||ZaYa OS-Eternal love||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello everyone this is the first time I am writing a OS. And it is completely crap read your own risk๐Ÿ˜† After reading this please don't kill me.๐Ÿ˜›

Eternal Love

The sun's ray peeped in through the curtains of the dorm. Aliya shifted in her sleep , a small pout on her lip , as the light disturbed her sleep.

She groaned as somebody pulled the curtain away allowing the light to enter.
"Pull the curtain back!" , she heard a known voice.
"Good morning mez". She heard the same voice and looked at him.

She lazily sat rubbing my eyes.

"Good morning Zain!".

"How come you woke up so early?"

"Today we are going on a date na", he smiled and said.

"Yes we are going.

"So I was excited that's why I woke up early, now hurry up get ready we have to go"

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She got ready and went out. Zain was already waiting her outside the house, he was constantly looking at his watch. Aliya saw him and smiled.

"Sorry I am late again".

"It's okk", he said and sat on the bike.

Aliya sat at the back and held him tightly. They were speeding on 100 mph. Aliya got worried and afaid.

"Slow down, I'm scared.

"No this is fun".

"No it's not. It's too scary please slow dowm!"

"Then tell u love me and give me a hug"

"Fine, I love u", she says and hugs him.

"Can u take the helmet off and put on it's bugging me.

Aliya nodded and took the helmet. After sometime their bike crashed into a building because of break failure.

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Both of them were admitted to the hospital. Doctors were not able to save Zain and he died. Luckily, Aliya was saved.

The truth was that halfway Zain realized that his breaks are broken, but he did not wanted to let Aliya know this.

Instead he wanted her to say I love u for the last time and feel her hug for the last time.When Aliya came to know that Zain is no more she was very disturbed.

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He was gone. He had gone away from Aliya's life.
He thought by risking his life he will save her. But he was wrong. Aliya never came to know about his sacrifice.
After his death Aliya's life twisted.She never smiled nor slept peacefully after that day.

The End.

So how was it?? Maine pehle hi bola tha it's crap. All jootas and chappals are welcomed.๐Ÿ˜†

Ps :Not proof read please ignore the typos.๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
unres..
a beautiful update dear...
good try...
keep writing...
u made zain die and let aliya live..u made me cry...
next time i want the best of u..
iss time maaf kiya๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Edited by iluvuzaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok...should I cry or should I laugh๐Ÿ˜†...that is what I am thinking??
Cry---KYA YAAR ZAIN ko MAAR diya...isse bura AUR KYA ho SAKTA hai...๐Ÿ˜ญ

Laugh---tu TOH cvs se bhi fast train NIKLI YAAR...๐Ÿ˜†...ek hi shot sab khatam...๐Ÿ˜†

Waise I loved it...short and sweet...but very painful...waise bhi...ZAIN ABDULLAH TOH Marne se NAHI darta right๐Ÿ˜Ž??

Really nice...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It wasn't crap Astha but you made me cry so next time please bring a smile for me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tell me honestly tune yeh kaha se tepa?
Maine isse kahi aur bhi pada hai...par fir bhi tarif toh karni padegi na?
Acha hai bahut achaa hai BABA BI kush hua!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's really good astha
Keep writing more
Zain ko tune maar diya but yeh tumhara first time hai isleye maf kiya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mera-Hi-Jalwa-

Tell me honestly tune yeh kaha se tepa?

Maine isse kahi aur bhi pada hai...par fir bhi tarif toh karni padegi na?
Acha hai bahut achaa hai BABA BI kush hua!!!

even I have read something like this b4
But aastha u have written Really well
Edited by anaghazaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Astha tumhe kya mila mujhe rula ke
Momma where are you
Iam crying ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Btw well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

Res
unres..
a beautiful update dear...
good try...
keep writing...
u made zain die and let aliya live..u made me cry...
next time i want the best of u..
iss time maaf kiya๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Thanxx priya๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aisa mat bol ki maine zain ko maar diya I feel bad
Aww...sorry to make u cry
maaf karne ke liye shukriya๐Ÿ˜†
I will try ki next time tujhe hasu๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update astha ... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ very well written bt it was emotional ya ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Edited by jazly_zayafan - 10 years ago
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