya...I don't like her .I don't know why dad likes her so much, aisa kya hai us Mkb mein...huh..!! Anyways, I am happy that Rizwan is coming with me. Now Allah only knows Bhopal mein kya hoga.

Ps: If I will get good reviews then only I will continue with my torture๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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-Character Sketches-

Zain Usman Abdullah:
Age: 24
He is a good looking young man .Son of Usman Abdullah. Has just returned from London. He is a party person and loves to flirt with girls. Possessive about his loved ones.

Aliya Gulam Haider:
Age: 22
She is daughter of Ghulam haider. Her mother died few years ago. She is very kind to everyone. She keeps dreaming about her dream boy but pretends to hate the feeling of love.

Usman Abdullah:
Owner of Barkat Royale. Loves his family a lot. Shares a great bond with her neice, Aliya.

Suraiya Abdullah:
A brilliant cook. Loves her family a lot. Wants Zain to marry a girl who can handle him well.

Gulam Haider:
A Business tycoon. Loves his both the daughters very much. Shares great bond with his brother in law Usman.

Ayat Ghulam Haider: Age :20 Aliya's small sister. A cute and bubbly girl. Misses her mother very much. Thinks Aliya and Zain can make a great pair together. Later falls for Rizwan.

Rizwan Malik: Age :22 Zain's best friend and brother of Nafeesa fahad Abdullah. Good by heart. Later fall's for Ayat.

Note : Fahad, Nafeesa, Shazia and Gauhar are the same as in the show.

Edited by craziness05 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue bachha
I loved it
Shabhana ko maar diya ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
Lol suri should stop seeing daily soaps on colors ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Jaldi jaldi continue karo
Edited by anaghazaya - 10 years ago
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Unressed
Did I take ur index space ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
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-Index-

Beginnings -Page 8
Family sharing time and Campfire-Page 15
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Awesome prologue bachha

I loved it
Shabhana ko maar diya ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
Lol suri should stop seeing daily soaps on colors ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Jaldi jaldi continue karo

Atleast koi toh comment kiya๐Ÿ˜†
Thanxx Anagha
Yes Shabana is not in my story๐Ÿ˜ˆ because I hate her๐Ÿ˜†
Suri can't because she habitual๐Ÿ˜†
Agar ache reviews mie toh hi continue karungi otherwise people will throw their heels๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Unressed

Did I take ur index space ๐Ÿ˜›

Yes gandi bachi๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: craziness05

Yes gandi bachi๐Ÿ˜†

lol๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: craziness05

Yes gandi bachi๐Ÿ˜†

cholly ๐Ÿ˜›
do u want me to update ur index ??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

awesome prolouge...
loved it..
continue soon

Thanxx priya๐Ÿ˜ณ
If no one throws their heels then I will surely continue๐Ÿ˜†
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