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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
it was not boring at all...Pia ko mein 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
well guyz, here u go. part 10.

Part 10

Bani was walking back from the caf when four guyz started to follow her. She started to get tense as the guyz were whistling. They were trying to hold her hand but bani started running as fast as she could. She didn't see where she was going and she bumped into someone. (guess who?)

J: Bani what happened? Why are u crying? Bani bumped into none other than jai. She just started crying since she was so scared. She rested her head on jai's chest as she sobbed and jai was trying to console her even though he doesn't no what is happening.

J: bani, what happened?

B: voh…

J: haan.

B: some…guyz…were…chasing…me. Anger flared up in jai at once.

J in a quiet but in a gangry tone: who the hell were they?

B: i…don't…no… they…started…following…me… Jai didn't want to leave bani in this condition, so he didn't bother looking for those guyz. He stood there hugging bani and consoling her. Bani was just too scared to pay attention to anything. Both of them stood there for several minutes in the silence.

Then u see pia, standing behind them two. Clear jelousy was seen from her face. She was crumpling some papers in her hand. She stared at the lovely couple for a few minutes and then walked off.

Jai and Bani drive back to the Walia mansion in silence. Bani enters the house to find that it is awfully quiet. When she asks tony, he informs her that everyone went to a far away temple and will be returning tomorrow morning. Bani makes her way to her room. She showers and starts reading a book to relax herself.

KNOCK KNOCK

B: come in

Tony: madam when would u like to have dinner?

B: did mr.walia eat tony?

T: not yet ma'am.

B: I am not hungry tony. I won't eat dinner.

T: okay ma'am.

B: and where is mr.walia?

T: he is in his study ma'am.

B: okay

T: anything else ma'am?

B: no tony. And tony leaves. Bani then makes her way to Jai's study, only to be anstonished. There she saw PIA hugging Jai from behind.

hope u liked it.

Preview: there will be a repeat of 19 june in one or two episodes. And, NO pia will not be in
Bani's place.

I hope this cheers u up from what is happening in KS right now.

au revoir!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
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awwwwwwwww the hug scene was cute 😳
Pia go away 😡
I hope Bani doesn't leave but she hears what Mr. Walia has to say to Pia 😡
can't wait to read the next part 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
that was great part.too good.simply superb.plz cont soon.cant wait to read next parts. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
oh yay.. effin pia hugging jai 😡 .. i like d idea of june 19th.. thank god its not pia.. cuz then its not june 19th.. 😳 that was greattttt.. can't wait fo d nxt part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
when are you posting your part 11
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
poor Jay can't get away from this psycho Pia 😡can't wait for next update 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
i hope bani is gonna beat pia with a belan for hugging jai. Just can't wait for next part. Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
thx for the comments guyz. and just so u no i am not good at writing such kind of parts. so sry if i disappinted u in any way.

part 11

Bani assumes something else and just walks away with tears in her eyes.
B talking to herself: in these four years I thought I did an injustice to Mr.walia by staying away from him. But today I understood that it was him who did injustice to me again. She then pauses and thinks: but I was never his, for him to betray me again. Ever since I came here, I thought mr.walia was mine, but no. he became someone elses. Tears strolled down bani's cheeks as she made her way back to her room.

Meanwhile, back at the study…

J pushing pia off: pia what the hell is wrong with u?

P: nothing is wrong with me mr.walia

J: stop behaving like this.

P: I love u mr.walia. I realized I did the biggest mistake fo my life by running away with pushkar. I am sry mr.walia. but now, I want to rectify that mistake.

J: too late pia.

P: no it is not mr.walia. We still could become one.

J: SHUT UP PIA! Stop playing games

P: no, u r the one playing games

J: just go from here pia. I don't want to even see ur face.

P: why mr.walia. these four years when di was in America, I was the one who stood with u. taking care of u and everything. And today, when di comes back u just walk away from me. Today, I want to give u what my di couldn't give u. Jai was disgusted.

J: Get lost pia. And u no what, UR di gave me EVERYTHING where as u couldn't give me ANYTHING but pain. And today u r decieveing ur OWN di. When U did a mistake, ur di had to pay the price for. Just because U ran away with pushkar, bani had to put up with my hatred and anger. And the poor thing didn't even do anything. For ur senseless mistake, bani put up with everything. But in return, she didn't say anything. Instead she got u married with ur so called love pushkar. She went against everyone and everything. AND TODAY, u come back to me pia. U r so disgusting. But I do thank u for the one mistake u did. THANK GOD I didn't get married to u. god probably gave me the best gift by getting me married to bani. When u left me with so much pain, bani was the one who showered me with so much love that I forgot my hurt and anger. Jai then walked towards the door. He then turned back to pia and said: u no what pia, if it hadn't been for bani, I would have destroyed u by now. its only because of her that I forgave u. And with that jai walked out of the room.


As jai walked out of his study, he met with tony, who asked him when he wants his dinner. Jai asks about bani, to which tony replies that she isn't hungry so she didn't eat her dinner. Jai then walked into bani's room to ask her why she wasn't hungry, but he found her staring at the moon and crying. (doesn't it ring a bell)

J: bani, why r u so upset? What happened? Bani doesn't respond.

J: bani, tell me what happened? Bani just turns away from jai so that her back is towards jai. Jai quietly wlkas in front of her and asks her again.

B suddenly in an angry tone: nothing happened mr.walia. she pauses and continues: I thought nothing has changed in these four years, but only today did I realize that everything changed. Relations and importances changed. Now, there are new and more important relationships for u, mr.walia. Jai was totally confused.

J: what do u mean Bani?

B: I mean that I was a fool to believe that u love me. Jai was totally lost.

J: Bani, I do love you. U mean more than the world to me.

B: NO! I don't mean anything to you. I am still the same simple girl from mt.abu who once came and asked your help. I don't mean anything in your world or life.

J: says who bani? You are my life and world.

B: It doesn't seem so Mr.Walia. Someone else seems to fit perfectly in your world.

J: WHO?

B: PIA!!!! Now, everything made sense to Jai. Bani probably saw pia hugging him and imagined all sorts of things. Jai just smiled at Bani's anger.

B: Whats so funny mr.walia? But jai just continued to smile. Bani got really irritated and said: and I cannot stay here one minute; I am leaving. And bani turned to the door but Jai caught her hand.

J: Bani listen to me.

B: there is nothing left to listen mr.walia.

J: u have to listen bani. There can't be anymore misunderstandings between us. And jai then proceeded to tell bani everything pia said and what he said and etc. By the end, bani cooled down.

J: that's what actually happened Bani. Both of them kept quiet for a few seconds. Jai then walked towards bani and kissed her on the forehead.

J softly in her ear: tonite, I want us to unite forever… and ahem, Jai kisses her cheeks and then on the lips… and then what happened next, I will leave it up to u.

hope u liked it.

au revoir!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
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vah kya dialogues tha Jai ka, he should have smacked Pia 😡
halia another June19th 😳 you should have Jai tie Mangalsuit around her neck and put sinndoor in her maang
plz write soon
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